HUMTUM (RTMC FF)

hi guys now im start rajat mugdha new ff hope u like it im not so good in writing so pls forgive me if there is any mistake.first of all here is the character sketch if u like it than pls comment so i continue further. HUMTUM

part1 (MALHOTRA HOUSE) SUSHMA shouting on imli(servant)-mene tumse kal kaha tha ki sab kaam ho jaana chahiye par tumne abhi tak kuch nhi kiya. IMLI-badi maa bs thoda sa kaam rah gaya h aaj shaam tak sab ho jayega. SUSHMA With anger-tumhara dimaag toh sahi h na aaj shaam ko pooja h or tum kah rhi ho aj shaam tak sb kaam ho jayega. (suddenly shubh come downstair n see sushma shouting on imli)
SUBH-kyun aap us bechari ko daant rhi ho...
SUSHMA-to aap hi btaiye aaj shaam ki pooja ki tyaariya kaise hongi abhi tak kuch ni hua...
(then nivi n siddarth come downstairs with rudra).
RUDRA-maa aap itni pareshaan kyun ho rhi dhruv h na...wo or imli sb kar lenge shaam tak...
SIDDARTH-or aap kya karenge rudra ji...
RUDRA-hm checking karenge ki sb thik ho rha h ki nhi..(with a sweet smile).
SUSHMA-hme aise baat bilkul pasand ni h rudra...
SIDDARTH-bhabhi aap pareshan mat hoiye hmne 4,5 logo ko bulaya h wo sab tyaari kar denge.pooja har saal ki tarah acchi hi hogi...
(then dhruv with a broad smile run inside from outside)
DHRUV-maa...kaka...choti maa...(he's full of breath with a halt he stop).
NIVI-kya baat h?beta bade khush lag rhe ho kya hua...
DHRUV-han choti maa baat hi kuch aisi h aap sunengi to aap bhi khushi se ucchal padegi...aj shaam ko veer abroad se wapas aa rha h...
NIVI(with a broad smile)-kya kaha tumne veer wapas aa rha h...kab...kitne baje.
(all r very excited to know this news most of nivi offcourse she's waiting 4 veer since 6 month n now he comes at the time of annual pooja of radha krishna)
NIVI to siddarth-veer aj aa rha hm use is baar nhi jaane denge.aap sun lijiye han.
SIDDARTH-is baar veer ko kahin ni jaana padega wo apni padayi puri karke to aa hi rha h ab wo yahin rehkar hmara or bhai sahab ka bussiness me hath batayega.
SUSHMA to imli-ab yahan khade hokar hmari shakal kya dekh rhi ho?aaj shaam ko sab veer ki pasand ka khana or sweets banene h chalo jakar saari tyaari karo or agar koi galati hui to hum tumhe chodenge nhi...
DHRUV-chalo chalo sab tyaari jaldi jaldi karni h..
ALL WERE BUSY WITH THEIR WORK OF POOJA. ... (SHARMA HOUSE)
NAINA TO SAMEER-yeh lijiye chai.jaldi se naasta kijiye nhi to der ho jayegi office ki liye.
SAMEER-naina ji chai me shakkar ni h.
NAINA-hanji mujhe pta h!!!
SAMEER-to kyun ni h?
NAINA-kyunki meine nhi daali doctor me apko meethi cheez khane ko mana kiya h.
SAMEER-accha wo sab chodiye ye btayiye ki hmari rajkumariya kahan h.??
NAINA-aapki ek rajkumari so rhi h or ek mandir gyi h aaj uska interview h...
SAMEER-neha hi mandir gyi hogi.uska interview kitne baje se h hm use hospital chod dendge...
NAINA-10 baje h aap ko toh der ho jayegi.aap office jaiye usse aditya chod ayega...
( then a girl enter she's wearing light pink top n blue jeans..her hair kisses her waist n black eyes saw her mom n dad)
NEHA-papa...
SAMEER turn to see her...n he smile to see his beautiful daughter (naina n sameer come towards neha)
SAMEER-hug her n kiss on her forhead n said all the best beta 4 interview m leaving 4 office.,,
NEHA-thank u papa aap jayeye me bhaiya ke saath interview ke liye chali jayungi...i love u papa...
(sameer say i love u to o to neha n left)
NAINA-neha chalo jaldi se jakar tyaar ho jao mein aditya ko bol deti hun wo tmhe chod ayega...
NEHA-mom di kahan h?
NAINA-wo abhi tak so rhi h ja use utha de...
(naina left n neha goes upstair to meet her sister)

