'Dus' Fan Fic for saarthi members

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Okay peeps, I want 2 start a new ff...Dus, it will be abt a gang of police officers fightin a crime. the gang of police members will b the saarthi members. This ff will include events that will test these officers, but as always there willl be love in it also.

But if u ppl dnt lyk it den tell me i wont continue.

okay here goes...let's start off with the guyz...

Shahrukh Khan

Well, he dresses wearing a suit at work, but wears jeans and shirt at home, major of the Police Force. Brother of Tashu and Zeeshan. Falls in love with Shirley. Cares for other lives more than his own. Is serious at times, during his work and at home. Lives with Zeeshan, Vivek, Shahid, Zayed and Tashu.

Zayed Khan

He jokes around, he usually wears jeans and a sleeveless shirt. He's caring. He, Tashu, Vivek and Shahid, Rajeev and Zeeshan are all childhood friends. Falls in love with Tashu. Is a police officer. He believes in true love. Cares for all friends, he has grown up with them and has no one apart from them. Lives with Tashu, Shahrukh, Zeeshan, Vivek and Shahid.

Zeeshan a.k.a Dashing Boy

A really nice caring guy. Loves action, which was why he took up his career as a police officer. Younger bro 2 Shahrukh, elder bro to Tashu. Childhood friend with Vivek, Rajeev, Shahid and Zayed. Lives with friends and siblings. Usually wears jeans and a polo neck shirt. Hates His boss Captain Roy…guess who that is yep…RONIT ROY!!

Vivek Oberoi

Very caring about his friends and whom he calls his own. Has no family or no one but like Zayed has been brought up by Shahrukh and others. Usually wears jeans and loose shirt. Is a police officer. Jokes with his friends a lot. Is always there for his friends. Is a harmless flirt.

Shahid Kapoor –

A caring guy, jokes a lot, and flirts with every girl he sees. Dresses with jeans and baggy shirt. Been brought up by Shahrukh. Lives with them lot as well.

Cezzane Khan –

Eldest of all, a brother to Shirley, Rajeev, Karan and Rahil. Starts liking amna at first sight. Brought up his siblings. Runs a business. Believes in true love.

Rajeev Khandelwal –

Second eldest to Karan, Rahil and Shirley. Starts loving Teesha at first sight. Helps Cezzane with his business. Believes in true love. An arrogant guy but changes after meeting Teesha.

Karan Grover –

The third child. Starts liking Marriyam after seeing her at first sight. Helps Cezzane with the business. Wears dark business suits.

Rahil Azam –

The fourth child. Starts liking Amal during love at first sight. Works with his three older brothers in business. Wears dark business suits. A guy who is free of tension and worry, and hardly ever strict.

Ok…now the galz….

Teesha –

Slowly falls in love with Rajeev. Later, starts a job as Rajeev's secretary. Changes his life, when she meets him. Wears trouser suits with short kameez and dupatta. Has shoulder-length hair. Friend of Shirley and Tashu. Room mate with Amna.

Amna –

Starts loving Cezzane. A childhood friend of Cezzane. Has loved him since childhood but always hid her feelings from him. Wears jeans and kurta style with a styled dupatta. Has long hair like Prerna. Friend of Tashu and Shirley. Room mate of Teesha.

Marriyam –

Childhood Friend of Shirley. Starts falling in love with Karan. Lives in a girls hostel. Has hair longer than should-length. Her hair is straight. Wears trouser suits with dupatta.

Amal –

Starts liking Rahil after meeting him. Wears short kameez and trouser suits with dupatta like Pooja from YMLH. Close friend of Tashu. Has gone for a beautician course, but lives with Tashu. Hair is longer than medium length and is curled from the bottom.

Shirley

Helps her brothers in their business. Wears jeans and shirts. Starts to like Shahrukh Khan. Cares about friends. Takes interest in action. Youngest in the family. Has long, wavy, crimped hair.

Tashu

Youngest in the family. A police officer. Jokes and spends time with mates. Wears churidaar, kameez and dupatta at home. Hair is medium length and curled. Later starts to fall in love with Zayed slowly. Friend of Teesha, Amal and Amna.

Plz tell me how you like it...and if you want me to continue.

