ArHi FF: Highway to hell-3, last Ch. pg 89

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Read al parts together. .
Omg its freaking goooddd. . . .
Loved all. . .

Nd m a tamilian too. . .
Instead of thaali its naaarth indian mangalsutra . . I loved it. .

Nita was gone i dint expect tat 😭

Bt khushi ws preggy n had twins . . I dint expect tat too😃

I too felt aadit n anju selfish. . Bt m ok wit it nw. .
Helo hi bye bye was nt tr al of a sudden r i missed her. .😛

Its more lovely n adorable to get showered wit limitless love from others than from d ones who cal themselves to b relations. .
I appreciate tat. .

Malli, being my fav flower nxt to rose , i loved ts malli too. .

Nd evry1 are awesum here. . A big bear hug to al. .
I wud love to receive pms fo ur future wrk. .
Thnks to rasgulla 4 recommendg me ths..
Superb ! !

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Archana

@Archu61

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

This s is one of my favorites stories ever your created a masterpiece ,if they make a script of this you be a winner ,looking fwd to more if your still on IF as lots of talented writers have left

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Loved the story. Its got everything from fun, kick ass action, death threats no matter how futile, intense emotions to romance. It was love at first read with Ms Gupta and her FAN club. As of the Gupta and the Raizada family same old same old, react without thought and then regret it and also expect to be forgiven for it. Coming to the relationship that Khushi and Arnav share, it was really surprising how she was willing to give him, them another chance, while she didn't want anything to do with her family and the raizadas until she was made aware of buaji's condition. Loved Arnav going jerry maguire on Khushi and her kids and Aadit going all Romeo on Anju. Just loved the kids. Now coming to the hatred that Khushi feels for Anjali, it would be extremely cheeky of me to say this and that too after reading the whole story that I had always felt that this was probably due to the fact that she had everything that Khushi ever wanted a loving,protective family & Arnav. Had tears in my eyes while reading of the ordeal that she had to deal with all on her own. Loved how you gave Arnav a second to right his wrongs by helping Malli. Loved their wedding and the not so happily ever after. God, did Nita have to die???, such a tiny baby...!!!

Love,

Anjali.

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Lovely FF !!!!! I loved chap 30 specially why ? because Khushi gives it to Anjali in her face which is Anjali's reality. I just wished she would not be forgiven so fast. I wish Arnav also had given Anjali a hard time.

The developments of Lavanya, Malena were lovely. PaYash seemed to have a spin for a change. Minnie a lovely nic name. The groups FAN's Adorable.

I loved Khushi's character in your FF BAS bol diya. Had, Still & Will continue to hate Anjali a failure in all her roles.

Funny I did not feel bad at all that Buaji died. Felt horrible when Nita died. Mami was not really a pivotal aspect pretty glad about that.

I was recommended to read this FF because I Despise Anjali & LOVE strong KHUSHI.

Is a sequel to this FF possible ? That is how much I love this FF.

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

I had read some first few chapters of this ff and now again found it to read rest...awesome dear..

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Cathy25

@Cathy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Hi vidhya.

Would love to commend you on a fabulous ff. it was a thoroughly entertaining read. this coming from a 'non ipk-the show fan'. it was a lovely story to read on its own. lovely portrayal of almost all human emotions in your ff. it was emotional, funny, happy, all rolled into one. loved the way you took the road less travelled, and there was nothing overtly predicatable in your ff. once again, great read. read it at a stretch, in less than 2 days.

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Cathy25

@Cathy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

umm, wait! did i miss something? why are all comments above talking of nita dying? is there an epilogue I missed? or did you change the ending on page 89? 😕

pls reply.

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: Ben25
umm, wait! did i miss something? why are all comments above talking of nita dying? is there an epilogue I missed? or did you change the ending on page 89? 😕

pls reply.

I changed the ending- just yesterday actually. Changed my mind about Nita.

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

You changed the ending :)

Didn't know you were one for happy endings too!

When the last chapter was posted for the first time, I was a tad bit sad, that Nita died due to cancer but this feels much much better. Yeah, winning against cancer and a complete happy ending can make anyone happy!

Thanks Maxine :)

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nlr_nlr

@nlr_nlr

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#730

One of the most brilliant FF I have read on IF,

The characters from inception to conclusion was simply fantastic. Khushi was real to me, Loved her through it all. Her strength, her friends and her identity- simple fearless after such turmoil.

Mickey and his partner, well written portions. Again friendship easing between the characters;

Through the FF, I had certainly forgotten the series and concentrated on your version of the characters. The whole scene at the airport where he just assumes his journey without an invitation, you just do not find such un selfish moments in real life and so I lapped them up in your story. Also the little one's cancer journey, heart wrenching and brilliantly written!

Malli was the surprise package and was Khushi and Arnav's test as a couple;

Would love to read more of your works!

Nlr