New MG SS... Ye Dooriyaan...Discontinued - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally am here...hihi..

ok update now...dev is such a cry baby...thnk god GEET u got over him as well as meera...at least now am a bit relieved that he wouldnt be the cause of a rift between u too...well i hope so...

lion king...u know i really love the movie...n i actually cried when the lion dad was killed in the first movie...it felt so sad to see him die right in fron t of his son while the son thought he was the one to be blamed...well all due to his evil uncle...i guess am going out of context...haha...but really i love this movie...u kinda reminded me of it...

back to update zahra...else pata nahi what will hiraa do to me...lolzzz...

so geet is the boffin...well shouldnt she be funny...i mean u said it means clever person...but still it sounds funny...at one time i even though ke he was calling her buffoon...haha...i really want geet to keep one for maan now...

oh by the way u were right...mujhe to bas maan se hi matlab...the other characters being hyenas or not didnt really matter...hihi...

see hiraa...u r really keeping me hooked on to this now...it doesnt matter whther updates r short as long as they r daily...hihi...

continue soon n thnxxx sweetie...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zahra15


finally am here...hihi..

ok update now...dev is such a cry baby...thnk god GEET u got over him as well as meera...at least now am a bit relieved that he wouldnt be the cause of a rift between u too...well i hope so...

lion king...u know i really love the movie...n i actually cried when the lion dad was killed in the first movie...it felt so sad to see him die right in fron t of his son while the son thought he was the one to be blamed...well all due to his evil uncle...i guess am going out of context...haha...but really i love this movie...u kinda reminded me of it...

back to update zahra...else pata nahi what will hiraa do to me...lolzzz...

so geet is the boffin...well shouldnt she be funny...i mean u said it means clever person...but still it sounds funny...at one time i even though ke he was calling her buffoon...haha...i really want geet to keep one for maan now...

oh by the way u were right...mujhe to bas maan se hi matlab...the other characters being hyenas or not didnt really matter...hihi...

see hiraa...u r really keeping me hooked on to this now...it doesnt matter whther updates r short as long as they r daily...hihi...

continue soon n thnxxx sweetie...

Really love you zahra for writing such long comments... it really does boost my confidence.
I absolutely loved the movie lion king too... i agree it was so sad when simba blamed himself for his fathers death..
now coming back to ss.😆... hehe geet is very innocent to keep names for someone ...especially if that someone is maan😉😆
im loving the fact you are so hooked to this zahra...abhi toh picture baaki hai mere dost... just keep watching what happens next😉
love you xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wonderful updates..
dev crying over a broken pen was really funny..
luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
nice part :)
cont soon

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very very nice😃 loved ur updates.and the story is going very well 😊really liked how u brought maan into it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! nice ss..i loved it..plz continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update hiraa... luvd it luvd d word Boffin... plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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New MG SS…Ye Dooriyaan… Part 6

Friday 12:40 PM

Well the play went well… actually it was quite funny… firstly Meera forgot to introduce one person at the start and that nearly made us laugh because seriously his face was giving this 'what about me' look… hilarious right? Anyways moving on to the actual play… I think the best part was the song 'I can't wait to be king' it was so much fun dancing and singing to it. And well us hyenas had a good laugh… pun intended *wink*…. And no I was not named boffin… that would just be mean.

Friday 1:10 PM

It was an awesome weather not too cold and not too hot… though it was autumn and the leaves had fallen from the trees but it wasn't cold as it usually is at this time of year. I liked the wind that made my hair move… it made me feel so free.

Meera and me were sitting on the benches finishing our lunch and some boys were having leaf fights… and then Amanpreet and a few others came and threw some leaves on us and that's it, that triggered us off and we all started to have a leaf fight… however there was one person who was standing on the side and not playing with us… Maan… and seeing him not play kinda made me stop too… for some reason I didn't want to play If he didn't, there wasn't much logic behind it but I just didn't feel like playing anymore but it looked like Meera was having fun as she had carried on playing… I just went and sat on the bench staring at Maan… but then he looked my way and I quickly turned my head the other way. Why was I behaving this way… I couldn't I keep my eyes off Maan… hey not in the wrong way ok.

But seriously what was it about him that was attracting me so much towards him. Why couldn't my mind think of anything else anymore… Why?

Friday 6:00 PM

So let's see who is online on MSN… hmm neha… ooh Maan is online.

I type hello to him, but he's taking ages to reply.

Maan: Hi

Geet: How are you?

Maan: I'm good, and you?

Geet: I'm fine thanx. Wat yu up to ?

Maan: hmm nothing much wbu ?

Geet: Same.

OK So this probably the most boring convo one can have… I can't think of anything to say… damn it!

Oh no I think my brother is coming.

Geet: I have to go now… take care bye :)

Maan: ok bye :)

I turn to my younger brother who just ruined a perfectly good chance of getting to know Maan more… curse him.

Geet: What is it Zain?

Zain: This is my room… I can come here whenever I want.

Geet: It's not my fault we only have one computer and that's in YOUR room.

Hmm that's my 7 year old brother… Zain…very annoying but then again very lovable as well… everyones ladla… very pampered as he's the youngest… and I'm not so pampered being in the middle… so basically sandwiched between both my brothers

Oh look just who we needed… my older brother… Amaan… Only 2 years older than me but acts like he is my dad… so annoying.

Amaan: Geet don't you have any homework… whenever I see you you're always on the computer

Ok that is such a lie… in fact I don't think he does anything but lie in front of the TV all day himself… urgghh… see what I mean when I say annoying.

Geet: I was going anyway… I know you want to go on the computer… go ahead I'm not stopping you.

Now I think I'm going to go in to my room and sulk at how life is so unfair… I mean just when I start talking to Maan these two stupid brothers of mine decide to turn up… IT'S JUST NOT FAIR!

Hope you guys liked this part 😳 please do comment (long ones😃) and press the like button

Love you all x

Hiraa x

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