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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: renjini263
Awesome update!!!!!!!!! yaar maaneet nd mayur k nok-jhok ache the...:) luvd it
hpe ki woh pakde na jaaye...

plzz cont soon

thanx dear😊
dont worry agar wo pakde bhi jayenge na asani se manage karlenge kyun ki wo maaneet hai😉

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

amazing and emotional part...

continue next part soon...

thanx for pm..

thanx dear😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: anshra

thanx dear😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

thank u sooo much for ur love and support guys..keep supporting me in the same way plzzz i need ur support...

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Samra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

read it late !!

cool lets see !!!!

nice part !!!

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

                     LOVE ALWAYS WINS..

                 part-7
frnds i gave english translations this time for non hindi readers..plz press like and do comment...

maan and geet are still lost in each other...

nupur:pata nahi kaha chale gaye a dono...(where these two have gone?)

finally she finds them busy lost in each other...she goes to them and signalls them that she is there by setting her voice..

but there is no response from them and still lost in their own world..
then she goes more close to them..

nupur:by god..kya scene hai..

maan and geet comes to the reality and instantly moves far away from each other..

maan: nupur..tum?..tum kab ayi?

nupur:tabhi jab tum dono ek doosre mein kho gaye the..(i came here when u both lost in ur own world)

maan and geet feels embarraced and maan instantly..

maan:nahi nupur aisi koi baath nahi hai o...ha wo geet ke aank mein kuch chala gaya tha tho mein..(no nupur not like that geet hav smething in her eye so iam just...

nupur:tho aap use nikaalne mein busy ho gaye the. haina bhai..(so ur trying to remove that..ha bro)

she looks at maan innocently..

maan:wo...(in confused tone)

maan:wo..nupur..mein...wo..

geet who is smiling on maan's situation interrupts..

geet:nupur tum yaha..kuch kaam tha kya?(nupur u? any thing imp?

nupur:(smirks)by god geet hum log waha bhook ke maare mari ja rahe hai aur tu pooch rahi hai ki mein yaha kya kar rahi hoon..
muje pata hai jab tum dono ek saath hothe ho na poore khainaat ko bhool jaathe ho lekin hamara tho fikr karo jo pagalo ki tarah tum dono ka wait kar rahe the..(by god geet we are dying there with hunger   u are asking me that wat iam doing here?i know that if u both are together then u'll forget the entire world but atleast think about us who were waiting like fools)

maan:wo mujhe lagtha hai mom hamein bhula rahi hai shayad...humein jana chahiye..(i think mom is calling us we hav to go nw)

maan is very quick to escape from that place before nupur can say anything..

geet also tries to escape from there..but nupur holds her hand and says..

nupur:(smiling)mein tere liye bahuth kush hoon...(iam very happy for u)

both hug each other..geet breaks the hug.

geet:ab chale..muje bhook lag rahi hai..(iam hungry..let's go nw)

nupur:(teasingly)accha ab bhook lag rahi hai?(oh u r feeling hungry nw..)

geet:chupkar..

both smile and goes to dining room..
every one is having their food..meanwhile,mayank gets a call..
he attends it..

after the call.

mayank:aap sab ko ek kush kabar hai..meri promotion hogayi hai..iam head of the branch office nw aur muje aaj hi join karna hoga..(there is gud nws for u all and the news is that i got promoted and iam head of the branch office nw)

every body feels happy..

nupur:wow mayank ye tho bahuth aachi kabar hai..congrats..(wow this is really a good news)

she hugs him..

geet,maan,sid,s.d also congratulates him..

mayank:mein papa ko batakar aatha hoon..(i'll inform tnis news to papa)

sid,nupur leaves for hospital...

maan:mom mein bhi ek baar papa se milkar aatha hoon..(i'll go and meet papa once)

s.d:ji bete

meanwhile mayank comes down...

mayank:bye maan mein ab chaltha hoon..(bye

maan:teek hai bye..

both hugs..

mayank:di aap ghar ja rahi hai..(di are i gng hme nw)

geet:ab nahi kuch der baad chali jaungi.kyun?(no not now but after sme time)

mayank:kuch nahi bus aise hi..ab mein chaltha hoon di.

