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Posted: 13 years ago
part 8
very nice part...
glad Maan is opening up to Geet...
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last part
awesome...
loved the ending...
finally Maan told Geet everything...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update jyo...loved it... Loved wen he poured his heart out...hmm 5nally lykd wen he became old Maan... loved Geets surprise nd ya loved deir confession...Yash nd Geets fight ws awesome... wah kya jawaaab diya maan ne sasha ko... loved it... plzz koi dusri SS bhi start karo i would luv 2 read dat...loved dis SS veryyy much
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for an epologue




plzzz update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii friends,
i want thank all of u for encouraging me. 😊
updating the epilouge of this SS.
thanku very much for ur comments n likes...
i enjoyed reading each n every comment... 😃
soo how u felt the journet of maneet in this SS.
plzz i request all of u to pen down ur opinion as this is the last part n epilouge... 😳
i thank each n everyone for giving ur valuble sugessions... 😊
😳love u all.. 🤗

thanku
jyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

~~DIL KI BATEEIN~~

EPILOUGE



Annie is very very happy to see her 2 brothers married. Mainly maan she was so tensed seeing his condition but finally true love changed him. She welcome both the couples whole heartedly. Today khurana mansion is full of life. All the media people r clicking the pictures of new couples. Mainly maan n geet r so adorable. Geet n pari entered into their new house with new hopes n happiness.

Geet (st) : I promise maan I will keep u always happy. From now onwards u r my life. Mujhe mere pyaar par barosa hain maan.

Maan looked at geet who is lost in some thoughts. He whispered in her ear.

Kya hua jaan. Kaha koi hui ho? Thinking about this night asked maan mischeivously.

Maan aap bhi na told geet blushing furiously.

After that they completed all the rituals. Now geet n pari r waiting for their hubby darlings in their respective bed rooms. But annie, arohi n meera didnt allow them to enter their rooms wothout giving tax.

Maan n dev first give us our tax n then u can enter said meera.

Oh hello waha entrance pe le liya na tho ab yeh kya hain retorted yash.

Yash tum chu hojav. We have rite to ask. After all we r geet n pari's sisters told meera.

Here maan is very restlessness to go inside. But here these r girls r getting on his nerves. Finally he spoke

ok. how much u want asked maan.

Yeh hui na baat bhai. Well give us blank cheque told annie.

Maan gave them blank cheque.

Ok u can go inside told arohi.

Thats enough maan slowly opened the door. Geet is sitting on the middle of the bed. The room is filled with scented candles, different types of flowers, white n red roses. It is so romantic atmosphere. By hearing the foot steps geet's heartbeat started rising same in the case with maan. Maan slowly entered the room n saw geet sitting in the middle. Her face covered with veil. He went close n sat on the bed. Both their heartbeats r rising n geet is breathing heavily.

Maan came closer n lifted her veil. Geet's cheeks r red due to furioius blushing nn kept her head low. Maan is mesmerised by her beauty. He was just staring at her. Maan kept his hand on her chin n lifted her head. Their eyes met. They both r drowning in each other's eyes, reflecting their pure love, care n passion. Maan cupped her face n kissed her forehead.

Maan: thanku so much geet for giving me a new life. Tumari wajah se main aaj itna khush hu. Tum meri jaan ho geet. Main waada karta hu geet aaj se tumari aankhon mein kabhi bhi aansu nahi aane doonga.

Geet: main bhi aapse waada karta hu maan aaj se aake hae kadam mein main hu. Aap akele nahi ho. U r my life maan. Jo hua uske baare mein mat socho maan. Aaj se hum ek nayi zindagi shuru karenge.

Maan: ha geet aaj se ek nayi zindagi jisme sirf aur sirf khushi honge.

Geet smiled at him n hugged him tight. Maan too hugged her tight. They broke the hug slowly maan removed her dupatta, geet is all shy hse just held maan tight.

Maan removed her ear rings n placed kisses while removing them. He removed her maang tika n kissed her forehead. After that he removed her neclace from her neck except her mangalsutra. He placed a trail of kisses on her neck making geet insane.

She moaned maaan.

The passion is increasing by every passing second. Geet hugged maan tight cluching his sherwani tight. Maan too hugged geet by her waist. He is making patterns on her bare waist with one hand n other hand is carassing her back.

Maan broke the hug n tarting kissing her madly. Geet closed her eyes surrendered herself. Finally their lips met. First it was gentle kiss. After that it became passionate one. Maan demanded geet to open her mouth. She did the same both r exploring each others mouth. Their tongues r playing. Maan made geet to lay down on bed without breaking the kiss. Maan laid on top of her his hands r doing his work. He untied the dori of her top. Geet dig her nails on maans back. Maan furiously removed her top. He is drinking her beauty with his eyes. Finally maan took out her *** hook n throwed it on the floor.

Geet too unbuttoned his sherwani. They both r lost in each other. Finally they both r free from all barriers n made love. Their room n life is filled with love n passion. Finally they reached the end n both laid down on bed hugging each other.

