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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: swetha10

congrats on the new thread..

nice update...
luved maan n dadi..
brij deserves more than just slaps..
continue soon


yes he will get more then that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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How that nt is mean and cruel...at lease brij is stright forward in what he thinks...i loved dadi telling that maan and geet are married😉...and maan shocked 🤣for dadi's explanation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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uuu typing... meee waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


in an hour a small update coming

why small😡 shy small😡 why small😡...
small kha or phir off line ho gayi...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: maansee

why small😡 shy small😡 why small😡...
small kha or phir off line ho gayi...😡


I am very much online dear
gussa nahin

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Posted: 13 years ago
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give me 15 mins





Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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comment did the video do justification please

Part 57

Geet was shocked to see Brij, she was trembling with fear, as the guards dragged him out of her sight, she almost collapsed and Maan was quick to hold her before she hit the ground, as he picked her up he heard Brij shouting

B: she is worse then a wh**e, all women deserve to rot in hell, she is his keep, she will sell herself for anything even prostitutes are better then her '.

He would have continued but Maan punched him hard, as he was abusing Geet he fumed in anger and gently placed her unconscious form on the sofa and punched Brij hard to make his nose bleed

Maan had first thought of just throwing him out of Km but now things were different he signaled the guards to leave him and as soon as Brij was free he pounced on Maan, but Maan was ready and he held his fist, Brij tried hard but was not able to free his hand from his grip so he tried to punch him with his free had but that too got held in another grip he struggled to free him

But Maan turned him and clasped his neck and kicked him from back, Brij tried hard to free himself but failed

Meanwhile DM dialed a number, calling commissioner in charge of HSPur and asked him certain things when it was over she went near Maan

DM: Maan leave him

M: ji

But he did not leave him but held him more tightly

DM: Maan let him go

M: ???

DM: trust me

M: ji

And he left him kicking him out of KM

Nakul came with a wet towel and he wiped his sweat and the blood and turned and went to Geet and lifted her up and went to her room, DM followed and indicated Nakul

As he placed her on bed he said

M: DM what were those papers

DM: sorry Maan I did not tell you but

M: but

DM: I knew that someday these people will come to take her and I did not have in my heart to let her go

M: but DM marriage

DM: it was to safe guard her

M: I don't want her to know about it

DM: why?

M: Brij is right this paper marriage can't prove anything, and I don't want Geet to be forced in any relationship

DM: but you love her Maan

M: yes I do, but

DM: she too loves you

M: she thinks that she loves me

DM: pardon

M: DM she has not known any men other then her family and our family, so you never know she would find someone someday

DM: but

M: please DM I don't want another forced relationship, I am at good terms with Sameera but look what happened when we married, please DM

DM: ok Maan but what if she too wants to be your wife

M: we will see to it in future

DM: as you wish

Just then Nakul came in

DM: Maan freshen up I'll be waiting for you for tea

M: ji

Geet did not wake up for dinner and no one woke her up, Angle was taken care of by Maan and when she slept he placed her beside her Maa and went to the outhouse asking Lata to see if Geet wakes up.

He went to the outhouse and tried to sleep, but the fact that he has been legally married to her was not letting him sleep, he was feeling very restless, so he thought about doing some workout and went to the gym

Geet is chased by Brij's men, she sees Maan driving and calls out to him; Maan looks back to see who screamed, and almost collides into a tree; when Maan did not see her she runs but gets Brij slashes her back; she collapses and Brij moves to cut her head when a hand stops his sword...

Maan prevents the sword from cutting Geet. Brij asks Maan what he's doing here, and for him to get lost - "O Khurane get lost"

M: once I stepped forward, I never learnt to step back - what he came here to do, he will do it.

And with that, he punches Brij!
Maan has the sword in his hand, fights Brij's men, and then proceeds to beat up Brij. He watches Brij collapse, and then rushes over to Geet, who is in immense pain. He moves to pick her up, when Brij kicks him from behind. Brij manages to cut Maan a bit, but Maan gets the better hand, and somehow grabs the sword, holds it at Brij's neck

M: back off all of you else I will slash his neck.

Brij's men do so, and

M: run before I change my mind.

Brij scampers off.
The fight being over, he rushes back to Geet, and tries to wake her up. He pushes a strand of hair off her forehead, and she wakes up.

she hugs him and he hugs her back

Suddenly Brij is back with a sword he raises the sword and Geet sees it and screams MAAN!

{Imagine or see episode aired on 1st/2nd June 2010 here is the link https://videos.oneindia.in/watch/43318/geet-hui-sabse-parayi-episode-43-clip-1-6.html}

she suddenly woke at about 11pm, Oh it was a nightmare, she wondered where was she, then she remembered that she had fainted, at present she was sweating because of that bad dream, she looked at Angle who was sleeping peacefully by her side, she covered her with a spread and placed her in a crib and went out of the room closing the door behind,
once outside she ran down the steps and out of the Mansion,
Lata who was going to her quarter after finishing the cleaning saw her entering the outhouse, Lata slowly went to her room and ans settled beside Angle

meanwhile in the outhouse she hurried to his room, he was not there, she panicked and searched for him
she heard a swish swish sound coming from the gym, she ran and found him practicing Tia-chi
she sighed and her legs gave up and she rested her back on the wall and slowly sat down

he heard her anklets and though the was imaging again, but when he heard a thump sound he turned to find her sitting there with her eyes closed

he slowly went near her and touched her shoulder as he sat beside her
she opened her eyes and hugged him

please...now I will only update if all of you post at least one comment, a comment with each like...

more comments and more likes😭

hope you like the update though it is short
if not feel free to tell

waiting for your responses write soon
pls post your comments you know you all are my motivations
and pls don't forget to hit the like button whether you comment or not pls hit the like tab if you like what I have written it only takes a second
Pls hit the
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phone/mobile users if you are not be able to hit the like tab pls pls pls comment, simply say I liked you post

i will pm every one later

part 58 page 33/5thJAN2011

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh gosh hate this brij 😡

hmm hope maan and geet stay together
Edited by zaara2212 - 13 years ago

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