part 2
NEHA(open the door of her sister's room n saw she still sleeping)-di utho..di utho na wish me all d best today's my interwiew.

POOJA(4m inside the sheet)-all the best neha.jao mujhe sone do.

NEHA(she's now irritated by her sister act n take the glass with water n put sm drops of water on her face)-di utho...

POOJA-(quicky wake up n staring at her with anger n run towards her to punish her 4 what she hv done)

AFTER SOMETIME

ADITYA-neha chalo nhi to tumhe der ho jayegi...

NEHA-ji bhaiya chaliye..(she took her bag n file)
naina n pooja wish her n she left with aditya.
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(malhotra house)
nivi is vry happy bcoz her son coming back after 6 months.she made every thing 4 veer's choice.

SUSHMA-arey jaldi 2 karo.sb kaam pooja se pehle ho jane chahiye...(she look here n there to search some1)ye dhruv or rudra.kahan h...(n she moves outside to search them)

every1 is busy in their works...nivi n imli made food n prasad.shushma told to rudra n dhruv about decoration n siddarth shubh busy with their office work.

IN D EVENING

the singhaniya family now entered in the mension n saw beautiful decoration..

RAJESH(shubh's frnd) to shubh n siddharth-arey wah! Tyaari to tumne bahut acchi ki h! Lagta h is baar ki pooja or bhi khaas hogi.

Rajesh's daughters sapna n tanya also come with him.tanya quickly replied-dad ye bhi koi puchne ki baat h shubh uncle ke ghar ki pooja ho ya party dono hi khaas hoti h..kyun uncle mene thik kaha na?(she replied with broad smile as she knows shubh n siddarth never says her wrong)

SIDDARTH-(he loves tanya n sapna like as his daughter)han beta ye baat to h!bt aaj or kuch khaas bhi h..

TANYA-aise kya khaas baat h?(now she's confused).

SIDDARTH-aaj veer wapas aa rha h!
To know this news tanya is vry excited.she's feel like she's on 7th cloud.afterall her love comeback.
All r vry happy to know this news bt here sum1 searching 4 sum1.sapna searching rudra bt he's not there than suddenly a hand struck oh her shoulder...tanya turns to see that..there is none other than diya(who knows all about rudra n sapna)-kya hua aap kuch dhund rhi h kya?kuch kho gya h aapka...

SAPNA-(with nervous face)nhi to...nhi to mein to kisiko ni dhund rhi hun.

Diya knows that sapna searching rudra bt she decided to pull her leg she start again-aap jis cheez ko dhund rhi ho wo aapko nhi milegi kyunki wo to airpot gaye h veer bhai ko lene...sapna bhabhi!

By hearing bhabhi she's got red n shyly left that place.

Soon all guest gathered bt all waiting for rudra n dhruv..who went airport 4 receive veer...nivi looking continously on main door 4 her son.she miss him alot everyday...now diya comes near her mother-maa bhai aate hi honge don't worry just relax...

SUSHMA To nivi-nivi hme pooja shuru kar deni chahiye kaafi der ho gyi h...shayad veer ki flight late ho...

Nivi said to sushma to wait 4 5-10min.

AFTER 15 MIN

sushma said panditji to start pooja...all guest n family members sit in front of temple n pooja starts...bt nivi continously look at doors...

Then the doors open n dhruv n rudra enter inside...all guest n family members standup quicklly n all r vry excited...

Nivi's eyes searching veer bt they don't find him...all the members are confused...there r only 2 boys standing in front of them...

Nivi's excited face tuns into sad face..every1 become sad...nivi sadly turns n moves towards stairs then suddenly a familier voice struck in her ears...maa!

She quickly trns to see him...n she saw a boy standing between dhruv n rudra...

A boy with cute smile,handsome looking gud in blue jeans n blue shirt...he's none other than veer.now all 3 boys together says-surprise!!!

Veer vry happy 2 see her mother after such along period..he hugs her mother tightly...nivi's eye are with full of tears...now she's vry happy..

Soon veer take blessings of all the elders n now the pooja starts...

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(SHARMA HOUSE)

SAMEER- to naina-neha ka interview kaisa rha?

NAINA-bhot accha! Neha hospital me as a intern doctor select ho gyi h...

SAMEER-arey wah! Yeh to bhot khusi ki baat h bt neha h kahan.

NAINA-bahaar gye h gumne ke liye ate hi honge.

SAMEER-itni raat mein?kyun

NAINA-3no bahar gye h celebrate karne ke liye aa jayenge..aap dinner kar lijiye...
After sm time 3 of them come n go to their rooms.

Lying on bed neha is vry happy bcoz 2morrow is vry spcl day 4 her 1st day of her dream.soon she's in deep sleep.

thanks for stating new RTMC FF🤗

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for stating new RTMC FF🤗

thanks dear 4 liking n comment i love rtmc pair vry much

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

<font size="2" color="#990099" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">thanks 4 starting RTMC FF dear🤗...i am missing my favourite jodi so much...

nice start😊...there r so many characters...so it will be interesting to see these parallel tracks alongwith our lead couple😍...but i desperate to see first meeting of veer & neha😳...

plz add me to ur pm list & do send the pm as u update😊...

plz update soon...waiting for next part...

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will update soon dear

ohh dear!!!u updated it...😊

Originally posted by: prahelika

ohh dear!!!u updated it...😊

sorry for the late comment...my exams u know

very nice starting dear...⭐️

so neha is an intern😃...great😃...i can relate to this character easily as after 2 yrs i m also gonna be an intern...

loved veer's entry...seems like his mom pampers him too much😆...

waiting for their first meet😍...

r dhuv and puja paired opposite each other???😊i would love to imagine vikrant sriti together..loved them in DMD😊

btw what's ur name dear??😊

thnx for the pm...

my name is riya.thanks 4 comment dear

part 3
(in the morning) (MALHOTRA HOUSE)

nivi to imli-"aaj breakfast me kheer bnani h veer ko bhot pasand h" n she leave for doing pooja.

there is a small temple in the house where all the family member gathered in morning n do aarti
together.today's also every1 in the temple except veer.he's still sleeping in the room.

sushma-"veer kahan h" while giving aarti to every1

diya-"badi maa bhai to abhi tak so rhe h"

sushma-"abhi tak so rha h kitna waqt ho gaya h phir bhi utha ni abhi tak jao or use uthao acche har ke bacche itni der tak nhi sote" n she leave.

diya going to upstairs when her mother call her.
nivi to diya-"diya tum jao breakfast karo hm veer ko utha denge" diya said ok to her mother n leave.

now nivi enter in the veer's room with pooja ki thaali in her hands n sit on the bed beside veer. n see her son who still sleeping...under the blanket.she moves towards the window n open it...the light of sun directly penetrates on veer's blanket.
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nivi-"veer utho beta shubah ho gyi h" while sitting on the bed..."sab niche tmhara intezaar kar rhe...utho chalo"

veer-"ummm...sone do na maa" under the blanket.

Nivi-"nhi bilkul nhi bhot waqt ho gya h jaldi utho nhi to badi maa bhot naaraz hongi" while pulling blanket on his head.

Sunlight irritates him..he put the pillow on his head to escape from light.nivi smiling to see this.

Nivi-"veer utho beta"

veer turn to see his mother with half open eyes n put his head on her lap...she lovingly kissed his forehead n give blessing n aarti to him.

