Originally posted by: misssmily
Wow really nice concept ! Really enjoyed the first part !
From what u described, it will b a dark story just the way i like them 😈, and am expecting lots of analyses about the characters' states of mind, actually with the charcter sketch you put the level really high, because after reading it i have lots of expectations, especially concerning maan's character, his behavior and actions... 😊
I know the character sketch seems really high.. but it seems to hard to portray it.. I will try my best.. there are no promises that it will be perfect. But I am trying.. His actions behaviour will be so dramatical changes and Geet will be stuck in his puzzle
Am eager to see how this story will progress, as for now, i want to say that is a really nice beginning, Maan is indeed possessed , ( and am loving his evilness ^^ ) you clearly let us understand that maan had something to do with dev's desappearance, it will be interesing to see geet reaction when she will know that, hope you don't plan to disclose it that soon , actually i was thinking that it would do a really great twist if disclosed when geet will start to feel something for maan, when she will be in dilemma... but for now i want to see an evil, rude maan😈... As you said maan feels he owns her, and if i didn't guess wrong, for him she is not a "human" she is his pssession, his treasure, something priceless he can lock in his safe, there is no question of her likes and dislikes, or her feelings, it's a fact : she is made for him, It's not just that being with him is the purpose of her life, it is more stronger than that, rather it is the reason of her existence !
I know you are eager.. But me being a writer have to think thorighly and re read and make sure what i write makes sense and I have brought in the things my readers require.. I am not used to writing dark stories.. So it will take time.. I am an amateur in all this..
Yes Maan was part of Dev dissperarance.. No.. Maan will not disclose it asap.. But Dev will try to contact Geet. whether or not he will be successful is to be seen..
Yes Maan thinks of Geet as his possesion and she should do what he says.. And will kepp her always with him.. She should never disrespect him.. A posession obviosuly has a master or owner.. So Geet is more like owned and will have to pretty much Maan says or take the consequences because a master can always punish
With that said, me eargerly waiting for the next part 😳,want to see what happen on the SR ☺️... will try to analyse each part and give my piece of critic as well !
With my love and support !
Zubi 😊
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