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Posted: 13 years ago
are upd kaunse pg pe hao tejjo mujhe mili hi nahi :(( plz pm the page link not 1st page link
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo


lekin humme tho voh tabhi pata chalega jab humme ek romantic ud milega

greedy people, kabhi nhi sudhrange.😛

ok will try to update today😛
for my greedy buddies🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

thanks dear for ur comment😃
oh so u find out why im made neha a dr.'shittt man 😭
sabko pta chal jayega ab to😲
now im proud of u dear(par or kisi ko mat btana)😳
waise wo lap wala scene mere mind mein nhi aaya😡
but i'll include it pakka😛
will update soon 😉
thank u😊

yippie!!!...we r getting a nurse patient oops doctor patient track😃...
rashu where r u???😆
aww don't be sad dear...😊...see ur idea is bringing a naughty naghty smile on our face☺️
aww thans dear...kisiko nahi bataungi😳...
train journey phir hogi kabhi na kabhi...
we can have the lap scene then...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo



aapko chane ki jhaad par chadane ke liye hi kaha h.

yeh dialogue sunke mujhe rt mc ke ek interview yaad agayi😍...mc praised rt for his look and acting skill(who won't do that?)😳
and rt bohut bhav kha rahta(actually acting kar raha tha) 😆and mc retorted saying "ab zyada chane ki jhad par chadhne ki zarurat hahi hai😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 28

veer and neha still standing in the corner of train compartment...she feel very weariness due to constantly standing and collided with peoples of crowed...her tiredness was clearly seen in her eyes..it was almost 2 hrs to standing in a same posture..veer saw her weariness on face and said-''thak gyi na kaha tha na tumse jaakar baith jao par tum sunti kahan ho meri''

she smiled-'''kisne kaha ki mein thak gyi hun mein bilkul thik hun...agar mein thaki hun to tum bhi to thak gye ho na''

veer smiled back-''tumse koi nhi jeet sakta''and hugged her...she placed her head on his shoulder...embraced him and closed her eyes...veer sticked to wall for support

tanya saw pooja and thought-''agar yeh yahan aayi h to neha bhi aayi hogi par wo h kahan''

sapna looked at pooja surprisingly-''arey pooja tum yahan tum bhi goa jaa rhi ho kya''she nodded and smiled

sapna-''neha bhi aayi h kya''

pooja-''han wo veer ke saath aage hi khadi h yahan jagah nhi thi isliye''to hear this tanya shocked and said immediately-''veer ko itni bheed me khade hone ki kya jarurat h''

rudra-''kyunki yahan khade hone ki bhi jagah nhi h ''she sat silently...but she was very angry due to neha

after sometime
they find some space and sat on the seat...veer sat near the window and neha sat next to him...placed her head on his shoulder...he grasped her hand tightly
neha-''tumne mujhe btaya kyun nhi ki tum bhi goa jaa rhe ho''

veer-''tumhe surprise dena tha isliye...tumhe accha nhi laga mera surprised??''

she smiled smirkly and said-''nhi''

veer raised his eyebrows and said-''kyun ...''she put her head upward-''bas nhi laga accha'' he growled at her ...she laughed to see his face and said-''tum jab aisi shakal banate ho to bhot cute lagte ho''and snatched his both cheeks with her hand-''bilkul chote bacche ki tarah''

he screamed out in pain-''ahh..neha kya kar rhi ho tum''she again laughed and grasped his arm-''ok sorry''

veer smiled and then said-''sirf sorry se kaam nhi chalega...i love u bolna padega''

she looked at him-''nhi bolungi''veer pulled her more closer -''accha kal 20 baar i love u bola or aaj ek baar bhi nhi''she was shocked-''kya 20 baar''he nodded and then laughed-''koi baat nhi mat bolo lekin ab tum mujhse bachkar jaogi kahan''

she blushed and lowered her eyes...and suddenly one man sat next to her and collide with her again and again intentionally ...veer stand up from his seat and looked at him angrily-''problem kya h tumhaari'''

man-''itni bheed h train mein to dhakka to lagega him isme meri kya galti''

veer hold his collar-''mein btata hun dhakka kaise lagta h''but neha came in between-''veer chodo use...baith jao''she pulled him towards the seat...this she sat on window and he was next to her..he still growled him with rage..she pulled his face towards her side with her palm and said innocently-''uski shakal mujhse bhi acchi h jo use dekh rhe ho''

veer looked at her-''shut up neha''she smiled and grasped him tightly

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at night
everyone was in deep sleep...and train ran in its full speed...sapna sleeping on rudra's shoulder...and pooja on dhruv's shoulder...but tanya didn't sleep and thought about veer...

neha enjoyed her sleep in his embraced...her hairs come in front of her f
ace to disturbed her sleep..he placed her hairs aside and then kissed her forehead while smiling.


