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Wonderful update..👏
What happened to maan father?
Continue soon
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Mona Nice update.Thank U for Pm ing Me.
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nice story, pls add me in your pm list 😊
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nice update...
awww felt bad for maan...
whoz pic did geet kiss???
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part 27
nice part...
Beeji is really too much...
shes underestimating Maan and his love for his Geet...
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LOVE ALWAYS WINS...
part-3..

maan:mom aap royiye mat papa ko kuch nahi hoga...

sid and riddhima comes out from i.c.u.savitri devi comes and holds sid's arm tightly and asks...

s.d:bete papa teek tho hai na?

sid doesnt reply but just stands with tears in his eyes which were unnoticed by s.d but by maan.

s.d:bete aap chup kyun hai?batayiye na o teek hai na?

sid:ha...mom...te-ek..hai

maan finds that something fishy and sid is trying to hide from his mom.

s.d:hum jaanthe the o teek honge.bhagwan ka shukar hai...hum abhi unhe dekkar aathe hain..

she rushes to i.c.u and riddhima follows her as sid signalls her to go.
maan holds sid's arms and asks...
maan:sid kya hua papa ko sach sach batao aur mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tumne mom ke saamne kuch chupane ki koshish kar rahe the..aakhir baath kya hai?papa ko kuch hua tho nahi na?

sid stills stands with tears in his eyes.when maan insists he hugs maan and cries like a kid.maan breaks the hug and asks..kya hua papa ko muje batao aur tum ro kyun rahe ho?

sid:bro papa had an attack and his life is still in danger.filhal tho injection dekar situation ko sambhal liya hai lekin abhi bhi khatra hai..

maan gets shattered totally.he cannot able to accept it that his dad is in such serious condition because he never had serious problems regarding health and they too never expected it.
meanwhile riddhima screams...aunty
(savitri devi overhears maan and sid's convo and faints...)

sid and maan takes savitri devi to a room to make her conscious and also make her relax.

maan is controlling himself in a great difficulty not to cry infront of sid.so he comes out immediately...
sid requests riddhima to take care of s.d and he goes to inform mayank and nupur...

when he comes out he notices maan in great pain which is coming out in the form of tears...
sid:bro aapne mom aur mujhe dono ko sambhalenge par aapko?
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nupur:muje tumse koi baath nahi karni hai?

mayank comes and hugs her from back side and kisses her on cheek.

mayank:meri princess tho naraz hogayi..

nupur:tum ne mujhe disturbance kaha na..kya mein tumhe disturb karti hoon..?

mayank:hmm
nupur makes baby face and says sach..?
mayank: ha lekin accha lagtha hain..
both smiles at each other...
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geet:"i love u" for being in my life "i love u" for making my life so special.i love u maan...

she once again kisses his photo and smiles..

her phone rings...she attends it and rushes to mayur's room.

geet:mayank sid ka phone aaya tha.o keh raha tha ki uncle ko heart attack aya hai .hume jaldi waha jana chahiye.

mayur:kya??

geet:ha aur maan aur aunty bhi bahuth pareshan hai.hume jaldi chalna chahiye..

three of them reach the hospital
nupur goes and hugs sid who is standing in front of i.c.u..

nupur:bhayya ye kya hogaya hai papa ko.o teek tho hojayenge na.

sid wipes nupur's tears and consoles her saying that their papa will bve fine.
then nupur and mayank goes to i.c.u to see amarnath.

maan:(self thought)
ye kya hogaya papa ko.aur kyun?agar use kuch hogaya tho...nahi aisa nahi ho saktha..

tears are rolling down from maan's eyes...


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suddenly some one caresses maan's face from his right side.maan turns to see who it is...

maan:geet...

he immediately hugs her tightly...and cries...



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precap:
maan:kya baath ho sakthi hai jiski tension ki wajah se papa ki ye haalat hogayi..

hope u guys like it.
sorry for mistakes friends as iam updating it in hurry...
plz press like if u like and leave comments either positive or negative.

-mona

link to next part:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins?pn=15


Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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OSUM PART DEAR

WAITING 4 NEXT

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Nice part dear...
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