Luv Tashu😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Itz quite intersting..i liked..it..continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 1

I'm entering a new character sweet_mita, she will be a frend of Tashu also...and will love mr suraj kiran...rahil's twin. i no shirley is going to kill me wen she noes i hav created a twin as well lol.

(a live telecast of a show is going on)
(The host is our sweet Mita)

Mita: So ladies and gentlemen we have here Mr Suraj Kiran, the dazzling performer in saarthi. So suraj ji kya aap humhe batayenge ke aap ko acting mein kaise dil chasp agaya.

Suraj: Well, it was my ambition from childhood.

Mita: okay kewl, so do u hav any siblings?

Suraj: Yes a twin bro and 3 other bros, hu are all business men, and one sister hu also runs our business.

Mita: Thats nice...so suraj ji.....(Mita is interrupted as 20 hijackers come and raid the building)

HJ leader: Everyone silent and put ur hands up (evry1 follows the order)...good...

(next in the camera room...Mr Roy a.k.a Mr bajaj is watching the scene and getting in contact with his officers)

Mr bajaj: officers come in, everybody go into the building in 2 mins...wait for back up i repeat w8 for backup.

Shahrukh: m goin in sir

Mr bajaj: no shahrukh jus w8 2 mins

shahrukh: sir 2 mins is 2 long, main andhar jaa raha hoon.

mr bajaj: oh God. zayed come in zayed.

zayed: zayed reporting sir.

mr b: shahrukh has gone in u n tashu enter in 1 min wen bakup is here. where is tashu?

zayed: tashu is behind me sir...but i'm going in, shahrukh is alone....over n out sir.

mr b: Zayed!! tashu report to the stadium in 45 secs, i repeat 45 secs and not b4!!

tashu: sir, but zayed and bhai r inside.

mr b: tashu!!

tashu: sorry sir, i mean zayed and major r inside.

mr b: thats better.

zeeshan: is ko kya hua, main bhi dekhoo zara ke yeh apne bhai ko major bulatha hai ke nahin

tashu: ( 😆 ) zeeshan shhhh

mr b: tashu enter in remaing 20 secs, i repeat 20 secs.

tashu: sorry sir, m entering nw.

zeeshan: i'm going in nw 2 sir, mera bhi bhai andhar hai.

mr b: noooo zeeshan w8

zeeshan: over n out.

(inside the stadium...shahrukh makes a grand entry, along with zayed, zeeshan and Tashu)

shahrukh: oi, (starts shooting)

suraj: (jumps and saves mite, as the hj's bullet was gonna hit her) come one, run!

hj leader: oi they're gettin away afta them.

mita: where r we goin?

suraj: away from here (grabs her hand and runs, looks at mita's face continusly)

mita: look forward na, n watch ur step incase u hurt urself.

suraj: okay (smiles at her)

(they both exit the building, with the hj afta them...and then vivek comes)

vivek: oi u hj, ur under arrest, hands up!

shahid: pata nahin kahan kahan se ajate ho tum logh.

vivek: hey shahid yaar take him away, i'll tell the kusar bajaj. sir come in sir, shahid is reporting to station with a hj.

mr b: excellent. nw vivek enter the building and help the other 4 officers out.

vivek: yes sir!

(hj leader is arrested later on)

tashu: well thank God ke thats sorted...(starts to look around)

zayed: kya hua.

tashu: where's shahrukh bhaiya and zeeshan bhai?

zayed: oh they went to station to report the hj.

tashu: ok, let's go home.

(next scene...rajeev, rahil, karan, cezzane and shirley r together in the office for lunch)

rajeev: oh God!! abhi khaa ke i have to go and clean up my desk.

cezzane: yaar, if u find it that hard then get a secretary.

rajeev: dekh bhaiya, main ad dhe chuka hoon, bas koi achi secreatry mil jaye tho rakh lenge.

office manager: (rings rajeev) sir, there is a girl hu has come to apply for a secreatry job.

rajeev: send her to my cabin.

shirley: kisko send to your cabin?

rajeev: shirley bacha, shes applying for my secretary

shirley: har koi aise hi kehta hai

karan: haan rajeev har koi aise hi kehta hai

rajeev: meri jaan baksho (leaves)

rahil: bye rajeeeeeeeev

(all bros and sis laugh)

(next scene)

office m: ok sir, miss Teesha u may go in to mr sujals cabin

Teesha: thanks.

