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congrats for the new thread
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hi!! Congrats on the new thread!! Although im a silent reader, I was overjoyed to c u continuing this FF. Thanx and pleaseee keep writing!!!
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congrats on yr new thread...
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CONGRETS DEAR FOR ONE MORE THREAD OF MOMIMAF

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Part 56

NT was not at peace, she thought that she would not let Geet rest in peace, she smiled evilly and dialed Brij's mobile

B: hello

NT: sir, Dev is dead

B: what? Who is calling?

NT: your well-wisher

B: what is your name?

NT: Dev is no more, he committed suicide

B: what?? Where is Geet?

NT: at KM

And she hung up; she knew that Brij will be here in a matter of few hours much before Mohinder had a chance to talk to anyone.

In the early morning hours Arjun left for Jaipur with NT, and NT was happy that finally Geet will also be in some danger.

Here DM asked everyone to behave normally. And told Geet to go to the college and Maan to office, Geet left before Maan and Maan was held up due to some official formalities relate to Dev's death.

Sometime about 3:45 pm as Maan was leaving security guard called saying Brij was there, DM was shocked and Maan decided to call him in

B: Namaste ji

DM: Namaste

M: um

B looked around: how did this happen?

DM: what?

B: Dev ji, he committed suicide

M: yes, but who told you?

B: I am her veer; I have every right to know if her husband dies

DM: he was not her husband

B: pardon, he was I am the witness and so is my family

M: the Pandit was fake and Dev was already married

B: what?? But you said'

DM: yes because she was pregnant with his child

B: but?

M: Dev died and if you want to morn go to his house

B: this is not his house?

M: no

B: but

DM: he is not a Khurana

B: but

DM: he was Maan's nanny's son

B: his wife?

M: NT

B: where is she?

M: her house

B: what is all this? Call Geet? I want to take her with me

M: she is not here

B: where is she?

DM: that is none of your concern and you are not going to take her from here

B: who will stop me?

M: she is an adult

B (holding his collar): try me, I will take her with me who are you to stop me

DM: his husband

Now it was Maan's turn to be shocked but he decided to keep quite

B: what proof do you have?

DM: you want proof

B: yes (very angry)

DM: Nakul!

N: ji

DM: get that orange file

N: ji

Brij fumes while waiting and Maan is very confused and DM sits there calmly

N: file

DM: um

She shows the file to Brij

DM: see this is there marriage certificate and this is her daughter's birth

Certificate

Brij was rendered speechless, he gave Maan an angry look and fisted his palms and stood up

B: I don't believe in few papers

Just then Geet enters and is horrified to see Brij she steps back in horror and accidentally drops her bag with a thud all turn to look in the direction of sound

B: Geet

He shouts and raises his hand to slap her, Maan holds his hand

M: don't

B: Geet, %^$%%, #$@$@$#, %$%#$@#, %*&%&(&& (abuses her)

Maan slaps him hard

He is taken aback and as security guards drag him out he shouts

B: I will not leave you Maan Singh Khurana, Geet if you ever enter HSPur I will kill you, O Khurane I will not leave you

... to be continued

now I will only update if all of you post at least one comment, a comment with each like...

hope you like the update though it is short
if not feel free to tell

waiting for your responses write soon
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part 57 page 16/12thDEC2011

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for new thread.
Me 1st one who comment.
Awesome part.
I liked it.
I wnt to kil brij & nt.
Brij deserve more slaps.
Continue soon.
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh no!
Ab kya hoga!??!!

NYC update..

Can u pls include sme Maan-angel scenes???
I've always loved dem..

Thnks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...dev is out of picture...when this stupid brij and family will be out of geet's life...hate them...brij will always take decisions on geet's life...hate him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

Oh no!
Ab kya hoga!??!!

NYC update..

Can u pls include sme Maan-angel scenes???
I've always loved dem..

Thnks



thanks for commenting
and yes I will soon include father daughter convo
once this matter is sorted out
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshithaaa

nice update...dev is out of picture...when this stupid brij and family will be out of geet's life...hate them...brij will always take decisions on geet's life...hate him...



yes he is worth hating
some men think woman are born to be ruled and abused
he is out of the story now at least for a long time, he will make his appearance when everyone will forget about him
but that is much later may be after 20-25 parts😉

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