Arsha FF~Start of Something Beautiful~Thread1

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hey guys! my name is Pria and i absolutely love arsha/kriyansh. There arent much FFs on Arsha so i thought i would give it a shot. this is my first time writing so i would really appreciate everyones feedback 😊 feel free to add comments, criticism, suggestions or anything else!

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Chapter 1

As the first rays of light entered her room through the window she opened her eyes to face another beautiful day. She loved her life. Everything was perfect; best family, awesome friends and a great career. She quickly climbed out of bed and freshened up. After she got ready she headed downstairs and joined her family for breakfast.

"Good Morning mumma" she lightly kissed her mother's cheek.

"Good Morning beta" she replied.

"What happened Shakti, how come you woke up so late today?" her sister/best friend Mukti inquired.

"Actually i dont have to go to shooting until the evening so i thought i would sleep in." she replied.

"Good. i'm free today too so let's spend some quality sister time and then i'll drop you off afterwards."

Shakti automatically agreed since it had been a while since she spent time with Mukti as they were always busy.

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7PM. Mukti drops Shakti off to the D3 sets.

On her way in Shakti sees Amar going in as well.

"Kunwar! Wait up."

Amar stops when he hears that sweet voice.

"Hey Shakti." he gives her a quick hug. "How was ur day?"

"It was really fun since i finally got to spend some time with Mukti after so long." she replied with a big smile on her face. Seeing that smile Amar felt a swell in his heart. He loved it when Shakti smiled like that as if the entire world's happiness was laid out before her. He internally thanked Mukti for giving her this joy. They continue onto the set..



alrite guys let me know if its good or bad and whether i shud continue it 😊

and please specify in a comment if u want a pm since keeping track of likes are a little difficult

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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE REGARDING PMS

if u want to recieve pms plz add the user: KunwarShakti

pms will be sent out from tht username!
Edited by Hot.Pink.Heels - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiey pria u should continue it n plzzz do PM me when u update ...u write very well...plzzz update fast n add me too in ur PM list
Edited by kokoARSHA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heeyyy ,,
it's reallyy nicee :) :) u should totally continue!!:)
an plzzz add me in to ur pm list:) :) thanxxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pria...add me in ur PM list coz I love this FF... this beginning...wow...u r such an amazing writer...pls do continue and PM me...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its nyc...u should continue n pm me plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank You Guys soo much!! 🤗
I really appreciate everyone's comments and i'll continue for sure.
in fact i'll update agen tmrw since i have the next part ready.
and i'll send out pms to everyone that requested one.
Edited by KriaReyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Pria... one request...THE UPDATE SHOULD BE VERY LONG!!!! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311

Hey Pria... one request...THE UPDATE SHOULD BE VERY LONG!!!! 😉

Yea it is...i already have it written..just need to make some tweeks here and there and then i'll post it tmrw 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriaReyansh

Yea it is...i already have it written..just need to make some tweeks here and there and then i'll post it tmrw 😊

Luking forward to it...!! 😃

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