(in the cabin)

rajeev: so miss Teesha, this is ur second job. but y did u leave the first one?

Teesha: voh sir....

rajeev: hey neva mind u hav the job

teesha: really!! 😃 i mean thank you

rajeev: (laughs) yeah, okay c u 2moro Teesha

Teesha: ok sir

rajeev: hey no formalities, call me rajeev.

teesha: (😊) okay

(next day...amna is having lunch with shirley, tashu and teesha)

amna: shirley meet tashu and tashu meet shirley

s and t: hi

shirley: so teesha i herd u applied for the job, miilee ke nahin?

teesha: well kya kahu...mujh ko miileeeee ( 😆 )

shirley: kewl, aur tumhara boss kaisa hai?

teesha: acha hai, mazakhya hai, par thora sa garoor hai usse shayad.

(on the table near by, cezanne is having lunch with rajeev..and...2 guys go up to the girls)

guy 1: hi miss (tlkin to teesha) vaise mera number kho gaya hai, tumhara milega?

tashu: oi kya problem hai? jao maa aur behen se yeh savaal poochna phir shayad yahan se javab mile!

shirley: haina, ajate ho thang karne ke liye, batana pooch ke maa se ke kya khaa ke paidha kiya tha usne tumhe!!

amna: (laughs)

rajeev: (sees guys messing with teesha) oi, kya ho raha hai yahan par?

guy 2: yaar tumhe batao yeh sari larkiyan kitni fit hai hena?

rajeev: suna cezzu bhai...is ne kya kahaaa? (getting angry 😡)

cezzu: (pulling his sleeves up) bilkul clean n clear

guy 1: main tho kehta hoon ke dho aap le lo aur dho hum

rajeev: GADHAAAY!! EIK MERI BEHEN HAI AUR EIK MERI SECREATRY, AUR KYA KEH RAHA THA TU!!

guy 2: ok, lekhin yeh wali tho aap ki kuch nahin lagthi na (looks at amna)

cezzane: BATAMEEZ!! (SLAPS THE GUY) TUYMNE AISE SOCH BHI KAISE LIYA (CONTINUES TO BEAT HIM) DAFA HO JAO MERI NAZRON SE!!

cezzane: are you okay?

amna: (hesitates) yeh, um tashu chalo mujhe ghar jana hai, btw thanx cezzane ji

cezzu: jus cezzane thanx.

shirley: call him cezzu if u want

cezzu: shirley

amna: i don't mind....cezzu

cezzu: (smiles at her) come lets go home together, i'll drop u off

sorry i ahve to go to my popos house, i will cont 2nite or 2moz

So howz that so far peeps?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its gr8 yaar.....luv it a lot......interesting hai....specially the language 😆 ...& expressions.... 😆 very kooool yaaar....
cant wait 4 da next ones....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice one sis.....i really liked amna's and cezzu's part....keep it up... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow.......... really great tashu !!!!! 👏
c u'v earned urself auite a fan-following.... atleast i'm a fan now... 😉 😃 😃 😉 ... lov ur language.... its so dus n zayed kind really... 😉 😉 😉
great one👍🏼 👍🏼 waiting4next part 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 2

(karan is on his way 2 work and sees a girl stealing)

karan: hey whose dat? oi rukh ja abhay...chori karta hai, oi rukh jaa, teri tho main aaj...aaah!! (pulls coat off and garbs her hand)

marriyam: (sighing deeply and lookin into his eyes)

(karan continuously stares at her and marriyam is trying to pull her hand away)

marriyam: I'm sorry (bites his arm)

karan: ow!!!

(marriyam turns back repeatedly to look at him)

karan: (smiles to himself 😊 )...huh!! maine tho us ka naam thak nahin jaantha. yaar karan hamesha teri bolthi bandh ho jati hai...naam pooch letha tho tera kya jata....hmph!!

(next scene...shirley is goin 2 work in her car, and it crashes and the other person is no1 other than shahrukh)

shirley: ( 😲 ) excuse me.

