ArHi FF: Highway to hell-3, last Ch. pg 89

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Cathy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: madmaxine

I changed the ending- just yesterday actually. Changed my mind about Nita.

Aha, thanks for mentioning. I had a confusing moment earlier n read the last part once again, asking myself, surely I couldn't have misunderstood the chapter. surely, Nita's chubby legs comment was meant to indicate, she's alive and kicking. ha ha ha.

anyway, all the best with your phd and career and stuff.(knowledge gained through few tidbits you shared about yourself in some chapters) :-D

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

I just reread hth and I didn't think it was possible to love it even more than I had the first time, but i do. I can't tell if I like the new ending more than the older one or not. The new one is, of course, happier and what Khushi deserves. The old one was bittersweet and echoes a familiar experience for Khushi. I don't know- I think both of them worked perfectly well.

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

just found the link to the story - bookmarking - will read soon

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Aplihs

@Aplihs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

I came across your story yesterday evening and just finised it somehow managing to do all the important daily stuff. Beautiful us the only word that comes to my mind.

You made me laugh and cry through the journey and end with a smile.

I hope you will let me be part of any other journey you plan to start.

Next plan look for you index of work..😃

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

read d entire story...
beautifully written...loved it alottt...

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@.Boss.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

This was one wonderful piece to read! A lot of emotions, highs, lows, and amazing twists to keep me intrigued! From the start to the end, never even once did i lose my interest in this story!

Khushi's independence and confident aura allured me! Her forgiving the family gradually was a well decision! Malli and Arnav's relation is so cute!

All in all, this was a story i could see some reality into! I loved you kept it real towards the end, because most writers would've made khushi magically pregnant! Although it would've served the appetite of ArShi lovers, but it is far from the realities of the world!

I would really miss reading this! There would be a hollowness between my lunch hours, and breaks when i was entertained with this story!

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myriads

@myriads

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Loved the story.Loved the way you have kept the story real with people making mistakes & trying to move on. It was a roller coaster ride & was simply splendid.

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Gopi Patel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

wow!!! i really liked this one!!!! i hope you have written many more stories. this story was very sweet without the gory. i loved it and congrats on what according to me is an award winning story!!!

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nazca

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

You changed the ending! No wonder you told me to read the last chapter once again, I know,I am reading it after so many months because I was scared to read and undergo the same effect after reading Nita is in heaven. But I never knew that Nita is still with us. Nita is still with us!!!
Man after reading that I was so happy and good for you, you was not in front of me or else you should have visited traumatogist to check how many bones I crushed while hugging you.

Edited by avcmyd - 11 years ago