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Sonali

@sonalimurat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Hii dear

how r u feeling now ?

the update was superb

too Romantic 😳

loved it

that train scene was to cute

n that scene in room is 😳 😉

take care dear

update soon

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

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Originally posted by: tejjo
where are u rashmi dear...i updated😊next part😛 for my greedy buddy🤣

i m here...

present madam!!!!!!!!!

veer is so protective nah!...😳

our all rt's are protective...😳.

so cool n cho chweet rt's...⭐️

everyone was in deep sleep...and train ran in its full speed...sapna sleeping on rudra's shoulder...and pooja on dhruv's shoulder...but tanya didn't sleep and thought about veer...(hahahahaha...🤣...dekha, tintokali tanya, bola that band baj jayegi,🤣 BULB hogayi, 🤣tubelight chamak gayi, popat ho gayi.)

neha slept on his shoulder throughout the night, 😍

so romantic nah!,...i loved that scene. so bubbly they look together, like this...😳

GOA is a beautiful face, no doubt, i visited just last april...

so, i would demand for one beach scene, one church scene, ...and bas itna hi...

baki yaad aaya tho bata dongi.

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she opened the door irritately-''dii ab kya h'' and shocked to saw veer in front of her...he looked at her lovingly..(aaya tere der par dewana, aaya tere der parwana....)

she said surpringly-''veer tum yahan kya kar rhe ho''(tumhe dekh raha h, dikhta nhi!!🤣)

he smiled -''mein tumhe bulane aaye tha but ab to mera mann bhi nhi kar rha niche jaane ko''.(bhot jaldi mann badal gya, badalna hi tha, agar itni bold neha samne ho tho...😆...)

she was confused-''kyun?'veer looked at her wet hairs..then she realised that she wore towel only..she was about to closed the door but he stopped with his hand...he moved inside the room and locked the door from inside......(yeh mujhe pata h...yeh kyun hoa

1) riya di naughty ho gayi h mere aur prazi di ki vajah se.😆

2)neha naughty ho gayi h dhwani ki sangat main.😳.

3) veer naughty h wid daqsh...kitne similar h na sab.☺️)

then moved towards her..she stepped backward-''veer yeh sab kya h tmne darwaja kyun band kar diya or tum niche jao na dinner ke liye''......(tumhe aakela chod kar kaise jaa sakta h..)

he smiled n gazing her continuously...she feel nervous in front of him-''tumhe sharm nhi aati is tarah kisi ke kamre me jaane me''....(thodi besharmi bhi jarori h.🤪)

he said proudly-''nhi...''(ahhh! veer u naughty boy...☺️)she shocked and sticked to wall...he put the hands on wall...and staring at her passionately-''mujhe nhi pta tha ki koi itna bhi khoobsurat lag sakta h''she lowered her eyes......(mujhe bhi abhi pata chala ki koi itna romantic n passionate ho sakta h.☺️.)

her face was wet with water drops...he looked at her face...she looked hesitatingly he smiled and came closer-''chalo phir se nahate h''.....(ismain TUM MERE HO ke prithvi ki aatma aa gayi h😆.)

she frowned at him -''ji nhi mein naha chuki hun or dobara nahane me mujhe koi interest nhi h...agar aapko nahana h to aap naha sakte''......(aur ismain nandini ki.😆)

he laughed and came more closer-''akele me maza nhi ayega...waise aise kaafi acchi lag rhi ho ''....(sach bore ho gya veer akele naha kar😒.)

she growled at him and smiled smirkly-''really...to thik h mein aise hi chalti hun niche dinner ke liye...or bhi sab dekhenge mujhe..sabko mein acchi lagugi ha na''then moved....(sahi main, sab maze lelenge tumhare...😆...)

veer grasped her waist-''wo hak sirf mera h or kisi ka nhi samjhi''(we noe it, universal trith, proclaimed .)

she laughed and pulled him back..then ran towards the other side veer grasped her and then both of them fall on bed.(ooo...😳)
he was lying over her and saw her eyes...she turned her face and throw pillow on his head...veer tugged her in his arms and looked at her lovingly...then he move closer to her face and suck her drops from forehead...then from cheeks n eyes...her body became colder she moved her hand and hold his shirt tightly...(kinna romantic scene haga☺️, maze aagaye, 🤗neer roxxx here...they r perfect😃.)

he moved his face adjacent to hers and kissed her soft skin of face...then kissed her neck passionately ...she closed her eyes and tightened her grip..he kissed her closed eyes and her shoulders...after sometime she opened her eyes to saw him...and kissed his forehead-''i love u veer''he smiled and embraced her...(at last bol diya, veer ki tho nikal padi, cholo ek tension tho hati..)

sooper oved it...

maza aagaya...

haye

ab aise hi mast mast ud dena...

love u di.

