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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

awesome driving class


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

Wow just awesome..
Loved it cont soon


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thanku so much ana... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: renjini263

Superb update yaar...luvd it!!!!

ohhh maaneet bhi jhagde k bina reh hi nahi sakte...deir fight ws cute ohh geet feeelings realise kar lo ab... luvd it plzz cont soon


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Posted: 13 years ago

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Superb !! very cute update !!! continue soon !! 😊


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Hey awesome part dear... I loved each nd every bit of it specially dat driving one... Oh i was jst having goosebumps over here nd dere fight dat was so cute... Loved it a lot... Waiting eagerly 4 d gud news... Pls update soon ha

p.s sorry cummenting thru cellphone therefore cant put smileys...


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hello friends here is pat 13. hope u liked it.

Chapter 13


Maan n geet went to college n di went to office. Di is working in malhotra constructions as a head architect. Today she is feeling so restless n nervous as today she going to tell her family about her love. Dont know how they will react. After her parents death no one was there with her. But her chachu n chachi never left her. They treated her as their own daughter n gave her a sweet sister like geet. They both became very close n she got 2 brothers maan n karthik. Today she is very happy because of them. She cant see them in pain that too because of her. So she decided what ever be their decision she will respect their decision. Even she has to sacrifice her love she will no matter but she cant hurt them. With this thought she started doing her work.


Here maan n geet reached college. She got down of the car n headed towards her class. In the corridor she saw maan's gang talking with each other. Geet went to them n wished them.

Good morning mam , sir.

They turned n saw her. They smiled at her n pari told

hey geet rite.

Yes mam.

Hey dont call us mam n sir. Yesterday we were just kidding. U call us with our names. N intoduced all. She is sameera, rahul n rohan.

Hi sam, rahul n rohan.

All: hi geet

just then maan too came there n smiled at them. Rohan wants to tease him. He told

hey geet, meet him maan our friend. He is one who ragged u yesterday.

Maan just rolled his eyes seeing his friends nautanki. He stood beside geet.

Geet blushed. Actually she dont know y she is blushing n feeling shy too. But no one noticed her blush expect pari.

Pari (st): oh... tho yaha ek aur love story shuru horaha hain. Interesting!!! they look soo cute together. Made for each other.


Just then sid came there(kababa me haddi... grrr). Actually he is goingg to class but he noticed geet with them so went there.

Hi all. His eyes r on geet only.

Sid (st) : oh god she is very beautiful. I will make her mine. U r only mine geet only mine.

All of them saw him n colour of their faces changed. Maan is burning with anger because he know how geet felt uncomfortable yesterday when he was around. But today still there is 20min time for the class to start n he cant tell her to go even. He cursed under his breath y they came early today.

All of them said hi very weakly.

Maan kept his hands around her shoulder protectively assuring her not to worry.

Just then deepti, swetha entered college n saw them talking in the corridor.

They came to them n wished them.

Deepu: good morning mam, sir. Hi geet

all of them wished her. Same with swetha.


But swetha kept her eyes only on maan n she didnt like the way maan held her. She was burning with jealousy inside but smiling at them. They all talked for sometime n all of them became very good friends. They all liked geet n deepti very much but swetha she n her behaviour arghh they thought. They all r surprised to know that swetha is geet's cousin. Geet is so sweet n swetha... oh no.


n its time to go to classes n they all bid good ye n went to their respective classes. Maan turned back n saw geet going to her class. Pari sw this n whispered to maan

someone is missing someone a lot. Whats the matter boss.

What r u talking about. Really u too became crazy as rohan.

Pari just rolled her eyes n they all went to class.


After college maan n geet went to HM. It was evening 4 when they reashed home. Karthik is already home.

Hey chinna u came early today? Asked geet

I didnt go to college today yaar.

Why what happened asked maan.

Nothing bro just slight fever thats it.

Fever?? did take medicines? First of all did u go to doctor? What he told? Asked maan n geet worried

guys just chill slight fever thats it nothing more. N yes I took medicines.

They both sighed in relief.

Geet went to him checked his forehead.

Hmmm even now slight temp is there go n take rest.


Just then vijaya mom came there with a glass of milk n gave it to karthik.

When u guys came. Go n fresh up I will bring some snacks for u both.

Just then di too came home. Wished all of them. They all went to their respective rooms n freshend. Maan came down n asked vijaya

mama!! papa n dad didnt come still. When will they come.

No maan they r on the way. Any moment they may come.

Just then anand n rishab entered HM. They wished all n went to frenshen up.

After sometime all of them came down n settled on the couch. Pooja bought coffee n snacks for all of them.

Maan what is the matter beta asked rishab.

Papa, dad I want to tell u something important.

We r listenng maan.

Maan saw di who is staring on the floor lowered her head. Maan sighed n started.

wo.. actually we r gng to talk about di. Actually when di was doing her architecture there was a guy named yash. N he told them the whole thing in one go not letting anyone to talk in the middle. Atlast he finished n saw all the elders r staring at him with wide eyes.

