Originally posted by: misssmily
Sumaya am here 😆
Loved the part BUT here starts my critics 😉
Ok it was good to show glimpses of their past, these will be our means to understand why he became like that, you are doing good job with maan's character, like on their SR he didn't back off after seeing her tears, it is exactly the way he should have behaved ! 👏 Because As I said before he believe that she is made for him, to fullfil his wishes and desires. You proved it again when he said that he expect her to bring coffee for him everymorning from now... hatts off for that 👍🏼
All I can say is.. Thanks and the past will show a huge factor in why he is the way he is.. His only mind is that Geet is his to what he pleases.. He dus everthing hsi way and so should Geet
Now comming to geet's character... according to me she didn't protest enough... i felt her really weak... i expected more anger, resistance... and the line when she said i thought you are my firend...NO remember u said she never liked him, so how can she say that... at least that's how i felt... may b u have ur reasons that are not disclosed yet... In this ff maan's character should be dominating, powerfull, geet should feel suffucated ( hence the title possession ) BUT she should try to stand up at least...
I didnt write it properly.. I guss it was rushed.. They were friends.. But past will show! Geet is supressed at the moment but lets see!
Hope it helps you ! 😳
Me eagerly waiting for the next updt 😊
With all my love and support ! 😊
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