SEDUCTIVE TEMPTATION.. teaser ..pg 136 - Page 34

Originally posted by: pinkybedi

Hey Sia,

I m a regular follower of ur FF.This is a different grey shade of Mann. One thing i nt clear, Mann married Geet due to obsession,which is nt seen anywhere...Then he leaves her to study wihtout keeping contact...what kind of relation he want with her...not clear...Except a one update nowhere it is seen that Mann is feeling som kind of emotional bonding. Thats quite confuing.It seems he jus wan to possess her.

Coming to Geet if her character u wan to show strong n self sufficient then what happened in the past that she was forced to marry inspite of a strong paterntal family.How her parents let her go for Manns trap.Its too jumbled n confusing.

On the top of that lot of things happening in their college...

Don mind i m jut giving my critic view...

I lov this story n follow it...Only want a little clarity...Concept i vry gripping.Try 2 giv little frequent updates to keep the interest of readers alive...Thanx n i apologise in advance if anything u don like...

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Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy

hey pinki ...

well thanks for sharing your views ...

yes the character and behaviour of both maan and geet are different ...

and their relation as you have said is not at all clear ...

and the way in which maan married geet is the most important reason why her family hate khuranas ...

and in the future updates you will come to know how and why ...

and also the reason behind their weried relations ...

i will try to give frequent updates ... then it would be short ones ...

and thanks for liking my story so much ...

and love no need to apologize for any thing ...😃