Nivi-"jaldi se tyaar ho kar niche aa jao aaj tumhare liye kheer banvayi h hmne... jaldi aana varna khatam ho jayegi" she put her hand on his forehead n after sumtime she leaves
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(SHARMA HOUSE)
on the breakfast table
sameer-"neha kahan h use hospital nhi jaana kya"while taking a sip of tea.

Naina-"tyaar ho rhi h subah se utha rhi hun par meri sunta kaun h ab ho gyi na der...abhi tak naashta karne nhi aayi.

Pooja comes downstairs n wish her mom n dad gudmorning...n sit next to her dad

naina-"pooja neha kahan h"

pooja-"wo aa rhi h mom"

aditya comes to downstairs he's ready4 office.aditya sit in front of sameer

sameer-"aditya tumne mehra's ki filedekhi"

aditya-"ji han kakaji mene mehra's ki file dekhi h mujhe lagta hme unke saath kaam karne me koi problem nhi hogi agar aapko shi lage to mein unse meeting fix kar leta hun"

sameer-"agar tumhe lagta h to bilkul hme unse milna chahiye"

neha comes downstairs n wish her father n mother n quickly take blessings from her parents n about to move when her mother interupted n said-"breakfast to kar ke jao neha"

neha-"nhi maa aaj mera pehla din h or mein pehle hi din der se nhi pahunchna chahti"

naina-"thoda to kha sakti h 5 min mein koi der nhi hogi"

sameer,pooja,n aditya, see all this melodrama of mother n daughter n all of them gigled... to see this naina irritatly sit on chair-"meri to koi sunta hi nhi h 1 mein hi pagal hun jo sabki fikar karti hun".

neha-"mom agar aap naaraz ho jaoge to mujhe naashta kaun karaga,lagta h aaj mujhe bhooke hi jaana padega" with a sweet smile she hugs her mother from one side.naina smile to see her daughter's innocent face...n feeds her daughter from her own hands.

sameer-"chalo accha h naina tumne apne haatho se neha ko breakfast kara diya ab uska din accha jayega maa ka itna pyaar jo mil gaya subah subah.

sameer n aditya finish their breakfast n leave 4 office...pooja ready 4 her dance classes...after sometime pooja leave 4 her classes n neha 4 hospital.


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(MALHOTRA HOUSE)

siddarth n shubh leaves 4 office..n sushma goes to meet her friend

diy to veer-"bhai aaj maa ne aapke liye kheer banayi h or hmme me se kisi ko nhi di" with a very sad face

veer-"kyunki vo mere liye bani or mein saari khayuna" he replied in a very naughty way.

he take the bowl from her n start eating while lying on sofa..dhruv n rudra come n sit next to him..imli give kheer to every1.

dhruv-"to ab kya socha h aage kya karna"

veer-"tumhaari help"

dhruv-"meri help kisme" replied in very strange manner.

veer-"ladki dhundne mein or kisme tum to dhundoge nhi office mein kaam karte karte hi budhe ho jaoge to mujhe apni bhabhi apne aap hi to dhundni padegi na" replied in a very naughty way.

dhruv-"kya...kya kaha tumne mein tumhe chodunga nhi veer" he run towards veer to punish him.

all 4 of them gigled n sat down again...rudra ask to veer-"han wo to h bhabhi to dhundni padegi hi par tum btao ki tumne apne liye koi ladki dhundi ya nhi...

veer-"nhi mujhe abhi tak waisi ladki nhi mili jaisi mujhe chahiye" repliad with a cute smile.

diya-''bhai ko ladki dhundne ki kya jarurat h tanya h wo bhi to kitna dhyaan rakhti h bhai ka''

dhruv n rudra gigled n said together-''han wo to h''n all of them laughed except veer...he strangely looked at them n said-''aisa kuch nhi h wo sirf meri acchi dost h or usse jyada kuch nhi''

rudra-''han han hum jaante h ki wo tumhaari dost h ''he again burst into laughed all of them laughed n saw his face...he's still confused

after sometime veer,dhruv,rudra leave for thier football match.