New SS: Starlight Express CLOSED Indefinitely - Page 25

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

This is the guy who "ditched" her, right?

He had not turned up at her parents place, then what is he doing on this train?

Originally posted by: 6thElement

And Oh! my...you are back in IF 😆

Welcome back.

Originally posted by: 6thElement

I believe I should have ended it as "fellow traveler in the story"

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

I understand, but in the same route when he had not gone to her parents place is what surprises me !

Oh ok ! I am a tube light !

Originally posted by: 6thElement

They broke up and that is why he hasn't gone to her parent's place in Seattle. Am I making sense?

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Sorry, I dont seem to be making sense.I dont know why my words are all jumbled.

I know they fought and broke up.

Geet went to her parents' place. Abhinav didnt accompany her for X-mas/New Year. Geet is returning from her parents' place.

So if Abhinav didnt go to Geet's parents place, then where did he go that they are returning on the same train?

Ofcourse, this being a long journey, he could'e boarded from anywhere ! To me it always seems people board a train only from origination

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Oh! I got it. He's not on the train. I think you missed this line in the preview "Instead he'd stretched himself on the park bench,"

By alluding him to be a traveler, I was only referring to his presence in the story.

Originally posted by: 6thElement

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Phaaam! Wrong Answer. 😊

You are kidding me right? When my concern is that my story doesn't reach out to many people unlike other writers, you think every comment that shows up won't make a difference? It matters too much at times like these.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

then sorry again dear...so hereafter you can expect me in your thread with the usual annoying question "when will you update" or "waiting"...hope you are ready for that...( i ll try to give longer comments too...though i wont guarantee you on that😔)

anyways continue soon dear...

Originally posted by: 6thElement

No...I think you didn't follow the conversation after that. Just make your presence felt and that is just a nice to have. Thanks for writing back.

I have settled to write...and just write, without expectations.