he takes sd's blessings and leaves to office..

maan:mom aapne mr.chopra wali file dekha?(mom did u see my file)

s.d:ha bete wo study mein hoga shayad hum abhi doond kar lathe hai..geet bete aap bhi hamare chaliye hamari madad karne..(may be it'll be in study..i'll get it for u nw..
geet plz come with me and help me in searching it)

geet:ji mama chaliye..

geet goes with s.d and while going they throw glances at each other

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in amarnath's room..
maan sits besides amarnath..

maan:papa ab aap kese feel kar rahe hain?(hw are u feeling nw)

amarnath:dont worry bete hum teek hai..(iam fn nw)

maan:papa mein ne decide kar liya hai ki ab se bussiness mein hi sambhalunga aur aap sirf aram karenge..(papa i hav decided that iam gonna handle bussiness nw and u hav to take nw..only rest ha..)

amarnath:ha ha bete ab aapki faisla kese tal sakthe hai hum..waise bhi o sab aap hi ko sambhalna hai na..(ok ok hw can i disagree with ur decision..and u are the one to look after it)

maan smiles...

maan:that's good papa.tho ab se aapko kisi bhi baath ki tension lene ki zaroorat nahi hai..sirf rest karna hai teek hai.(that's gud.so u dnt need to take tension of anything)

amarnath:(self thought)tension kese nahi hogi bete ..agar hum apna wada nahi nibha pa paye tho..(i'll tensed obviously because iam scared of not keeping my promise and loosing it)

his silence breaks as maan calls him out...

maan:papa kya hua..aap kis soch mein pad gaye hai..(wat happened wat u are thinking abt?)

amarnath:kuch nahi bete..hum yehi soch rahe the ki aap ke hote huye hame chinta karne ki zaroorat kya hai..(nothing..iam just thinking that there is no need to take any kind of tension as long as u are with us)

maan:teek hai papa..aap rest karliye mein chaltha hoon..(u take rest..i'll be back again)

maan comes out ...

maan:(self thought)aap jitna bhi koshish karle chupane ki muje pata hai papa koi tho baat zaroor hai jo aapko itna pareshan kar rahi hai..(u are trying to hide something from me that u have no tension abt anything but i know that there is something which is making u restless)

maan starts moving towards study room...

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at hospital:

riddhima is busy in checking some file...sid and nupur arrives there..

nupur:hey hai ridzz

riddhima turns towards them and finds them..but her eyes are very quick to see sid..
riddhima wont reply to nupur and she gets lost in sid..

nupur notices that they are lost in each other..she interrupts by calling out riddhima's name..

she soon comes to her senses..

nupur:are zara hume bhi tho dekho..hum bhi aaye hai bhai ke saath..(hey iam here..

sid and ridz blushes...

nupur:hayee...bhai pata hai aap kitne acche se sharma rahe hai..kitne pyare lag rahe ho..bilkul chote bacche ki tarah..(bro u seems like a small kid when u blush)

sid's face becomes more pink..

meanwhile,nupur's phone rings...

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maan comes to study room and finds geet alone who is busy in searching file..
he comes and twirls her by holding her by waist..

geet:maan aap bhi na..pata hai mein kitna dar gayi thi..(maan u scared me)

maan:ismein darane wali kya baath hai?(wat is there to get scared in this)

she turns towards him...

geet:mujhe kya pata ki aap ho..(how can i guess that it's u)

maan:mere alawa meri mishty ko koun hug kar saktha hai..(how can any other stranger hug u other than me

geet:accha ji aapka naam na, maan singh khurana nahi.. possesive singh khurana honi chahiye..(u should be named as possesive singh khurana)

maan:mishty ek tum hi tho ho jo is msk ko kuch bhi pukar sakthi hai,kisi bhi naam se..

her heart starts melting...

geet:aur is geet par sirf msk ka haq hai.(and this geet belongs to only msk)

both get lost in each other..

meanwhile,geet phone rings..

