13A Nottingham Place- A Raj Naina fic updated ch11 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part
loved it
continue soon

Thank u. Keep reading.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raheelu

Patience.

Awesome part Thank You.
nice songs collection Double thank you😆
Mrs.shekhawat & Peterson are rude
niana deep 4 Rajveer is awesome🤗 Yeah, you need people to put some salt in a love story to make it interesting, don't you?
sorry 4 being late Don't worry about that, it is nothing.
thanks 4 pm You are always welcome.



Thanks a ton for reading and commenting, keep reading to know what is in store for our handsome couple.😊
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Originally posted by: raheelu

A Night Out


Well written superb part
Isha is sweet n dreamboy nice hmmm
🤗 ❤️ ❤️ 🤗Rajjj
finally Raj is there
nice encounter
ohhh😲 Raj u can't do this no feeling n love😲 4 her
they shop together thats good
thats good Raj notice n buy Naina's fav dress

dancing scene is cute
well heavy snow help them i mean they got chance to live or talk 4 some time
thats true tonight dream is wilder then before s 😔

thanks 4 pm
awesome part n sad 2
waiting 4 next part



Thanks for your lovely comments and don't worry it's all Naina's imagination, we don't yet know about Raj's feelings for Naina...have faith in him.😃

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Thank You. Keep reading.




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Originally posted by: awaazilicious

aaaw Riya a very sweet part indeed Thank you sooo much Arwa.


seriously Raj and his surprise visits... hehehehe...I know he is pretty predictable.

Oerall can understand Naina's overwhelming feelings of having him in the same room as her.
Yup...kya kuch nahi kar chahti par kya kare haalaton ke haath majboor hain.😆
Let's see how the night goes and what happens in the morning hmmm...let's see.



Arwa...thanks a lot for stopping by and commenting, it feels great to be appreciated by a great author like you...thank you so much.

Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

A very sweet and wonderful part Riya👏👏


presence of Isha would really make her feel that she is not alone loved her role very much as a best friend of Naina she surely knows how to irritate her with the name of Raj😊😉😆 Isha is her much needed relief in her otherwise sad life.

Raj and his surprises are only meant for Naina he never gave surprises to anyone accept her knowing very well how is she gonna react😉😉😊 Because Naina is special and that is for sure.

their outing part was really sweet especially when he again took that dress with which Naina was playing and he took a notice of it and the one where he suddenly stopped saying she is not my girlf👏😉😍 Hehehhee..I am glad that u have noticed that, Raj is very considerate, isn't he?
now what is going to happen next morning or this night hope that what Raj is not able to deny will be come true soon 😳😍😉
Yes, very true..let's hope that Raj acknowledges his love for Naina pretty soon...keep reading to know what's in store for them😃



Thanks Shreya for the wonderful comments, I can hardly thank u people enough for being so kind and patient...keep reading the fic to know the progress of the story.😊


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Originally posted by: -purnima-

loved the UD 👏👏 wonderful 😃😃


Thank u Purnima. Keep reading.

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Thank you very much. Please keep reading.

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Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

Hey riya...
Nice update..isha is a sweet n cute irritating friend...raj is in london thats not only a surprise for naina got us too : p...nicely thy'd done shopping...n raj noticed tht naina liked the dress n buy for her... Raj and Naina's dancing scene was very cute...fighting of bed was also sweet...lets aee wht will happen next...cont soon
Take xare...



Thanks a lot for commenting...yes Isha is a nice friend..u will get to see more of her in the coming episodes hopefully. The dance scene..was well churaoed a little from LRL...it still gives me goosebumps to think about their famous dance lesson scene. One of my very favourite scenes. Thanks once again and please keep reading.
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey sorry firstly for being late for one month and 16 days with comment 🤔 Hi!! Vertika! What a pleasant surprise!! There's absolutely no problem...
I know it's too long time n u would have been stopped expecting my comments here, thinking that i am not interested 😆 but let me remind u i am always interested in RN ff's vo bhi if one of the amazing writers like u write than y should i love the chance.😉 Aww...Vertika that is absolutely not the case...and I am sooo glad to see u here.
First of all comment for prologue n character sketch, awesome 👏

So it's story of Naina or should i say journey of Naina, who has lost her mom at very young age.
Her fat
her bought her a brand new step mom but how can a step mom luv her, it happens exceptionally n so as a result she had to leave her house reaching Shekhawat's mension.
Her mother too suffered a lot bcz of this marriage when she had to leave her country n family n at last she had to leave her family n her only daughter alone 😭
You wrote Naina's pain perfectly just love your work.👍🏼 Thanks Vertika, yeah Naina had a very sad childhood.
Mr. & Mrs. Shekhawat totally high society freak were telling a small kid attquts, what a wired people. They are total snobs.
Anyone could have been guessed that they don't like her entry in their world n telling her that her mom was fool was highly irritating 😡 .
I like the confidence Naina has n she promised them confidently.😊
She was happy in her small room away with their fake world.😃 Yes she lives in the world of utopia.
Waiting to read her first meeting with Raj .😍



Welcome Vertika and thanks for commenting on the fic. I am so grateful to u all for appreciating my work. Keep reading dear.


Edited by riyaa_1985 - 13 years ago

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