'Dus' Fan Fic for saarthi members - Page 2

lovely !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
its amazing yaar..... n yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!! i'm a police officer i'm soo happy...😃 ll check it out the first thing wen i return... till then continu the good work 👍🏼 👍🏼

nice one... 👏

finally....canada...YAY.....lots and lots....of gud action..and thriller scenes...i bet...dont tell me...what will happen next.... 😃

suspense is better...keep it up.... 👏

its a amazing ff tashu 😃 .....gr88888888888 going . 😃 keep it up dear. 👏

Just read all the parts and I must say that it's really nice.

I was so happy reading evry1s replies 😃 ...continuing episode 4 😃

Luv Tashu 😃 🤗

ok..sorry i couldnt update it that day...updating it rite now... 😃

are yaar tashu... wat happened...
been waiting for soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long............................
update it quick........... or else 😡 .................
update it later 😆 😆 😃 😃 😉
but am reallly waiting 😃

Episode 4

(they all reach canada, shahid looks at a white girl)

vivek: gori hai
shahid: jitni gori ho..uthni hi achi hoti hai...vivek
vivek: shut up

(peeps, in this ff...vivek smokes)

shahrukh: yahaan duty pe cigarette kaun peetha hai
vivek: (looks away)
shahrukh: (to vivek) tumne pee hai?
vivek: nahin bhai main kyun....?
shahrukh: mahek kaisi hai?
vivek: mahek kaun hai??!!
shahid: kisi ne eik larki ka naam liya kya...(brushing his hair back with his hand)
shahrukh: mahek meaning smell...yaar tum logh bhi na
cezzu: abh choro is kisay ko...(walks forward)
amna: oh!
(her dupatta is clinged onto cezzu's suit and goes along with him)
cezzu: (turns around) oh sorry
amna: (tries to untie the dupatta) voh... em...
(cezzu continuously looks at her)
cezzu: lao main kar dheta hoon...(unties it)
amna: thanx ( 😊 )
cezzu: my pleasure

sujal: chalo yaar hotel mein sign in karte hai
zayed: (resting his arm on tashu) yeh man i wanna chill
tashu: ( 😃- smiles at zayed and he smiles back)
Shahrukh: well heres our hotel
shirley: wow its so beautiful
shahrukh: (looks at shirley) afterall its my choice
shirley: gud choice, but alot of garoor
shahrukh: excuse me!!
shirley: ur excused, aaj kal ke larkon ko bohat garoor ane laga hai
zeeshan: hum baaki bhi aaj kal ke larkay hai, not olden time type
shahid: well u neva no
(evry1 looks at him)
shahid: what

(evry1 is in their rooms, relaxing)

shahrukh: (announces) tomorrow 4 new officers will be meeting us...to help us in the planning of the terrorists...we don't even know anything of whats going to happen, but its gona be on the 10th day of the 10th month...and it is 2010
zayed: sab details mein dus hi dus hai...kya pata time dus baje ho
shahrukh: u neva know
rahil(getting his gun ready): wel...we will be ready...
amal: yeah..but we need information...I-N-F-O-R-M-A-T-I-O-N....
rahil: chill....!
marriyam: wel..i mean..who is planning 2 do this stuff...on the 1oth of the 10th month...? we should no dat..and it'll be easier 2 get 2 him....
karan: thats true...but shahrukh..u had his name..rite?
shahrukh: no..and it wont make a difference...
tuhina: why..?
shahrukh: bcoz..there r group of them...and how much..we dont no..
anu: probably dus people...
amina: we neva no...
poonam: ok..we hardly eva know anything about what is going 2 happen...guys and gals we need 2 get our research skills on action...
tuhina: why...research skills?
anu: bcoz obviously we r going 2 do research...about this terrorism stuff....rite?
poonam: rite...
karan: ok..me and marriyam will get the research done...and share the information we get....
marriyam: i'll get the laptop started up...
amina: rite..and i'll get my guns ready..
teesha: meaning?
amina: meaning...(grabbing some bullets): load them...(leaves)
sujal: lets rock..boys and gals...
teesha: lets rock..
tuhina: lets rock...

(sujal~teesha trying 2 get some info...sujal is on the pc..and teesha is unpacking)

sujal: r u alrite there?
teesha: yeah...fine...what about u..any info?
sujal: nothing special yet...but will give a call when i find some..
teesha: ok...(putting clothes in the wardrobe): thats my unpacking done...
sujal(luking at the pc): teesha?
teesha: yeah?
sujal: i think i got something...
teesha: u have...?
sujal: its really interesting..(reads on): oh my god...
teesha(luking at pc): what...what happened?
sujal: teesha....call the others here...every single person...this is serious stuff...
teesha: Oh god...(shocked)

How is dat peeps?

Luv Tashu 😃

gr8 part tashu............luved it....
& yay...i am a poloce officer also....with rahil 😳 😆 ..........
very good.... 👏 .cant wait 4 da next one.......

finally!!!!! wait is over!! n definately worth the wait!!
gr8 part tashu 👏
nd now that i'm a police officer... fear me.. n update the ff regularly... okay!!! 😈 😈 😉 😉