(shahrukh turns and looks at the cars)

shahrukh: i'm so sorry ma'am, i rely am.

shirley: well u no wot u shud b.

shahrukh: well ma'am main apne bhai se baat kar raha tha phone pe.

shirley: aap ko fone pe dhehaan dhena chahiye ya car pe? mujhe samajh nahin athi tum loghon ko driving license kaise milthay hai...abh kuch bologay ya yehi aise hi chup khare rahogay ( 😡 ).

shahrukh: well...

shirley: maine apni baat khatam nahin ki

shahrukh: ( laughs 😆 )

shirley: tumhe bari khansi arehi hai na, okay dekhte hai....main abhi police ko phone karti hoon.

shahrukh: uh uh...is ki zaroorat nahin hai...police already yehi par hai

shirley: kahan?

shahrukh: (about to laugh his head off) (shows his badge)

shirley: ( 😲 ) voh um....

shahrukh: haan abh bolo na jo bol rehi thi....( 😆 )(walks away while laughing)

shirley: argh!!!

(next scene...Amal is returning from her beautician course)

Amal: arey driver zara jaldi karo na
driver: acha mem saab
Amal: (thinking-Tashu will be so suprised, when she sees me)

(suddenly a car comes from front and the driver steers the car to the side...where the car falls in towards a valley but gets stuck in a biiiiigggg tree)(the glasses of the windows break)

(After a while Amal regains conscious...and sees the broken windows and remembers that the car crashed, she touches her head and finds she is bleeding...she looks around and sees the driver has gone)

Amal: stupid, namak-haram...shukar hai ke maine usse abhi thak paise nahin diye...(turns to get out a tissue from her purse and sees that her purse is gone) argh!!! that stupid driver!!!

Amal: (😭 ) koi hai bachao!!! please meri madhat karoooo...(the car moves down slowly)...argh!!...(Amal is crying and panicing)...KOI HAI BACHAO!!!

(all people around the dhaba above the valley, rush to see hu is calling for help.

(Then ppl comes our amal's hero...Rahil)

(Rahil hears the screams he runs 2 c whats happened)

Rahil: hato bhai...(looks down and sees amal)

Amal: (looks up and sees rahil) dekhiye aap meri madhat karenge...mera drive rbhi bhaag gaya hai mera purse le ke, aur yeh gaari aistha aistha neche ki taraf chali jaa rehi hai

Rahil: dekhiye just relax, main aap ko nikaalay bina yahan se nahin jaane wala....aap mujhe apna haath dijiye

Amal: mujhse aisa nahin hoga...mujhe bohat darr lagtha hai unchaiyon se

Rahil: dekhiye, aap mujh pe bharosa rakhiye main aap ko kuch nahin hone dhoonga...koshish kijiye...trust me

Amal: ok, reaches out of the car to give her hand and the car moves downwards) Argh!! sorry mujhse nahin hoga.

Rahil: look no problem, main neche ajata hoon...(climbs down slowly and asks amal her name)...aap ka naam kya hai?

Amal: Amal, aur aap ka?

Rahil: Rahil, nice meeting you amal...(He gets into the car)

Amal: same...(the car moves further down)

(the front screen glass breaks and amal falls further down)

Amal: arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

Rahil: amal, give me your hand

(she gives him her hand)

Rahil: koi police ko phone karo...

Amal: mujhe bohat darr lagh raha hai, i think this is the end of me yaar...main tho gaye

Rahil: chup, aise baatein anhin akrte...main tumhara haath nahin chorne wala tho tum jaane ka khayaal chor dho

(both look into each others eyes)

(later tashu, zayed and other backup officers arrive, they get amal and rahil out of the valley)

Tashu: Amal, agar tumh lift chahiye thi tho tum bhai ko fone kar dhethi ya mujhe...aise stupid driver ke saath kyun aye...jise tum jaanthi hi nahin, abh hogaya na purse chori...koi baat nahin lets go home

Amal: haan, eik minute...Rahil?

Rahil: (turns around) oh amal, bolo

Amal: thanks main abh jaa rehi hoon

Rahil: oh ( 😒 )...anyways phir milenge (puts his hand forward, amal shakes his hand)

So hw was dat ppl?

