SEDUCTIVE TEMPTATION.. teaser ..pg 136 - Page 36

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii

awesome update

love it

poor geet

feel sad 4 her

maan has sooo much anger

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: pinkybedi

Hey Sia,

I m a regular follower of ur FF.This is a different grey shade of Mann. One thing i nt clear, Mann married Geet due to obsession,which is nt seen anywhere...Then he leaves her to study wihtout keeping contact...what kind of relation he want with her...not clear...Except a one update nowhere it is seen that Mann is feeling som kind of emotional bonding. Thats quite confuing.It seems he jus wan to possess her.

Coming to Geet if her character u wan to show strong n self sufficient then what happened in the past that she was forced to marry inspite of a strong paterntal family.How her parents let her go for Manns trap.Its too jumbled n confusing.

On the top of that lot of things happening in their college...

Don mind i m jut giving my critic view...

I lov this story n follow it...Only want a little clarity...Concept i vry gripping.Try 2 giv little frequent updates to keep the interest of readers alive...Thanx n i apologise in advance if anything u don like...

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Originally posted by: aminakhan

Great update...
Hopin to c maan in valentine party

Originally posted by: dras123

i like de way u present geet

i luv my sherni

ur ff is totally diff from others ...u show both de angles of people n donot stick dat heroine should only love hero(👏which makes u unique from others)

i am loving ur ff

so, please update soon...

Originally posted by: rsroopali

Originally posted by: vibz88

I read all ur parts in one go but i skipped the coll part too many characters confused me sorry!!coming to maneet can u write more? The first three updates were beautiful and could get so much about maan s insight want to read more! Send me a pm. Just wanted to ask is geet attracted physically to maan but in love with vik?