Geet placed her head on his chest, maan held geet close to his heart holding her waist. They both smiled at each other n dossed off feeling each other.

Next morning geet woke up n saw maan sleeping peacefully, a smile on his face. Geet carassed his face n whispered

good morning maan.

Maan held her more close n whispered good morning jaan.

Aap uth gaye asked geet.

Hmm replied maan n asked geet where is my good morning kiss?

Geet kissed his cheek, but maan frowned jaan yaha nahi.

Geet narrowed her eyebrows but immediately she felt shy.

Maan aap bhi na chodiye mujhe tayyar hona hain. Its already 10.

nahi first give me my morning kiss.

Maan plz chodiye.

Jaan y u r soo shy kal raat tho u were wild.

Maaan aap besharam ho n slapped his chest with her little fist.

Finally maan placed his lips on hers n geet too responded with same passion. After very long kiss they broke n made love all over again exploring each other. finally they reached climax n both r very tired. they slept hugging each other for some more time. after some time Geet got up n covered herself with blanket n left for washroom feeling very shy. Maan smiled at her jaan n he too got up.

Next day maan-geet n dev-pari left for switzerland for honeymoon. They spended 2 weeks there n came back to delhi. After that they got busy with their work.

One fine sunday all r having breakfast. Annie spoke

bhai, bhabhi I need to talk to u told annie.

Bolo annie kya baat hain asked maan.

wo... wo.. fumbled annie. Annie glared at dev to help her.

Bolo annie told geet.

Bhabhi wo.. wo.. main.

Tum arjun se pyaar karti ho completed maan.

Annie is shocked to listen this. wo.. bhai.

Maan got up n hugged annie n told

annie tum apne bhai ko kehne ke liye itni soch rahi ho. Mujhe dev ne pehle hi bataya tha but I was waiting for u to admit.

Annie had tears in her eyes n told I am sorry bhai aapse chupane ke liye.

Maan wiped her tears n kissed her forehead n told pagli dont cry. Main arjun ke family se baat karta hu.

Geet n pari hugged annie n congratulated her.

After 2 months annie got married to arjun. Its a grand wedding. All r very happy now.

After 5 years:

it is a typical morning n its sunday. Famous mother n child running race with milk.

Muskaan beta come n drink milk shouted geet chasing her 4 years daughter.

Nahi mama mujhe nahi peena milk made muskaan yucky face.

Beta plzzz.

No mama I wont told muskaan stubbornly.

Bilkul apne papa par gayi ho told geet.

Yes my dad is the best told muskaan.

No my mom is best came a sweet voice. Its armaan twin brother of muskaan.

Arma tum chup ho jao shouted muskaan angrily.

Armaan came n hugged geet n told mama I drank my milk.

Thats very good beta. See learn something from ur brother told geet.

Muskaan pouted n made a sad face. Suddenly she heard her dad's voice.

Who is scolding my princess asked maan.

Yeh lo humne kya kiya ji asked geet.

Maan took muskaan in his arms n kissed her cute cheeks. Muskaan smiled at him n sitcked her tongue out at geet.

Geet took armaan in her arms n armaan did the same.

Chalo princess drink milk told maan.

Nahi dad told muskaan making sad face.

Agar aap milk peeli tho main aapko icecream deta hu.

Sachi?

Muchi.

Thik hain dad. Mama give me milk told muskaan.

Geet smiled at them n gave milk to muskaan.

Bade paa, bade maa shouted 4 years old rohan. He is dev n pari's son.

They both smiled at him. All the 3 children became busy in playing where as maan hugged geet n started kissing her.

Maan chodiye children r there.

Maan immediately left her n whispered in her ears be ready for tonight.

Geet blushed. Eventhough they r married still geet blush as a newlly wedded bride. After sometime time maan-geet, dev-pari enjoyed with their children enjoying their life to the most. All r happily living in their lives n yearly once all the friends meet up n go for outing enjoying themselves.

Annie is blessed with a baby girl. They named her as shruti.

Yash n meera have a twins roopa n varun.

Arjun n arohi r recently married n arohi is expecting now. Geet's father has retired from his company. Now maan is taking care of both companies but he gives all the profit to geet's father. Geet's father tried to convince him that this is all geet's n pari's but maan didnt accept for that. Finally he made all his property on the name of his grand children.

They all lived happiy with their chldren.


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plz plz plz read the note in before page... 😊😳

So guys this is the journey of DIL KI BATEEIN. So tell me how is it. I request all of u to comment.

So how u felt the journey of maneet in this. Hope u all liked this SS.

Plzz all of u tell me ur opinions. Tell me which part u liked the most.

Plzz all of u hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

As this is the epilouge plz pen down ur opinion about this SS.

Thanku very much for taking part in this journey of maneet. Thanku very much for encouraging me with ur valuble comments. I personally thanku all of u. love u all. 🤗



Love

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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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updated... 😃
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awsome yaar

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update muskan armaan wow and muskaan is for maan and armaan for for geet love it

this for you for writing this wonderful ss

Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awesome epi...awww it ended..
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