maan:(self thought) ye phone bhi na.. hamesha galat time par bajthi hai..(this phone always rings on rong time)

geet:ha meera bolo kaha ho tum..(hey meera where are u)

meera:ha geet mein bus aarahi hoon..panch min mein waha pahunch jaungi..(ha iam coming i'll be there in 5 min)

geet:chalo teek hai jaldi aana phir hum saath milkar mere ghar chalthe hai..(ok come soon then we'll start to my home)

geet ends the call and finds maan in front of her..
he hugs her by holding her waist..

maan:kaha jaane ki baat kar rahi thi?aur kiska phone tha?(where do u want to go and who's phn was that?)

geet:o maan meri frnd meera ka phn tha..o yaha aarahi hai..phir hum dono milkar ghar jayenge..(my frnd is cmng here and we'll go to home together)

maan:ghar jaane ki kya zaroorat hai yahi bait kar baath karlo apni dost se..(u can chat with her here itself..wat is the need to go to ur home)

she breaks the hug..

geet:maan o mere saath gappe lagane thodi aarahi hai.. 2 weeks mein hamare exams hai..tho hum dono milkar padayi karne ki soch rahe hai..(she's not coming to chitchat with me..we hav exams in two weeks and thinking to do combined studies,,)

maan:phir bhi yahi se padayi kar sakthi ho na..(still u can study from here)

geet:maan aap bhi na.. mein yaha kese pad sakthi hoon jab mere sare books ghar pe hain..waise bhi agar yaha rahungi na tab mera poora din aapki shararato ko control karne mein hi nikaljayega tho padungi kab?(how can i study here when my books are at home and also if i stay here my whole day will get wasted in controlling ur mischievous things)

maan drags her close to him by holding her waist..

maan:kya kaha tumne..mein shararat kartha hoon?(wat did u say?iam mischievous?)

geet:ji bilkul(exactly)

maan:abhi batata hoon ki shararat kya hoti hai?(ok then i'll show how mischievous iam)

he moves close to her lips..

geet:maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho?koi dekh lega tho?(maan wat are u doing?

maan:wahi.. geet jo abhi abhi tumne kaha..shararat...
waise tumhe mera paas aane se problem hai ya kisi ki dekne se..(iam doing the same wat u said sometime before..and tell me do u hav problem with this intimation or fear of anybody else

geet breathes faster as maan moves close to her..
she tries to stop maan but her voice is not finding any way to come out as their intimation is increasing...
but however she manages to come out..
maan..

but maan is in no mood to listen her..

meanwhile,savitri devi calls out geet...

maan and geet are very quick to part from each other..

maan quickly takes some file and pretend as if he's doing some thing important..

s.d:geet bete mil gayi file?(geet did u find the file?)

geet:nahi mama..

maan doesnt hears geet words as he is tensed by his mom's sudden entry...s.d finds maan there and asks him that wat he's doing there..

maan:o mom mr.chopra ka file pad raha hoon..(mom iam checking mr.chopra's file)

s.d gets flabbergasted..

s.d:kya?abhi geet ne bataya ki file mili nahi..(what?geet said that file is not yet found)

geet who is witnessing all this not able to control her laugh and trying to do..

maan:o mom mein...

meanwhile,he notices nakul entering study room..
he instantly says..

mom..nakul..

she turns towards door and finds nakul..

s.d:nakul aap yaha?(nakul u?)

nakul:oh madam ji geet didi ke liye unki dost aayi hai..meera naam hai uski..(madam some body has come to meet geet and her name is meera)

s.d:teek hai aap jayiye hum geet ko bhejthe hai..(ok i'll send her.u can go nw)

she calls geet and tells her wat nakul said.
geet who has already heard nakul's words hears it again from s.d to escape from there..
she smiles teasingly at maan and goes to meet meera..

s.d:maan bete hum doond lethe hai aapki file tab tak aap bhi neeche jayiye..(i'll search ur file..so u go down and wait for me)

maan:ji mom..
(self thought)thank god bach gaya..

geet comes down and finds meera there...
she goes and hugs meera..

PRECAP:
aadi:we are announcing the names of those whom we selected.
they are...

so frnds this is part-7 i hope u like it..

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-MONA

link to part8:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins?pn=38

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago