13A Nottingham Place- A Raj Naina fic updated ch11

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Hey sorry firstly for being late for one month and 16 days with comment 🤔
I know it's too long time n u would have been stopped expecting my comments here, thinking that i am not interested 😆 but let me remind u i am always interested in RN ff's vo bhi if one of the amazing writers like u write than y should i love the chance.😉
First of all comment for prologue n character sketch, awesome 👏
So it's story of Naina or should i say journey of Naina, who has lost her mom at very young age.😔
Her father bought her a brand new step mom but how can a step mom luv her, it happens exceptionally n so as a result she had to leave her house reaching Shekhawat's mension.
Her mother too suffered a lot bcz of this marriage when she had to leave her country n family n at last she had to leave her family n her only daughter alone 😭
You wrote Naina's pain perfectly just love your work.👍🏼
Mr. & Mrs. Shekhawat totally high society freak were telling a small kid attquts, what a wired people.
Anyone could have been guessed that they don't like her entry in their world n telling her that her mom was fool was highly irritating 😡 .
I like the confidence Naina has n she promised them confidently.😊
She was happy in her small room away with their fake world.😃
Waiting to read her first meeting with Raj .😍

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Hey here comes the comment for part 2 😊
Nice update n i like Raj n Naina's first confrontation in a different way.👏
Shekhawat's Mension has high walls n the relation b/w them is just like those walls from which u can never peep out in other's life.😛
Mrs. Peterson would be nice i thought but she is really strict n puntual n i think it's neccessary to be in Shekhawat family.😔
Naina was late n anyone can b but this was wrong as she has to meet Bhumi n her sis.
My god this gal is really arrogant n second one is reserved n shy but i love Naina's response there 😉.
The best part was Raj n his playing that song.😃
Raj was a magnet n his voice n Naina was an iron who couldn't stop herself attracting towards him.😍
Naina was lost in his music n when Raj stopped he himself asked her if she was fine n the nature of Raj was totally different with the rest of people of his family .
Words of Raj made a mark in Naina's heart who was feeling different n unwelcomed in that family.😊
I loved Raj's character he is fantastic n cool.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Hey here comes my comment for The Princess and The Pole Star 😊
Awesome n lovely part 👏
Naina was sad n unhappy that she wasn't chosen in the lead role of the Play, any child wil feel that way if it happens to him/her.😔
Raj was there to lighten her mood with his encouraging n soothing words n when Raj is here how much can she be angry n sad for long.
I just love the way Raj diverted the topic n gave Naina a special name Princess but i didn't like the name he chose for himself Bruno.
Raj n his stupid logics always work n now it was Naina's turn to give him name, thank god in Shekhawat Mension any1 is sensible who care about others.😃
Lovely name Naina chose for him, The Pole Star the Guiding Star who wil always guide her in her life everytime she wil need him 😍

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Here comes my view of The Hamlet, The Ophelia n the Farewell
Seriously i never read this book The Hamlet so it was beyond my understanding. I hope u can understand, what i am trying to say.
Coming to the rest of the update that was good n emotional.👏
Raj himself doesn't want to go away when his dreams r crashing but obviously Sir Shekhawat couldn't given him the permission as he must b thinking that he wil spoil n ruin his name n fame.😔
Naina has finally found out her true feelings for Rajveer n that's y after controlling n fighting with her tears a lot she couldn't stop them.😭
Raj has assured her that he will keep on coming to meet her in vacations but Naina's doubts r true, she can't expect him to b same as 3 years is long duration.
Those words of them both showed their intense n the bonding which can not b described n i am too unsure about Raj's feelings for Naina.😕

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

My comments for your previous update
Don't u think it was a short update but still gud 😊
In past three years she couldn't meet Raj that was sad n all thanks to Raj's mom who didn't want that [:]]
The song u chose was too god n one of my favorite.👏
Naina's dreams have taken all control over her from when she has seen his handsome face which is itself able to raise the heartbeat of any gal.😉
Naina herself doesn't know that her dreams r going 2 b true very soon.😍
Raj n Naina can never love any one else apart from each other, n Naina now feeling why is she sent away everytime when Raj comes to home.
And this time when he is not coming on Xmas she has to go NP .😕
Her silent prayers n wishes r soon going to be answered.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago

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Riya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!! Thank You.

Isha is very sweet and as Naina's best friend knows how to irritate her with Raj's name!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 Yeah I too love her.

I loved her name for Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 hehehehehe...

Isha is not one to leave her and Naina sympathises with her future clients and bosses!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Isha being Isha she is a tuff nut to crack.

I loved the way you portrayed Isha!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 Thank u.

Naina is irritated at the suggestion of Raj with another girl!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 Jalan to hogi na!

Poor Naina cannot even go for the Student Exchange Programme even though she wants to!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 Yeah, she has a sad life.

I loved it when Raj caught Naina as she stumbled!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Hero hai na!

Seriously Raj and his surprise visits and each time he does manage to surprise her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 Yup.

I loved it when Raj said Naina is looking beautiful and struggled for words!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳. Remember the red sari scene.

So Raj is also jealous at the thought of someone being in Naina's life!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊. Haan, he is so cute na!

I am sure Raj also feels the same for Naina and loves her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Let's hope so.

Raj and his theatrics and Naina can never refuse him!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Let's see if she can really maintain this.

Their shopping together was nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is really sweet and he had noticed the dress Naina had liked and bought it for her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 He is very attentive.

This reminded me of Rohan in Rishta.com!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 May be he will make an appearance too.

Raj stopped while correcting the girl that Naina is not his girlfriend!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 Kya faida?

Poor Naina's heart aches to look at Raj as she cannot express her love for him!!!!!
Remember the jail scene? or the point 1857?

I loved Raj's question that she finds his accent cute or him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

How can Raj feel like Tom Cruise in the courtroom as Naina is not there with him like Demi Moore was with Tom Cruise??😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 heheheheheh

Raj and Naina's dancing scene was very cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne accha kiya that she asked Raj to spend the night at her apartment!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 Nahin to jata kahan?

Naina just drowns in his eyes each time he comes close to her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 They have a very strong connection.

Raj and Naina's fight over the bed was funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj doesn't want to sleep on Naina's bed as he is a man!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😎 😎 😎 😎

Naina is right that he has a huge ego!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is teasing Naina about reading Mills and Boon books and even though she denies it, Raj knows that she is lying!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

She was comparing him to the heroes of such books but I am sure Raj is much better than any of them!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 Koi shaq?

I can understand Naina's overwhelming feelings at having him spent the night in the same room as her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Of course tonight's dream is wilder than before!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ hehehehehe...

Let's see how the night goes and what happens in the morning!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Thank you very much for reading Shaina..thanks a lot.😊

Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
love ur fic..love raj and naina bonding...
please mention page number with the chapter number on the first page...it will be easy to find updates then..
cont soon

thank you so much for reading and then commenting..I have already mentioned the page number with the chapter no on the first page. Thanks for appreciating my work. Keep reading.

Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago

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Riya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Mrsimisam

Awesome part...😃
D surprise was too gud n so was der hug...luved it...☺️😳
Superb convo between raj-naina...Dey r adorable...👏👏👏
luved it wen raj said bcoz m a man naina ...😆😆...
Very nice...continue...

Hi Simi!!
yeah Raj's so cute isn't he?? Thank u for loving their conversation and also for your wonderful comments, it helps me to improve the story and write even better.

Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago