Arsha FF~Start of Something Beautiful~Thread1 - Page 29

Originally posted by: awesomeabshu

awwieee...m dead 🤢...it was ssooo HAWT!!! omg omg mereko breath nahi arrahii...arghh tumhe mujhe maarne ki aadat ho gayi hai aur marne ki ly bhi world ke biggest crimnal Arsha ko choose kia...aww it was freaking hot..☺️

Originally posted by: magical_mania

Who said it dint cum out well..such a cute n hawt update..lvd d way u dscrbd song n deir actions..lv u 4 d update..awesm1

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

awww soo cute n hawt!! Loved it!! awesome!! Plzz update soon!! can't wait !! thanx for pm :)

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

😳let me collect my breath...

hooo it was breath taking part😳

god it was tooo hot i cant stop my self from reading it again and again ☺️

it was awesome 👏

you are superb writer and your ff is awesome and very hot👍🏼😳 and this dialogue

"Done talking?" he asked. "If so, then i would appreciate it if you came back here becuz i wasnt finished with you" killed me🤢

cant wait for the next part please update fast eagerly waiting for the next part😍

aww thank you so much really appreciate it!

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

i loved the way shakti fell asleep and loved the way amar carried her to the bed n thanks for the pm and loved it loads

Originally posted by: DilDostiDanceD3

OMG how could you not live up to our expectations? This was AWESOME and by far my favourite update yet! So so so SO CUTE! I cant stop gushing about it! I especially like the image you leave off with...of Shakti asleep in Amar's arms...sigh😳 And how her mom says she has nothing to worry about if Amar is with her. TOO GOOD yaar! LOVED IT!😃

and im soo glad u liked it so much

Originally posted by: sukanyaa

pria...m just speechless...its a superb update...the song selection is so apt...n the dialogoues god...they just killed me...the way Amar teases Shakti n his naughty smile...i can simply visualize the whole sequence n can actually feel how hot he will luk lyk in such a situation...

the more i try nt to thnk abt dem much the more ur such updates make me thnk abt dem, dream abt dem ...

gosh m again losing it...

so before losing it completely ...let me tell u ...its really an wonderful update...

keep up the good work...n come up wid the nxt one soon...

Originally posted by: sweetapple2995

ek minute...NOT LIVED UP TO EXPECTATIONS HAHHA GIRLYOU EXCEEDED EXPECTATIONS hahhaha awesome job and last part was sooo cute! 😳😍