mjht revisited 4(part 34-page 80)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi! back after a while - been wanting to write about the pregnancy and nupur part almost in continuation but didnt as i was busy falling for hitler didi. but the mayur magic doesnt let go of you , saw an old episode of the drama- when mayank tries to corner nupur into realisisng her feelings and the whole gamut of feelings just come back.

so here it is - an attempt at the pregnancy track.
and can anyone reading it let me also know if you want it continued -its a long time since mjht ended.
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PART 1 - page 1
PART 2 - page 4
PART 3 -page 6
PART4 -page 8
PART 5-page 11
PART 6- page 13
PART 7-page 15
PART 8-page 17
PART 9-page20
PART 10- page 22
PART 11-page 25
PART 12- page 27
PART 13-page 29
PART 14- page 31
PART 15-page 33
PART 16- page 35
PART 17- page 37
PART 18- page 39
PART 19- page 41
PART 20-page
PART 21- page 46
PART 22-page 49
PART 23-page 53
PART 24-page 55
PART 25-page57
PART 26-page 60
PART 27- page 61
PART 28-page 64
PART 29-page 69
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 1


Background- nupurs back after 3yrs, in college, samrat and gunjan just got engaged and their wedding preparations are about to start.

Mayank stopped the car ," tum bhi na ajeeb ho. Pata nahin kyun tumhe yahaan utarna hain. Main tumhe gunjan ke ghar tak chodke jaasaktha hoon. Itna bhi late nahin hua hain."

nupur smiled and picking up her bag, " its okay mayank. Yahin tho hain. Main road cross karke chali jaaoongi" and stroking his cheek, opened the door and got down. He waved with a smile on his face and watched as she crossed the road and disappeared in the side lane.

"mayank sharma tujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki kuch baat hain jiske baare tu kuch nahin jaantha?pechle 2 weeks se kuch ajeeb sa behave karrahi hain . Us din behosh bhi hui phir bhi doctor ke paas jaane se mana kar diya "

hitting the side of his head with his hand, " cmon mayank, maybe exams ke liye itna padhai ki thi tho kuch tired hogayi hogi..." and smiling," usko tho itna padne ki aadat bhi nahin hain. And abhi abhi tho samrat aur gunjan ka engagement hua hain tho un dono ko kitna baatein karni hogi. Relax " and starting the car," and chalo kaam ke liye."

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Nupur on the road , walking up and down in front of a pharmacy shop. Finally , she entered it praying to god.

"ji kya chahiye?" the boy in pharmacy

"woh..." she looked at him flustered while someoen else came in and asked for something and took it and went out. The boy looked back at her questioningly.

" mujhe pregnancy kit ..."

the boy turned without any expression and taking one placed it in front of her saying," sau rs"

nupur placed the money on the counter and picked up the cover saying," meri shaadi hoke chaar saal hogaya hain. "

the boy looked at her confused," tho ? Main kya karoon?"

"kuch nahin. Bas aise hi bata rahin thi." and walked out leaving that boy shaking his head at her.

As she took the kit out of the cover to place it inside her bag, the paper fell out. She walked on without realising it.

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samrat in his car turning towards gunjans place saw nupur coming out of the pharmacy hurriedly.

"nupur? Yeh yahaan chori chori kya kar rahin hain" and out of the car, he walked nearer.

"ji kya chahiye?" the boy

"kuch nahin."

"tho yahaan kyun khade ho?"

"yeh jo ladki abhi abhi yahaan se gayi ..wo(pointing to nupur walking at some distance) ...wo yahaan kyun aayi thi?"

"achha wo? Pregnancy kit lene. Aur bolke gayi ki wo shaadi shuda hain. Wo paper bhi giraya . Ab mujhiko clean karna padega." and picked up the paper .

Samrat s face broke into a huge grin, from ear to ear.

"kya???" and hugged the boy simultaneously snatching the paper from his hands.

"oye" the boy in irritation," aapka hain kya?"

"arre nahin nahin , wo tho meri dost hain. Chalo thanks. " and ran out. The boy shook his head.

Dia and Uday walking on the footpath saw samrat running towards his car.

"sam" "sammy"

"suna nahin. Yeh itna jaldi kahaan jaa rahaan hain? "

"aur yeh dekho dids yeh giraake chala gaya ." uday picked up the paper from outside the shop.

Dia looked at it , read it and looked back at samrat who had already left in the car.

"kya hain?"

"pregnanacy kit?" dia in surprise.

"kya? Sam pregnant hain?" uday in the typical uday style.

Realisation dawned on both their faces "gunjan?"

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please let me know whether to continue or not- thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The first expression on my face was...
a sweet smile...
i just loved each and every part of your .. ff..
and yes..
welcome back...

very very nice update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it 😃 glad u r bk! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome back ...kya kare mayur magic hai hi aisa ...sayad .hi kabhi bhul pao...

and about update loved it ..

again confusion gunjan pregnency ..great ...best of luck ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update plzz continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ive just thought abt ur ff's a few days back & here u are with a new one...awesomeee...loved the starting...do pm me whenever u update...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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o god
what a surprise dear...
and i luveddd it
great
now do write soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh wao thts so gr8 to cya back
pls cont soon
it was soo good, uday is uday
lovly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start with total mjht style
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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