Luv Tashu
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...tashu......good yaaar..i luv it.....
i really liked each & every part of it....
karan~maruim scenes were really very good,Srk~shirley scenes were funny & suprurb & mine~rahil scenes were supurb.... 😳 😉 😆 .....
yaar kiya entry ki hai meri...manna pade ga tumhain......what a zabardast entry...aur woh driver to mile ..i wount leave him.....mmmmm...i will leave him...cauze ushi ki wajah se my hero came to save me.... 😉 ....
really yaar.....that was really kool.......keep up da good work... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow tashu.......... exceptionally amazing 👏
srk-shirley scene was real fun... total sharukh movi type situation... nd the amal-rahil 1 was sooooooooooooo fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! &n bsp; &n bsp; i mean talk abt being lucky!!! to b saved by rahil.... from a mountain top... .. 😉 u don need anything els dear.... 😉 😃 😉
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Episode 3

(in the 1st episode..mita and suraj were pretending 2 be a host and guest..to catch the hijackers in the city but are police officers...)

(cezzu, amna, rajeev, teesha, karan, marriyam, shirley, rahil, suraj all join police force....)

(Mita, Tashu, Zayed, Zeeshan, Shahrukh, Vivek and Shahid have friends around: Anu, Poonam, Tuhina and Amina, Amal - all these ppl r police officers)

(every1 is sitting having coke)

Mita: God those hijackers i thought ke main tho gaye
Shahrukh: hey, officers...baatein baadh mein. abhi everybody conference room mein
shahid: why conference room...?
shahrukh: kyunki..humare ek meeting hai...ok...now..
zayed: uff..theek hai..bhai...chalo..
tashu: oh god...koi personal time nahin milta....
vivek: u should have thought about that before u became a police officer...
shahrukh:ok..all DCs in the conference room..rite now...
zeeshan: will be long nite...what shall we order?
tashu: zeeshan...chinese...
anu: chinese? lets have italian...
tuhina: nah...lets have mexican...
poonam: nah..lets have indian takeaway...
amina: nope...lets have greek takeaway..
zayed(2 amina): do u no there r snails in greek takeaways...? 😆
amina: ugh.....disgusting...
zayed(2 vivek): gals r so gullible...
tashu: gals r not....watch this..guys...(then says 2 shahid): shahid...theres a cute gal over there...
shahid(getting excited): where..?
tashu: guys...r so gullible..haina amal?
amal: rite u r tashu..
zayed(putting his head in his hands): ufff...
zeeshan(mimicking shahrukh): ok...boys and gals...the agenda 4 the meeting is...to name the criminals and plan the mission...ok...now.....
(shahrukh comes behind zeeshan 😛 😆 )
tashu: oh god...major...
zeeshan(mimicking shahrukh): ok...we will be going 2 switzerland....4 a mission..
shahrukh(behind zeeshan):actually..its canada...
zeeshan(unaware its shahrukh): nahin yaar...its swtizerland...
vivek: erm...zeeshan...luk..there...
zeeshan(turnsa round): erm...we r going canada...hehe...
shahrukh: sit down...plz..
zeeshan(sitting in shahrukh's place): sit down bhaiyya..
shahrukh: zeeshan....!!!!
zeeshan: i mean....sit down major...
shahrukh: zeeshan...
zeeshan: what...kya hai..?
shahrukh: wheres yur seat..zeeshan?
zeeshan: oh...ok sorry..(goes and sits in his own place)
shahrukh: ok...4 a mission....we will go 2 canada...
anu: what mission...sir?
shahrukh: that u will find out in canada...
tashu: rite...
shahrukh: ok..i want everybody's bags packed 4 2morrow's flight to canada....ok?
every1: ok..sir
shahrukh: lets rock..boys and gals..
tashu: lets rock...
zayed: lets rock...
shahrukh: zeeshan...contact cezzane and his family....they will be joining us as well....ok..bye(about 2 go)
zeeshan: but major...is that bajaj coming...?
shahrukh(laughs): nah...
zeeshan: wooo-hooooo...lets party..lets rock...boys...and gals...
shahid: gals...wooo-hooooo....
vivek: shut it....u....
zeeshan: ok...c u ppl....i'm going 2 get takeaway..c u at home...
tashu; c ya...
anu: c ya...
zeeshan: ok...come quick(leaves)

(everyone leaves and starts 2 get packing)

How is that, peeps?

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