They dont know how to react. What to tell. There was silence no one is talking any thing. Just then vijaya spoke

sudha kya hain yeh sab she said in a stern voice.

Di just stood up n layer of tears formed in her eyes.

Chachi I am very sorry. Aap kya kahenge waise hi karoongi. Aap logon keizzazat ke bina main kuch bhi nahi karoongi. Tears rolling down her cheeks.

Just then anand got up n hugged her n di too hugged him.

I am sorry chachu.

Arey pagli y u r saying sorry. What u did. Pyaar karna galat nahi hain.

Papa maine yash se phone pe baat kiya tha. Wo bohot hi acha ladka hain said maan.

Ha dad, mom ek baar aap log jiju se milo na. Plz said geet

anand broke the hug n wiped her tears.

Rishab told aap sab bacho andar chalo. We will discuss n call u later.

They all went to di's room n she sat on the bed lost in her thoughts.

Di dont worry. Sab kuch thik hi hoga dekho told geet

ha di hum sab hain na told maan.

They both sat on either side of her n hugged her sideways.


IN THE HALL:

Karthik entered HM with yash.

Hello everyone there is a surprise for u said karthik

yash entered HM n took blessings from all the elders. All the elders too wished him.

Aap log baat kijiye. Main chalta hu.

Hello aunty n uncle. I am yash malhotra.

Hello mr. malhotra wished anand n rishab.

Plz uncle call me yash.

They just smiled at him n anand told plz have ur seat yash.

They all settled on the couch. Yash started to speak

aunty uncle I n sudha love each other very much. We both r college mates. N I want to marry her with the blessings of elders. Trust me uncle I will keep her happy n safe. She is my life uncle I cant live without sudha.

All the elders r just listening to him n very happy to see pure love. Vijaya got up n about to go anand asked

arey viji where r u going?

Anand hamari beti ki shaadi honewali hain. We should celebrate right? I am going to get sweets.

All r very happy listening to her. Anand n rishab hugged yash.

Thanku very much uncle n aunty.

I am very much happy beta said anand having tears in his eyes.

Vijaya bought sweets n gave it to all.

Main meri damad ko meri haatho se kilati hu. N yash ate them happily.

Thanku so much beta. I know u will keep sudha happy. As a mother I cant stop myself from telling this. Beta sudha lost her parents in a very young age. We all loves her a lot but even though we couldnt take the place of her parents. She misses her parents beta. Apne dukh ke baare mein kabhi bhi baat nahi karti pagli hain wo. Bohot pyaar karti hain humse. Hope u understand her n keep her always happy.

Ji aunty u dont worry. She will be happy its my promise. Aapko pata hain sudha aapke baare mein hi baat karti hain. She loves u a lot. Now I am also very lucky now I am also part of this family. Hain na?

Ji beta aap bhi hamare family hain ab.

By saying this vijaya mom n others became emotional n had tears in their eyes. They all didnt see sudha di who is listening all this from the stairs. She too became emotional n ran towards her chachi n hugged her tight. Vijaya mom also hugged n rubbing her back to calm down.

They broke the hug n di told

chachi who told u that I miss my parents u n chachu loved me very much that I never missed my parents. Today because of u only I am in this position. U r my parents n geet is my sister.

Now maan geet n karthik too came down n hearing all this. They too became emotional. Geet ran to her di n hugged her tight

I love u di. U r my best sister.

The whole atmosphere bacame so emotional. Geet broke the hug n decided to lighten the mood. She winked at maan n karthik.

They understood that she is upto something

di dont u introduce us to jiju.

Now di started blushing n all others smiled at her.

Arey di itna sharma rahi ho. Thik hain main apna jiju se khud milti hu.

She went towards yash n hugged him.

Hello jiju I am geet. Apni hone wali patni ki behen.

Hello saali ji. Aap meri hone wali patni ko kyun tease kar rahi ho.

Acha abi se di ke party mein ho gaye ho aap she said pouting.

All others smiled whole heartedly.

Maan, karthik, geet, di n yash went to the terrace n talked for some time.

Di hugged maan n thankes him.

Thanku very much maan.

Di main aapki bhai hu its my responsibility to keep my sister happy.

Maan karthik talked with yash for somtime.

Ok yaar ab main chalta hu. Its getting late.

Ok jiju said maan.

They all went down leaving yash n sudha alone.

Yash hugged sudha n she too reciprocated the hug.

I am very happy yash.

Even me too sudha. Sab log kitne ache hain. Now I cant wait for our marriage.

Sudha blushed hearing this.

U look very cute when u blush.

Di hid her face in his chest. They both in the same position for some time. They broke the hug n yash kissed on her cheek n told good night.

Good night love.

Good night yash.

Yash n di went down. He bid good bye to all n left from there.


In HM all had their dinner. N enjoyed talking n teasing di.

Sudha beta hum kal jaakar yash ke parents se baat karte hain. Aur engagement aur shaadi ki muhrat nikalte hain.

Ji chachu.


After dinner they went to their respective rooms. It was very peaceful night for all of them. Anand n vijaya r very happy that their elder daughter is getting married.

precap: twist 😲 (past or present)

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