ArHi FF: Highway to hell-3, last Ch. pg 89 - Page 75

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an fantastic reading experience. Loved it. I loved the first 20 chapters more than the rest of the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read the story in one go.. Loved it.totally! The story has everything emotional, sad happy and.comedy
.I really love.it! I'm really happy that.everything ended.well
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing ff!!!...loved the spunky khushi...n the way she carves her own niche...keep going with more n more...loved ur writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just completed reading this masterpeice of an ff... And what shall i say? I'm sure all the adjectives like amazing, mindblowing, awesome, marvelous, fantastic and etcetera must have been used about gazzilion of time in all the previous comment cuz the ff simply deserves all of that and more. I suddenly find mu dictionary to be a little vague because at the moment i literally cannot think of words to express how i exactly feel after reading this ff. So with no other option left, i am forced to write a comment using all the way-too-much-used words. And also typing this from phone will not let me type in all my feelings cuz my typing on phone sucks! Seriously! And i just realized how much of non-essential stuff i've already typed so coming to the point. I can confidently say that this has been one of the best ffs i've read on IF till date. So unique! I've read loads of ffs based on a reformed Khushi but never they have impressed and indulged me to this extent. From the first chapter to the last, each and every bit of the story was brilliant. And you are one extremely talented writer i have to say.
Loved this story so f**king much! A marvelous reading experience. And i would like to mention that Malli's role in the story , initially i thought it was kind of unrequired but then as i read on i was absolutely intrigued and touched by her tale. And the best part of this ff was that it was very realistic and of course the characters. Each and every character was given equal importance and they had really strong impacts. The characterization , the story, the pace everything was perfect!
Really glad that i came across this marvelous story and had a fab readinv experience.
Thanks for writing this wonderful ff Vidhya.
You really rock!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Vidhya, such a great story. I loved almost every bit, those that I didnt I cried. I loved nanni and her star gazing stories... so much I had a hard time stifling my laughter from the men in my life. They dont understand. I hope when the time comes I have this sort of relationship with my DILs and granddaughters! LOL
I loved Nita taking every opportunity to throw up on Arnav, the little tyke which brought these two together. Shiela making him daddy awe... I loved Malena, she was an extra but she was so needed in the plot, the fact that Arnav saw the khushi he let down and had to help, brought the whole thing to a beta version if that makes sense.


But I have to say you had me hooked not just because you called her Minniei(my family nick name😉 ) , but cos this girl grew up to be a woman In her own right, one who could look after herself and made something of herself. She gave ASR the flip that he so needed especially what he did to her, even after knowing he was her only...

👏 please keep writing muuwh
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Vidhya,
Very well written story. Loved it. 👏😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Vidhya,

I am so glad I came across this FF. It is simply superb.

After reading first two chapters, I liked Khushi so much. Everyone in this story went through so much, but in the end everyone is happy. I loved the friendship between Khushi, Freddy, Aadit and Nigel. They were there for Khushi when nobody was there for her. That is true friendship. Both Khushi and Malli suffered so much, their past is almost similar. In the first few chapters, I hated Arnav so much. But he came around and stood by Khushi when she needed him. Khushi has a big heart she forgave her so called pathetic family. But after some time, it is better to forgive and move on.

I liked the way Arnav and Khushi took care of Mallu, Sheila and Nita. That was one happy family. The twins are definitely a welcome addition.

The most wonderful part was Khushi is this story. I just love her. She was that submissive girl, who wanted to make everyone else happy except herself. You turned her into this confident, proud and strong person, who can kick some ass and speak her mind. I felt really happy after reading this.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey this was an amazing story so glad to have come across it!!
You are superb,
The whole process of Khushi dishing it out to Arnav,
losing everything and even scarring her future,
then getting back on her feet, standing tall,
finding friends,
showing him his place!!

He winning her back, providing her support,
being there for her,
carving a place in her life for him,
leaving everything behind for her,
then they both, especially he being there for Mallu!!!

This was just a fabulous FF, great job!!

More than being a highway to hell, it was about Second Chances!!
Absolutely loved it!!

TC!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Vidhya "Three cheers to you 👍🏼 👏". You have wonderfully narrated just a brilliant piece of plot. I liked your independent, strong, mature, brave heart, full on control and still golden by heart Khushi very much. The life she has build even after going through hell in personal life is just commendable. All the friends she has made and the relationship/comforts she shared with everyone is just awesome.
What I can say about Arnav? He is seriously a sweetheart. He has learned a lot and came out winner as well. Through he has not gone through lot like Khushi but he has became the man everyone can be proud of. The bond/understanding he shared with Malli is just wonderful.
Liked the way how the story is maturely evolved. You write very well dear. 👍🏼 I liked the way you have built the story, character and woven the relationship between them. Keep up the nice work dear and please do PM me whenever you write something new. Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Vidhya take a bow dear for such an amazing story.. loved it.. agree your khushi was different and loved her for her guts.. even your arnav was out of this world.. he was superb human being who have learnt from his mistakes.. i loved Malena's character a lot.. that was entirely a different angle which brought arnav into a different light all together.. loved arnav-malli's bonding they both were superb.. also loved ARSHI's other daughters too shiela and nita and the twins.. Freddy, nigel, aadit, mrs murthy, lavanya and the raizada-gupta clan everything was superbly designed.. loved your story a lot.. thanks a ton for such beautiful story.. enjoyed a lot reading it.. was laughing so much at times that mine family was like what are you reading thats making you so happy.. naniji telling arnav that she have watched brokeback mountain and knows about what relation freddy-nigel share then her comments & hints about s** were wonderful and she was charming like always, where Khushi's fans (Freddy, Aadit, Nigel) turn up at RM to talk to arnav about their minnie and at same time khushi too turns up was so hilarious, aadit entering arnav's room thinking it was anjali's, khushi's hen party, all such occasion made it also very hilarious one breaking away the tensions around.. 😃

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