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Posted: 13 years ago
omg plz update soon
i m speechless...????????????????
?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!!
what an update..
it was superb loved it..
in fact i loved it so much that i hv an exam tomorow n havnt even covered half of my sylabus stil i just cant stop myself from reading n thinking about it over & over again..
thank u so much for this lovely update,,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: perfectangel

ur ff is just

for the pm😳

thank you so much Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tish18

u r such an awsome writer..absolutely loved ur ff..pls pls pls pm me wen u update. cant wait. :-D

thank you so much 😳
and for pms pls check pg. 12...add the username KunwarShakti becuz pms will be sent thru tht.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sm1ley_remy

oh my god...😳😊that was awesome. but one thing i want to ask is shakti referring to him as amar or kunwar? well both works, so dnt worry 'bout it. but kunwar sounds better 'cause shakti calls him kunwar. and i jst loved ur writing. plzzz continue.👏

thank you so much Embarrassed
and shakti refers to him as kunwar.
whenever i write kunwar tht is when im wrinting from her point of view or her thoughts and when i write amar its the narrator and everyone else, including himself!
hope tht clarified 😊 i noe it can get a little confusing so i apologize for tht
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh960

OMG OMG OMG !!!! THIS WAS HOT !!!! THE WAY U DESCRIBED IT


DAMN !!!! IT SEND SHIVERS DOWN MY SPINE TOO !!! HEHEHEHE

I LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JALDI UPDATING !!! EHEHHE !!

thank you alisha 😊
and if this sent shivers down ur spine then thhe next chapter will make u blush 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

OMG!!!!

what an update..
it was superb loved it..
in fact i loved it so much that i hv an exam tomorow n havnt even covered half of my sylabus stil i just cant stop myself from reading n thinking about it over & over again..
thank u so much for this lovely update,,,,

thank you so much 😊
and good luck on ur exam 😆 sorry for distracting u
Edited by KriaReyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG sooo romantic!! loved it . plzz update soon. pm me!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

okay so here's chapter 5!!!

hope i lived up to ur expectations!

Chapter 5

Shakti stood frozen in awe. The scenary before her was mind-boggling. She was looking at the most beautifully decorated gazebo surrounded by white curtains on all sides except the entrance where she stood with Amar. There was a big round sofa like mattress with many plush pillows placed right in the center of the gazebo. Bright candles were lit all over the place and right in front of her there were rose petals decorated to spell out "I Love You Shakti".

Tears sprang into her eyes once she got past the surprise and admiration. No one had ever done something this special for her. She truly felt fortunate to have a wonderful person like Kunwar love her so much and she decided to show him her gratitude.

Shakti turned to face Amar and flung herself into his arms. Amar was a little surprised by her reaction, especially the moisture that he had noticed in her eyes, but he enfolded her body into his as if to permanently hold her there.

"Kunwar, I love you."

Amar felt like he was floating. He had already known about her feelings from Sneha but it felt amazing to hear those precious words come out of her mouth. He let go of her waist and pulled her body away from his so he could see her appealling face. The tears he had seen before were now flowing freely down her face. Amar ran his fingers across her cheeks wiping away the tears. He took both her hands into his.

"Shakti you are the most precious being to me. I love you more than anything else in this world. YOU are my world now."

Shakti couldnt control her tears as she listened to his heart touching declaration. She threw her arms around his neck wrapping them tightly and leaned into him, sealing their newly declared love with a kiss.

Amar wrapped one arm around her waist and put the other on her back running it up and down over the smooth material of her dress. Shakti trembled from the sensation of his hands on her back and automatically curled her fingers into his hair. Amar deepened the kiss and tried to nudge her mouth open. When she complied he slid his tongue into her mouth making her gasp a little in surprise. At first Shakti felt a little shy and naive about what to do but gradually she grew bold until she was making her entrance into his mouth.

Amar broke away from Shakti's lips allowing her to catch her breath while he peppered kisses from her jawline down to her neck and shoulders leaving a trail of love bites. He picked her up into his arms and carried her over to the bed. He gently placed her down before climbing on top of her. Shakti ran her fingers down his neck to his chest. She slowly began unbuttoning his shirt revealing his smooth chest. She then ran her fingers down his bare chest all the way to his stomach making him shiver with pleasure.

Amar took his shirt off and flung it to the side before capturing Shakti's lips once again with his own. They continued to kiss as Amar rolled them over on the bed with Shakti on top of him. His roaming hands found the zipper of her dress. He tugged at it and pulled it down baring her back. He slowly ran his fingers up and down her bare skin.

Shakti shuddered from the current that passed through her body from his touch. Her nails dug into his bare shoulder as she continue to kiss him. They were both in an uncontrollable frenzy of want. Amar grabbed the open edges of Shakti's dress and pulled down completely revealing her back and shoulders before he registered his actions. He instantly stiffeneed tugging her dress back into place and pulling the zipper up.

Shakti felt the change in Amar before she too registered what had been about to happen. She didnt exactly regret that they had almost gone 'too far' but she appreciated that Amar had stopped them both in time. Shakti looked at Amar with complete trust and admiration.

Amar gazed back at her and said, "I always want to see that complete faith in your eyes for me."

"I trust you with my life Kunwar. I'm yours now and I know that whatever you do will always be for the best for ME and for US." She tucked her head into the crook of his neck and hugged him fiercely. They both held each other for a while until Shakti pulled away and sat up. Amar looked up at her.

"Where are you going?" he asked.

"You can hold me later. For now let me enjoy this beautiful decoration and view." she giggled.

She slid off the bed, pulled off her heels and aimlessly walked on the sand. Amar got up too and stood against the rail admiring her beauty. They both needed a moment to digest the fact that the most perfect person now belonged only to them.

Shakti went near the shore and stood there inhaling the fresh salty breeze hitting her. After a while Amar followed her onto the beach and wrapped his arms around her waist while resting his head on her shoulder. They chatted for a while about anything that came to mind. Being with someone they love and trust allowed both of them to easily spill their hearts to each other. That moment was perfect, because true love was in the air!

Guys hope you liked it!
dont forget to like and comment!! 😳
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Edited by KriaReyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg it was awesome👏
and breath taking too my heart is really beating very fast
its really very hot😳

please continue soon cant wait to read the next part😍
Edited by luv_arsha - 13 years ago

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