Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan
OMG Anu di.. Wht an update...
Me loved it so so so much... 😃
Aww.. Maan ne Geet k lie dinner banaya...
MSK maane na maane theas so much 2 Geet for him dan only physical desire...
N uske baad ka intense moment.. OMG.. Geet ne bina kuch soche submit kr dia.. My god... She isnt givin ne 2nd thoughts... Trouble trouble on d door...
Geet is checkin Maan.. Ahaan... 😉 wanted to knw if Maan could risk 4 her...
But ye to MSK ko challenge kr hua...
N MSK neva backs off a challenge..
Maan came hme... N OMG.. Kitni intelligence se gharwalon ko mana lia akele tym spend krne k lie.. Baap re... MSK ke dimag ke kya kehne... Remarkable... Amazin yr...
N uske.. Baap re.. Ghr k andar hi itni intensity...
Trouble trouble again...
Gosh dis game is becoming much mor dan a mere game... Gonna cost dem their emotions n the restlesnes dat dey'l experience after dey part..
Dangerous game..
Anu di.. 1 question.. Is Geet gonna leave hoshiarpur n go to Maan sum day...???
Brilliant update Ani di..
Luvya loads... ❤️
Thanks alot dear for your such nice comment and appreciation...
Yeah at present he does not even want to know if thr is smthg different than phusical
and yes he is MSK o apne style me hee Geet se milega na.. he does not fear anyone...
Thanks a lot dear for liking it.
Many things coming up slowly...Thanks for your comment dr
Originally posted by: sarah_zaisha
go ahead girl...all logical errors r forgiven nd long forgotten...bcoz 4 da 1st time in IF sum1 is writing sum real stuff...which in normal sense nobody will understand...cheers...da ff is going awsum...update soon...keep rocking.
Thanks for the appreciation dr and also thanks for liking the concept... smthg came to my dream one day and I got idea for this FF.
Originally posted by: ns.1
awesome update👏...the game is turning so passionate and intense and i am loving each and every part of it😛...its an amazing concept and please do continue the way u have decided..its really great😊...u don't ned to make any changes in te concept its just brilliant and different😛...omg! daarji thought maan is here with a marriage proposal for geet and he is willing to marry her with him,😛 but god only knows where will this game take them😳...and now maan will leave soon then what will happen of their passionate game😡😳...i am sure maan or geet will certainly find a way to stay close to each other...continue soon...😊
Loved your comments and thanks for appreciation dr.
Yes, the passion has just started... and yes I have to continue the way I have thought as other wise the story will change
everything said now will have effect on story later...
Thanks a lot dear for your appreciation.
Thanks alot dear for liking it.
Thanks a lot for comment and appreciation dear and also liking it. Yes its all about what happens between Maan and Geet... other characters are just to proceed with story of Maaneet
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