SEDUCTIVE TEMPTATION.. teaser ..pg 136 - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy




SIA'S NOTE ...

hey gies ...

well many of my readers have asked me few questions and here are the answers to them ...

there is a very DARK PAST of maaneet together that i am reveling ... so this past is the reason of the weried behaviour of geet towards maan ...


if you will read it with little concentation then you will see that maan neither respects nor believs geet which she is well aware off ... and no girl would like to spend time with such a man ... even if he is her husband ...


i have read many stories in IF... and most of them geet is shown as a damsel who is in need of a saviour ... so i have tried to write some thing new where she is strong herself and can fight for the demons in her life ...


as far as maaneet moments goes ... as i have said earlier due to a very dark past ... and a forced marriage at 18 years which was evident in my very first update... geet tries to stay away from maan ...


so till the past is not totally revealed and maan starts to make up for his actions there is no way geet would like to be close with him by her own ...


and the MOST IMPORTANT... maan ..geet ... vikrant and misha are the very impotant characters of this ff ... the theme of this story is practically nothing without vikrant's character in it ... so you have to digest him ...


and my last question ...
do you want this to be a ff or a ss ... if this would be a ff ... then you will have to wait till the past is revealed ...


hope it might have answered you all your queries ...

all i ask is a little patience from you all ... in the future updates you will get the past as well as maneet moments ...

comments... critisism ... questions... queries are welcome ...

love ,
sia ...



please turn it into ff and for you i can bear this vickram



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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx for the note SIA😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part yar
lvd it
thx 4 pm...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it maan is married to geet but he still calls her that girl and he has not spoken to her in a years and she still loves her brother in law loved the pic awesome update thanks for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
love it
poor geet
feel sad 4 her
maan has sooo much anger
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Sia,
I m a regular follower of ur FF.This is a different grey shade of Mann. One thing i nt clear, Mann married Geet due to obsession,which is nt seen anywhere...Then he leaves her to study wihtout keeping contact...what kind of relation he want with her...not clear...Except a one update nowhere it is seen that Mann is feeling som kind of emotional bonding. Thats quite confuing.It seems he jus wan to possess her.
Coming to Geet if her character u wan to show strong n self sufficient then what happened in the past that she was forced to marry inspite of a strong paterntal family.How her parents let her go for Manns trap.Its too jumbled n confusing.
On the top of that lot of things happening in their college...
Don mind i m jut giving my critic view...
I lov this story n follow it...Only want a little clarity...Concept i vry gripping.Try 2 giv little frequent updates to keep the interest of readers alive...Thanx n i apologise in advance if anything u don like...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
luvd it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


I am afraid what punishment maan is going to give Geet...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago


I read ur note and it gives some insight into the story...

I will wait for the whole past to be revealed...

make it FF but please try to update little soon...


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