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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow very interesting...very beautiful...awesome...loved it dear...plz continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3
feel sorry for Maan and his family...
Geet is now here with Maan...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it... but sooo sad...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh maan's dad had an attack so sad aur savitriji bhi pareshan ho gayi after hearing maan and sid's convo
I really wonder aisa kya tension tha jiski wajah se maan k dad ko itna seroious attack aaya
Geet is still lost in Maan's thoughts par thabhi phone ki ghanti baji and the family comes to know abt the unfortunate incident
Great Geet ne direct jaakar maan ko gale lagaya
but dunno why i really hope k maan k dad kuch aisa na keh de jisse k maaneet judaa ho jaaye
love u Mona
- urs Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aosum... plzz add to ur pm list!!!!!!1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya-

oh maan's dad had an attack so sad aur savitriji bhi pareshan ho gayi after hearing maan and sid's convo

I really wonder aisa kya tension tha jiski wajah se maan k dad ko itna seroious attack aaya
Geet is still lost in Maan's thoughts par thabhi phone ki ghanti baji and the family comes to know abt the unfortunate incident
Great Geet ne direct jaakar maan ko gale lagaya
but dunno why i really hope k maan k dad kuch aisa na keh de jisse k maaneet judaa ho jaaye
love u Mona
- urs Piya





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love u too di❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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                                           LOVE ALWAYS WINS...
part-4.
maan immediately hugs geet and cries out...



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maan:geet...ye sab kya hogaya...papa...

geet breaks the hug,caresses maan's cheek..

maan...kuch nahi hoga uncle ko.o bilkul teek hojayenge.aap dekhna babaji sab teek karlenge...

meanwhile,sid comes there and informs maan that amarnath's reports have come and chief doctor wants to talk to maan.
maan asks geet to take care of s.d and goes to meet doctor along with sid..
they both enters the cabin.
dr:aayiye mr khurana mein aap hi ka wait kar raha tha.plz take ur seat.

maan:thank u doctor.papa ka condition kya hai koi serious wali baath tho nahi hai na.o teek hojayenge na.

dr:relax mr.khurana.mein ne saari reports padli hai.mujhe lagtha hai mr.amarnath ko surgery ki zaroorat hai.

maan and sid:surgery????

dr:gabrane ki koi baath nahi hai mr.khurana bus choti si surgery hai uske baad sab teek ho jayega.

sid:o sab tho teek hai doctor par papa ki ye halat ka waja kya ho sakthi hai.aapko kya lagtha hai is sudden attack kis wajah se hai..

dr:dr. sid saare reports padne ke baad muje aisa laga ki zyada stress lene ki wajah se unhe ye attack aaya hai.shayad koi baath hai jo unhe bahuth pareshan kar rahi hai jiski wajah se unhe stress lena pada..

maan and sid stare at each other with puzzled expression..

maan:ok doctor aap surgery ki tayyari kijiye.aap kuch bhi kijiye lekin papa teek hojana chahiye.

dr:ok mr.khurana aap fikr mat kijiye.hum aapki papa ko cure karne ki poori koshish karenge..aaj raath ko hi surgery hoga fir.
aur dr.sid muje is surgery mein aapki aur dr.riddhima ki help chahiye kyun ki is waqt aap dono hi available hai..muje pata hai aapkeliye a mushkil hoga but is waqt aapko doctor ki tarah sochna chahiye.i think u understand..

sid:ofcourse doctor i'll .mein abhi dr.riddhima ko inform kar detha hoon..

maan and sid comes out of cabin..
maan:aisi koun si baath ho sakthi hai jiski wajah se papa ko itni stress lena pada...

sid:ha bro mein bhi yehi soch raha hoon..

maan:khair..ab ye sab chodo aur surgery ki tayyari karlo.mein tab tak mom ko dekkar aatha.waise bhi bahuth der se unke paas nahi hoon.o pareshan ho rahi hongi..

sid:ji bro..
sid goes to inform riddhima about surgery and maan goes to meet savitri devi.
when maan reach the room in which savitri devi is he see nupur crying badly by hugging mayank.



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mayank:nupur ro mat papa ko kuch nahi hoga.agar tum hi himmat harogi to maa ko koun sambhalega..is waqt dheeraj rakne ka hai..
muje poora vishwas hai papa jaldi teek hojayenge.

maan:ha nupur mayank bilkul teek keh raha hai.

nupur immediately comes and hug maan and again starts crying..
nupur:bhai muje bahuth dar lag raha hai.agar papa ko kuch...
maan stops her by closing her mouth with his hand.

nahi nupur aisa sochna bhi mat.papa ko kuch bhi nahi hoga.kuch bhi nahi..ab bas jaldi se aaso pochlo aur andar chalo mom ko dekthe hai.use hamari zaroorat hai...

nupur:ha bhai aap teek keh rahe hain..
she wipes her tears...
bhai muje geet ne bataya ki aap doctor se milne gaye the.kya kaha doctor ne.papa ki haalat ka wajah kya hai...

mayank:bolo maan kya kaha doctor ne.koi serious baath tho nahi hai?

meanwhile geet comes out of the room and says that s.d is conscious..
maan and mayur goes inside..
maan sits beside savitri devi holds her hand..

maan:mom aap bilkul tension matlijiye papa teek hojayenge.mein abhi abhi doctor se milkar aaraha hoon.un hone kaha ki papa teek hojayenge bus choti si surgery karni padegi o bhi aaj raat ko hi..

mayur,geet,nupur gets tensed but dont bring it out in front of s.d

mayank:surgery???

maan:ha mayank surgery uske baad koi problem nahi hogi.

mayank is about to ask something but maan signals him to not to ask any question there../

s.d:bete aap hum se kuch chupa tho nahi rahe hai na.o sach mein teek hojayenge na..

maan:ha mom.mein bala aapse kuch kyun chupaunga..
geet interrupts...

geet:ha aunty aap dekhiye uncle jaldi teek hojayenge aur aapke paas dhoud kar aayenge.aur jab o apke paas ayenge tab aapko beemar hothe huye dekhliya tho o kya sochenge?yehi na ki hum sab unki gair haazri mein aapka bilkul khayal nahi raka aur hum sab ko unki daat sunni padegi.
nupur:ha maa bilkul teek kaha geet ne.kya aap chahti hai kya ki aapki baccho ko daat pade nahi na..
s.d nods as no with smile on her face..
geet:isliye aap jaldi khana khalijiye aur medicine bhi...
s.d:ha bhete hum khalenge...
maan and mayank smiles and maan thanks geet for making s.d eat..
maan:mom aap khana khalijiye hum abhi aathe hai..

mayank and maan goes out.he says everything to mayank what ever doctor said to him...
mayank:tum ne sahi kiya maan nupur ke saamne kuch na kehkar.warna o pareshan ho jaati..khair ab bus papa ka operation teek se hojaye..

maan:ha mayank i hope the same.
sid comes there..
sid:bro operation ke saare arrangements ho chuke hai.ab bus 2,3 ghate mein shuru hone wala hai..

precap:amarnath's operation.wat happens????

sorry for mistakes guys and for late update.
hope u like this part.plz press like and comment and plz i want long comments.
plz give suggestins and any negative comments if u feel anything odd..
love u all...
-mona

link to next part:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins?pn=20
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
superb
amazing
lovely
gr8 work
fantastic
mindblowing
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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