DEKHO DEKHO...

MAINE AAPNA PROMISE NHI BHOOLA...

AMINE KAHA THA, JAB NEHA INTENTIONALLY YEH CONFESS KAREGI VEER KO THO MAIN BHANGRA KARUNGI...

SO HERE I M -

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

amazing ff..

---reserved---

will comment in detail.

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

awww...

that was a really sweet...cute n lovely update..

enjoyed the train scene...

but yeh tanya ki bachi...

finally confessed in full consciousness..

thnx for the pm...

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

very nice sweety...well done...it was too good...👏

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

i have edited ma comment

pls do see di.

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Smoking_up

@Smoking_up

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

woww... loved it thoroughlyyy dear 😊

thanxx for the pm

do continue sooonnn

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc
superb dear😊...loved it...

the train scene was very nice😊...he is so protective towards neha😳...but why tanya is here😡...i wish she would have missed the train 😆 & somehow got back to home leaving our NEER to enjoy the trip 😉...

room scene was totally romantic😳...so now she confessed in her senses...great...

take care dear...get well soon...& do update asap...

thanks dear for ur comment😃
thanks dear,,,now im ok😳
will update very soon😆😛

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: ridzzi
awesome update...👏
veer jab tum neha ke saath ho toh use thakan kaise ho sakti hai...
n veer his angry on that man...possesive lover...
neha n veer together,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n she is resting her head on his shoulder...oh that was so cute...😳
thank god finally they have some moments with each other...without any distrubance...but musibat toh bol ke bhi nahi aati...
a gae humari tanya- the chipkali...na jaane kahan se a gae...
n how dare she talk to neha like this...😡...poor neha n veer...chain se tea bhi nahi pee sakte...😒
n with veer's behaviour...why not tanya understand that veer is not intrested in her...
mean's veer care for neha more than her or any other else...he is not paying attention to her rubbish talks...but still she is sticking with him...brainless girl...😡
but i really liked the room scene...oh too romantic...☺️
i really liked this part...

''...her face was wet with water drops...he looked at her face...she looked hesitatingly he smiled and came closer-''chalo phir se nahate h''

she frowned at him -''ji nhi mein naha chuki hun or dobara nahane me mujhe koi interest nhi h...agar aapko nahana h to aap naha sakte''

he laughed and came more closer-''akele me maza nhi ayega...waise aise kaafi acchi lag rhi ho ...''🤣

too good...😆

''...she growled at him and smiled smirkly-''really...to thik h mein aise hi chalti hun niche dinner ke liye...or bhi sab dekhenge mujhe..sabko mein acchi lagugi ha na''then moved

veer grasped her waist-''wo hak sirf mera h or kisi ka nhi samjhi...''

absolutaly right...jis tarah daqsh ne kaha tha ki dhwani uske alawa kisi aur ke samne expose nahi kar sakti...after the item song...only he has the right to see her like that...( from EGL)
usi tarah...neha tumhe aise dekhne ka fulltoo haq sirf aur sirf veer ko hi hai aur kisi ko nahi...samjhi...
n really loved the romantic scenes b/w them...this is the first time they are so close to each other...😳
n yes sry i didn't know that u r unwell...get well soon...
my lot's of wishes,prayer n love are with u...😊
update soon...
luv u...😊

thank u dear for ur comment😛
agar tanya kabhi veer ki baat samajh paati to veer ke pas neha nhi tanya hoti🤣
yes u r right she is brainless girl🤣
thanks dear for ur wishes 😍now im fine😃
will update soon🥱
luv u too😳

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone
Hii dear
how r u feeling now ?

the update was superb

too Romantic 😳

loved it

that train scene was to cute

n that scene in room is 😳 😉

take care dear

update soon

im fine now😛
thanks for ur superb comment dear😛
thanks once again😛
will update soon luv u😊

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