ArHi FF: Highway to hell-3, last Ch. pg 89

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Hi Vidhya.. I just came across this story and read in one go... After reading this story, I felt thankful that I joined I-F, because I got the opportunity to read some worth reading stuff there... It was like a breath of fresh air. So unique, never read this kind of storyline ever before...

Loved, loved this self-made, independent, bold, and strong-headed Khushi...You amazed me with your characterization... Khushi is so lucky to have friends like Nigel, Aadit and Freddy... The way they stood by her side, its amazed me...Nani is super cool in your story... She is mischievous... Khushi's past was heartrending and my eyes welled up when she broke down...that part was breath-taking... Some chapters just cracked me up...

Having a brutal past she moved on and she forgive everyone especially arnav...Glad that Khushi give him a second chance... Aww, arnav's bonding with little angels was so cute... Anjali and Aadit loves story was also cute. Sometimes it's for our own sanity to forgive someone and move on...It gives us a unique calm... Keeping grudges in our hearts it's not the best thing to do...

I truly appreciate your writing style too. Loved those two chapters when you write a poem on IPK and second chapter when Khushi retort back in a rhyming phrase... That was hilarious...Sheila and Nita are the best things happened to Khushi...Mali story was heart-touching...Finally, ArHi got married and becomes parents of twins via surrogacy...

I love how you focused on Arnav and Khushi's relationship only, and how you have shown the gradual, but significant strengthening of their bond, where both are taking efforts to work on the relationship. Their level of comfort and understanding is heartwarming to visualize. And their deep, unconditional love is beautifully depicted.

Overall, it was a beautiful experience for me to read this mind-blowing story. I laughed, my eyes got teary, I got emotional...I go through so many emotions in every chapter in this story...No doubts, it is on of the best fan fiction I've ever read...I completely loved this story..It kept me hooked right from the beginning to the very end.

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dair10arshi

@dair10arshi

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Gosh!!! I'm reading this in 2015. This was amazing
U are an amazing writer. The humour, the romance, the drama n the tragedy all in the right proportions. I dnt know if u are reading this. But just wanted u to know.
Read all of it at one go
Hats off to u!! 👏

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Rami

@Rami92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#753

read n a go n it was realistic intimidating n wonderful

lived FAN for wat dey wer to khushi

n luvd the new khushi herself

moreove melena was awesom

n relationship f kids (inc melena ) n arnav was fab

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prachi360

@prachi360

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#754

loved the story.. especially how khushi become strong and independent.. 😊

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#755

I came across the story a few weeks ago but due to my hectic schedule couldn't read all chapters in one go. And now finally was able to complete it.

Khushi had gone through so much because of Anjali, Arnav and her parents. She had to have an abortion which affected her fertility. But despite having a hard life in the past, she could start a new life by adopting Sheila and Nita.

I really hate Anjali. She was so selfish. She got married Khushi's best friend secretly, when Khushi was suffering from the stress caused by Nita's illness. She announced her pregnancy when Khushi was unable to conceive. Because of Anjali's selfishness, Khushi had do go trough more and more as if her earlier depression wasn't enough.

By taking care of Malena and presenting a new life to her, Arnav could amend his mistakes towards Khushi when he left her alone, carrying his baby. Khushi taught Malli the value of giving a second chance to someone loved by telling her story with Arnav.

Freddy and Nigel always supported Khushi through thick and thin, like best friends do unlike Aadit who betrayed his best friend for Anjali. Maybe Khushi forgave both Aadit and Anjali but I'm unable to forgive and forget.

The ending was so beautiful. Arnav and Khushi was blessed with twins by surrogate mother. Now they have bunch of children who filled their lives with joy.

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barunsinghania

@barunsinghania

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#756

One of the best story i have ever read!!! Loved it to the core!!! I especially loved the bond between malli and Arnav!!!!

You are the first tamil writer of arshi i have come across!!!

Kalakitinga!!! sema!!!

theri!!!

You are awesome Vidhya!!!