MG ff.This life is yours Pt 29.Pg136.aug 7

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet
Read all parts 2day.strting ws boring,lack of maaneet n their romance bt then story became interesting.maaneet finding lov in their 2nd mariage.really nice.
1ques:title is by geet to jahnvi or by maaneet to each-othr?
Also hw can arjun marry jahnvi?they r cousins.
Superb writing style.
Waitng fr maaneet lov moments in detail

title i kept thinking three ways..

it can be said by jaanvi to geet...she gave second life to her..

same to geet...if jaanvi has not entered her life..she would have ended her life..

n maans only source of living after his wifes death is his daughter..when she was searching for mother geet came in his life as his daughters saviour..he can give his life for geet for giving back his daughter n his life indeed is his daughter before his sons birth..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet
Sorry bt like tab doesnt work from mobile.
Bt i still wonder y there r so less readrs to dis ff?its really diffrnt story n writtn differently.
Superb dear.
Keep it up.hope u continuing writng on maaneet.wud lov to read ur othr maaneet ffs too.
Waitng fr maaneet close,romantic,passionate moments

thanks for ur comments dear...

u truely said it was boring at start..

i know..bcoz readers didnt digest a middle aged maneet with grown up..

n i got the least likes..

till now this ff is getting least..

sometimes i think of discontinuing this..

when thinking about some readers like you crously asking about this..i pen it down..

for my surprise,this ff takes always nearly or more than 35oo words..

maneet close moments on way..

they are falling for each other..

jaanvi will be there to make them near..

see previous page also dear..ive given answer for ur que

Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: farzu3008
Hey plz update soon yaar. Actualy am always a silent reader bt zis ff realy moved me 2 comment. I like z way u describe motherhood n this is making me eager 2 hav a second child. I alrdy have a 5yr daughter. Anyway plz come soon wiz a detailed n passionate moments of maneet.

me really happy to hear this..

i have two daughters..now..

before that i lost one..

the suffering was something real which geet is facing now..

so,only i think all are also emotional reading it..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: punam2712
THANKS FOR UPDATING THIS, WAS WAITING
IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL AT ONE LEVEL BUT THERE WAS I SHIFT IN MAANEET'S RELATION AT THE OTHER
GEET IS TRULY JAANHVI MOTHER - NOBODY HAS THE RIGHT TO SAY OTHERWISE
ONLY A MOTHER CAN BEAR THE PAIN FOR HER CHILD
MAAN GOT HIS LIFE'S WISH - SEEING HIS DAUGHTER BEING FED BY HER MOTHER
IT IS A PURE FEELING HE HAS FOR HER - IT IS CALLED LOVE AND NOT LUST
AND THIS FEELING IS NOT ONLY PHYSICAL BUT EMOTIONAL
EVEN GEET IS DEVELOPING FEELINGS FOR HIM
GEET IS A TRUE PRINCESS

thanks dear..for giving me a long comment..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: crazydream
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Thanks for such a super duper long update dat we
Got gor our waiting. Its like double update.

Geet ordering like a bossy wife n Maan saying ok-ok...
Liked dat scene. They were luking like a cute hubby-wifey.

Geet gave a strong reason for breast feeding. Maan awed by
Her answer.

Maan going for trip... Both will miss each other.

The. Sight in front of Maan wen he returned
Was like heaven for him.
Baby n her mommy sleeping together
With Jaanvi feeding was a lovely scene.

Maan was feeling love for her.
He captured this blissful moment.

Geet's security gaurd came with all the gifts.
Finally dadi n vicky got to knw the real identity og her.
She is so down to earth.

I really love your writings n stalk the thread
After every 5 days.
N no need to thank me as its I who want to thank
U for your wonderful creations n giving us such
Lengthy updates.

Continue soon.

thanks dear..

u always spam my pages..

n nowadys im getting habitual for looking ur lengthy comments n waiting posts..

i do want to give daily..

each update takes me 2 days n

in rotine every updates on 8th day of my post..

n if im held up in personal work i couldnt..

this time im un well or this ff i would have been posted yesterday..

still did this typing for nearly 3 days..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: drrose31
wow... finally you updated this one

and the update was awesome

mind blowing part

the way maan started to think about her is surely different

and geet with jaanu is so sweet ... more than a mother

i love the way jaanu keep calling vicky chucho 😆

lovely part

hope to see next part soon

oh 4000 plus words... 😲 😲

i can't even imagine ... naa baabaa naa ...👏 👏 👏

thank you rose..

its my honour to see a writers comment in mine..

i always want to thank each n everyone every time..

but i couldnt...

as u know we are busy always with typing ffs or reading ffs..

i'm fan of ur ffs too..

never miss ur updates..

thanks for ur wonderful comments..

n i myself dont know this ff always takes lengthy updates..

even though i try for other ffs it doesnt reach like this this time also lengthy one..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: lakshmisalvadi
😛 Hi valli

Ur FF was superb, awesome, excellent. I dont have words to discribe. the other two fanfic was also superb. the more we read the more we want. the wait was worth. Plz dont say sorry for delay in writting. we all fans can wait. See after waiting for long we got wonderful updates. Plz in U me and ? Plz make Maan and Geet Happy. And also i would like to read about how Maan and geet started feeling for eachother. in this life is yours. Waiting desperately.

Love u dear.

Lakshmi

thanks dear..

maneet moments are in way..

u,me there is still early 10 more i cant say surely..maneet will be happy..n this trip will bring a change in geet..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: love2_soma
wow...dats a gr8 news...maan n geet feeling something fr each other...i love d baby talks of baby jaanu...i really appreciate maan when he told doctor dat geet is only jaanu's mother...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it.. more dan enjoyed it thoroughly...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...

n thank u very much fr d lovely update...

thanks dear..

ur comments are precious for me...

updating now dear..

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: alwayzzgurti
di...sorry for the late reply...
it was tooo good di...
esp maan capturing their precious moments...
u just showed the motherhood sooo well and i just loved it...
continue it fast...
missing ur updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its ok sheeb..

i know u r also busy with ur updates..

more over ur relatives..

hope u like this part too..