next morning

the train was almost empty becoz peoples alighted on their stations...neha still sleeping on his shoulder...sun rays directly penetrating on them through window...veer opened his eyes and looked at her...her face glowed more due to golden rays of sun...suddenly train stopped at a railway station...veer looked outside to saw the station




then he looked at neha and said-''neha utho''she didn't opened her eyes and tug him ...veer hold her hand and pulled her face upward-''neha subah ho gyi h utho''

after few seconds she lazily opened her eyes..smiled at him -;;gdmg''

veer smiled back-''gdmg swthrt''now she removed her head from his shoulder-''tum puri raat soye nhi kya?''veer-''soya tha na bas abhi utha hun''

veer looked outside and then asked-''chai piyogi''she nodded cutely..veer stood up immediately and about to move when she hold his hand-''kahan jaa rhe ho''

veer-''chai lene jaa rha hun bas abhi 2 min me aa jaunga...don't worry''and removed her grip

she worried for him-''nhi ...rehne do mujhe chai nhi peeni h agar train chalne lagi to''

veer-''neha mein bas 2 min me aa jaunga just don't worry ''and then he leave..she looked at outside worriedly

then tanya arrived at that compartment to saw veer...she looked at neha but could not find veer there..she asked her arrogantly-''veer kahan h''

neha said politly-''bahar gya h''

tanya raised her eyebrows-''kyun gya h wo bahar tumne hi bheja hoga h na..agar train chalne lagi to veer to bahar hi reh jayega na...tumhaare pass koi kaam nhi h kya veer ko pareshaan karne ke siwa''

neha didn't listen her words but constantly looked at outside to saw veer with tensed face..tanya become more angry and said-''mein tumse hi baat kar rhi hun tum apne aap ko samajhti kya ho haan...or ek baat veer ab hmaare saath baithga yahan nhi samjhi tum''and then leave

veer came with tea for her but tabya came in front of her and smiled-''veer tum kahan gye the mein tumhe kitni der se dhoond rhi hun...ab chalo ab tum hmaare saath baith sakte ho wahan jagah h''

veer shocked to see her-''thik h tum chalo mein neha ko lekar aata hun''

she irritate with her name and said loudly-''kyun wo apne aap nhi aa sakti...''

veer-''nhi wo mere saath ayi h or mere saath hi jayegi''and moved towards neha

tanya was angry with his attitude-''tumhe hmesha uski itni fikar kyun rehti h...mein bachpan se tumhaare saath hun kabhi mere liye tumne aisa nhi soch...par use aaye hue kuch din hue h or tum uski''

before she complete veer interrupted-''tannu pls tum kahan ki baat ko kahan le jaa rhi ho...meine kaha na mein aata hun chalo hum tumhaare saath hi chalte h ok''

he came inside the compartment...neha looked at him-''veer tumne to kaha tha 2 min me aa jaoge phir itni der kaise ho gyi''

veer-''chalo hume dhruvor rudra ke pass jana h''tanya smiled ...
veer put her luggage and then left

to saw veer and neha everyone was glad...and seated on their respective seats...neha sat next to her sister..pooja smiled at her and gave tea to her...but she already have a cup of tea...pooja looked at her surprisingly

neha-''wo...dii...veer ne lakar diya''

pooja understand everthing-''koi baat nhi''

now train starts again...all of them enjoy their train journey..tanya gazed at veer...and veer neha gazing ai each other...

after 2 hours they reached the beautiful city goa...which looked beautiful inside the train...neha excitedly looked at outside to saw the wonderful city...veer gazed at her smiled face...
after few minutes they reached goa platform...and came out from the train

all of them hold their luggage and moved towards the car to reach the hotel...

aftr sometime they reached at hotel..where they stayed for 2 days..its a beautiful hotel with long trees around them and a big swimming pool in a center




dhruv and rudra take keys for their room and sapna.tanya room..while pooja took their room keys and then moved to their room

at evening

pooja-''neha chalo niche chalte h..dhruv ne sabko niche bulaya h dinner ke liye''

she came out from the washroom-''thik h dii aap chalo mein aati hun''pooja nodded and left the room

she wrapped towel around her body...and standing in front of the mirror..her hairs and face was wet..she rubbed her body with another towel..then someone knocked the doors...she asked without opening the doors..that was her sister-''neha mein apna purse ander hi bhul gyi hun''

neha opened the door-''dii ye lo aapka purse ''pooja looked at her and said-''thank u tu jaldi se tyaar ho kar niche aa ja''and then leave

she again rubbed her wet body..then again someone knocked the door..she said to herself-''yeh dii ko bhi na bhulne ki aadat ho gyi ''
she opened the door irritately-''dii ab kya h'' and shocked to saw veer in front of her...he looked at her lovingly..

