Possession!! MG PLEASE READ NOTE pg1 n link - Page 7

well written update...
eager to know what happens next...
please update soon...

I am sorry but I did not like the update. the reason is you have described SR in too much detail. I would not have mind if SR was happened between Geet and Maan willingly. but it is not happened willingly and it is nor SR but rape I wished you have described it in one line and you could have used some other way to portray Maan's character.

I am not basing you here, I am just putting my POV.

really felt bad for Geet. She had lots of dreams for her marriage and all shattered by Maan. I can except murder but when someone forces himself on girl/woman than I hate that person to the core and even in the end if that person changes or repent for his deed then also I will not be able to forgive him. so for me Maan is dead. now even if he changes his way in future I will not be able to forgive her. I wish he would not have destroyed his 'doll' like this.

woaaah maan is just woaaah! loool i cant find the right words to describe him hahaha

Originally posted by: adorableyosh

I am sorry but I did not like the update. the reason is you have described SR in too much detail. I would not have mind if SR was happened between Geet and Maan willingly. but it is not happened willingly and it is nor SR but rape I wished you have described it in one line and you could have used some other way to portray Maan's character.

I am not basing you here, I am just putting my POV.

really felt bad for Geet. She had lots of dreams for her marriage and all shattered by Maan. I can except murder but when someone forces himself on girl/woman than I hate that person to the core and even in the end if that person changes or repent for his deed then also I will not be able to forgive him. so for me Maan is dead. now even if he changes his way in future I will not be able to forgive her. I wish he would not have destroyed his 'doll' like this.

fabulous update

fab update dear 👏

I thought I'll give you a little Teaser since my head in in this story...

awesome teaser
dear loved it
plz reply to my pm 😉

Nice update... But what happened to dev?

Originally posted by: sweetysumaiya

I thought I'll give you a little Teaser since my head in in this story...

Maan sat there wondering why it was taking Geet so long to bring the coffee. As much as he didn't want to punish her for being late, he knew it had to be done so Geet knows never to be slacking. He looked towards the kitchen and was shoc

'GEEET' He yelled running into the kitchen. It was full of smoke and a slight fire. . He then looked for Geet in the kitchen coughing worrying if she was fine. He grabbed the fire extinguisher and saw she was not there. He was shocked. He then noticed something and smirked.

'very clever Geet..seems like I taught you your lessons well. But there are more to be learnt' Maan smirked.