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Niharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

I am too shocked to see this face of Maan!!!!

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siyana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Loved ur writing
plz add me in ur pm list

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TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

awesome part lovely...

precap is verry intersting...

plz continue soon

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

superb one...

maan s such a monster..

but i luv him..

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Maan is full on gone case

His love is sort of punishment to Geet i feel

Lets c how Geet adjusts there

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Mishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

OMG
dat was awesome
maan is such a devil
bt i always love him yar
now wat will geet do
cant wait 4 next part yar
update soon

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Saumya plz add me in ur pm list for this ff coz I can't press lijkew me ph pe read larti hu aur ph sae like press mahoi hota ...superb update I hope aage jaa k maan ka problem thik hojaye

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Omg...wht an awsome update
here maan is suffrng frn emotionalinstability,his thoughts emotin keeps on chng
luvng dis new story..geet tryng to escape in precap maan will nt let her go n will b more cruel,so geet shld plan smthng gud.

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Its smthng diff n superb story
lukng forwrd to it,hw u progress wid ur story,grt prt

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Zubi

@misssmily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Sumaya am here 😆

Loved the part BUT here starts my critics 😉

Ok it was good to show glimpses of their past, these will be our means to understand why he became like that, you are doing good job with maan's character, like on their SR he didn't back off after seeing her tears, it is exactly the way he should have behaved ! 👏 Because As I said before he believe that she is made for him, to fullfil his wishes and desires. You proved it again when he said that he expect her to bring coffee for him everymorning from now... hatts off for that 👍🏼

Now comming to geet's character... according to me she didn't protest enough... i felt her really weak... i expected more anger, resistance... and the line when she said i thought you are my firend...NO remember u said she never liked him, so how can she say that... at least that's how i felt... may b u have ur reasons that are not disclosed yet... In this ff maan's character should be dominating, powerfull, geet should feel suffucated ( hence the title possession ) BUT she should try to stand up at least...

Hope it helps you ! 😳

Me eagerly waiting for the next updt 😊

With all my love and support ! 😊

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