she said surpringly-''veer tum yahan kya kar rhe ho''

he smiled -''mein tumhe bulane aaye tha but ab to mera mann bhi nhi kar rha niche jaane ko''

she was confused-''kyun?'veer looked at her wet hairs..then she realised that she wore towel only..she was about to closed the door but he stopped with his hand...he moved inside the room and locked the door from inside

then moved towards her..she stepped backward-''veer yeh sab kya h tmne darwaja kyun band kar diya or tum niche jao na dinner ke liye''

he smiled n gazing her continuously...she feel nervous in front of him-''tumhe sharm nhi aati is tarah kisi ke kamre me jaane me''

he said proudly-''nhi...''she shocked and sticked to wall...he put the hands on wall...and staring at her passionately-''mujhe nhi pta tha ki koi itna bhi khoobsurat lag sakta h''she lowered her eyes

her face was wet with water drops...he looked at her face...she looked hesitatingly he smiled and came closer-''chalo phir se nahate h''

she frowned at him -''ji nhi mein naha chuki hun or dobara nahane me mujhe koi interest nhi h...agar aapko nahana h to aap naha sakte''

he laughed and came more closer-''akele me maza nhi ayega...waise aise kaafi acchi lag rhi ho ''

she growled at him and smiled smirkly-''really...to thik h mein aise hi chalti hun niche dinner ke liye...or bhi sab dekhenge mujhe..sabko mein acchi lagugi ha na''then moved

veer grasped her waist-''wo hak sirf mera h or kisi ka nhi samjhi''she laughed and pulled him back..then ran towards the other side veer grasped her and then both of them fall on bed
he was lying over her and saw her eyes...she turned her face and throw pillow on his head...veer tugged her in his arms and looked at her lovingly...then he move closer to her face and suck her drops from forehead...then from cheeks n eyes...her body became colder she moved her hand and hold his shirt tightly...

he moved his face adjacent to hers and kissed her soft skin of face...then kissed her neck passionately ...she closed her eyes and tightened her grip..he kissed her closed eyes and her shoulders...after sometime she opened her eyes to saw him...and kissed his forehead-''i love u veer''he smiled and embraced her...




Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb dear😊...loved it...

the train scene was very nice😊...he is so protective towards neha😳...but why tanya is here😡...i wish she would have missed the train 😆 & somehow got back to home leaving our NEER to enjoy the trip 😉...

room scene was totally romantic😳...so now she confessed in her senses...great...

take care dear...get well soon...& do update asap...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi dear, how r u now? feeling better?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

hi dear, how r u now? feeling better?

yeah dear im feeling better now..😛
thanks to medicines...and your wishes😛
thnks again
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
veer jab tum neha ke saath ho toh use thakan kaise ho sakti hai...
n veer his angry on that man...possesive lover...
neha n veer together,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n she is resting her head on his shoulder...oh that was so cute...😳
thank god finally they have some moments with each other...without any distrubance...but musibat toh bol ke bhi nahi aati...
a gae humari tanya- the chipkali...na jaane kahan se a gae...
n how dare she talk to neha like this...😡...poor neha n veer...chain se tea bhi nahi pee sakte...😒
n with veer's behaviour...why not tanya understand that veer is not intrested in her...
mean's veer care for neha more than her or any other else...he is not paying attention to her rubbish talks...but still she is sticking with him...brainless girl...😡
but i really liked the room scene...oh too romantic...☺️
i really liked this part...

''...her face was wet with water drops...he looked at her face...she looked hesitatingly he smiled and came closer-''chalo phir se nahate h''

she frowned at him -''ji nhi mein naha chuki hun or dobara nahane me mujhe koi interest nhi h...agar aapko nahana h to aap naha sakte''

he laughed and came more closer-''akele me maza nhi ayega...waise aise kaafi acchi lag rhi ho ...''🤣

too good...😆

''...she growled at him and smiled smirkly-''really...to thik h mein aise hi chalti hun niche dinner ke liye...or bhi sab dekhenge mujhe..sabko mein acchi lagugi ha na''then moved

veer grasped her waist-''wo hak sirf mera h or kisi ka nhi samjhi...''

absolutaly right...jis tarah daqsh ne kaha tha ki dhwani uske alawa kisi aur ke samne expose nahi kar sakti...after the item song...only he has the right to see her like that...( from EGL)
usi tarah...neha tumhe aise dekhne ka fulltoo haq sirf aur sirf veer ko hi hai aur kisi ko nahi...samjhi...
n really loved the romantic scenes b/w them...this is the first time they are so close to each other...😳
n yes sry i didn't know that u r unwell...get well soon...
my lot's of wishes,prayer n love are with u...😊
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
where are u rashmi dear...i updated😊next part😛 for my greedy buddy🤣
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago

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