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@Tia-AFreeBird

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#441

awsmmm
ye dono kafi naughty ho ye hai😆
lvd it
maan leavng 4 mumbai
i hope maan geet ko jldi paas bula le😉

Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Ye game inn dono ko bahut bhari padne wala hai i m very sure of this

unknowingly there is an emotional bond that is dvpling between them but pata nahi ye maaneet ekdum alag hai

o god maan ne toh geet k ghar par hi aakar 😲😲😲 aur kisis ko pata bhi nahi chala

hmm...player haan waise maan ye naam tumhe suit karta hai

i wonder hoshiyaarpur se jaane k baad kya hoga maybe maan kuch aisa situ create karega k geet ko mumbai aana pade maybe kuch job se related kyunki ye dono toh dur reh hi nahi sakthe

continue soon Di

love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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Sneha Bhattacharya

@khushi_4ever

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

You are writing very well and the story is progressing very good. Geet knows the truth about Maan and doesn't expect too much from him and yet she is cherishing the feeling that he thinks of her in a special way and not like the other girls which in itself is of so much more importance to her. And same goes for Maan even though he is in denial, still he cherishes these moments with Geet.
The basic ground work for the Love part has started.
Loved it. Continue soon.
p.s. I myself write so i know how much impetus it gives us when we read comments which tell us that the other person has read the story thoroughly...continue soon.

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Thanks Anu for clarifying my misunderstandings...though i still feel she is more emotionally involved but it is clear that she knows it is temporary

Also, i don't think it has anything to do with challenge she took on earlier as she is not even thinking in those lines now

i can understand that as a writer it must be very difficult to write this story and balance all the emotions...but just want you to know that you are doing a great job...continue soon dear

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

we completely have faith in u so plz do continue soon. loved the update.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

part 7
nice part...
looks like Maan is also falling for Geet but not accepting it...
their relationship is not just a time pass but its gonna be deep rooted...
cont soon...

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#447

awsome update
loved it
waiting..con soon
thankx for pm

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Mino_M

@Mino_M

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Can i be added to your PM List please.

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
awsem maneet only thinking about present thanx for the information you have give before update

@tamanna1391

Yes Dear... At present Maaneet are just lost in their new world of each other.

Originally posted by: arjuhi4
Yipeee!!! Me second huh... Lovely update...Maan saving his name as player amazing...I am sad that maan is going to mumbai ...I even geet will ho with himi

@arjuhi4

Don't be sad dear... These two are not the person who could be bound by distance. They both know their way out

QUOTE=SONU_29]Awesome update.

@SONU_29

Thanks Dear

Originally posted by: smallville
Awesome!
Loved it !!

@smallville

Thanks Dear

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#450

QUOTE=pulvi16]Really now i am becoming more crazy for maan and geeet They them self are crazy and will make everyone crazy by their madness dr. Just wait and watch.

Originally posted by: rsroopali

Thank you so much dear

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