New MG SS... Ye Dooriyaan...Discontinued - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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u know i was actuallywaiting for this...it's 23 33 here...n i was waiting for miss hiraa to update...hihi...this shows to which extent am addicted to this now...hihi...and now i can finally get to bed...

oops...btw am first here for the first time...hehe...🥳...this is nice...lolzzz...😆

ok coming to the update...well as usual..kehne waali baat to nahi...still am gonna mention ke i loved it...hihi...it seems GEET is already smitten by maan else why would SHE care about him being the carefree person she is...hihi...

and then leaf fight...this is amazing...i kinda had one here with my friends long time back...not a real one...but still...n it's very very very enjoying...that's for sure...hehe...

and then the chatting part...well even i dont like it when others take time to reply though i happen to do it at times 😆😆😉...and then the brothers...well i dunno why but i kinda like them...hihi...i mean GEEt being sandwiched between the too...serves her right for being the lazy girl she is...hihi...am joking...

but seriously i love their names...zain n amaan...if u would have strted this ss like 1 mth bak i would have definitely suggested zain for my little baby cousin...n am serious on this...

continue soon n thnxxx...now i can sleep well...hihi...😊
Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Wowww awsomeee superb update loved it sweetu
Hmmm maan geet ki conversion bharne bhi chahiye ;-) hehehe
Hmm zain lolzzz
Mind blowing update sweetu
Cont soon
Love u sooo muchhh xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Lol I remembered to press edit this time lol instead of quote hehe😆
Anyways coming to the update... it was fantastic as usual 😃
You write sooo welll!!!!! 😳 👏
Lol I love Meera 😉😃😳... the leaf fight was good... I remember having one once upon a time hehe😉 😆
Lol Geet is just like me... never know what to say on MSN hehehe 😉😆
Awww poor Geet sandwiched between the brothers... I know how it feels... I have 2 brothers myself hehe 😆
Continue soon sweety... will be waiting
Love you loads and always will
xxx
Edited by Maaneet4everXxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awesome update...
liked maneet convo...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Good One...so like brothers...abhi to pata nahi aur kab kab kabab mein haddi banenge
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
very nice and yes dont we all have extremely annoying brothers( especially older ones😕) who are just waiting to ruin a perfectly wonderful moment😡. but good going Hiraa , u have got me waiting to hear the next part eagerly 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing part
luved it
cont soon

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Great part..
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luvd it...nyc update

luvd wat Geet ws saying.. plz cont soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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New MG SS...Ye Dooriyaan...Part 7

Monday 8:30 AM

Me and Neha as usual were walking to school. Our friendship was increasing day by day' I was becoming more comfortable talking to her and so was she, in fact we went round each other's house quite often now as well... but this increasing friendship with Neha was causing rifts between me and Meera' I mean it wasn't that we didn't talk but since I started to hang round with Neha and her friends my friendship with Meera wasn't the same anymore' Meera wasn't herself when we were with Neha and her friends' and I guess I couldn't blame her, she wasn't like them, she couldn't speak her mind as easily whereas they could and to some extent I could to and I guess she felt left out.

Monday 10:30 AM

Me, Meera, Neha and her other friend Sasha were walking on the field and that's where I saw Maan playing football.

We were circling the field and the whole while I pretty much just looked at him' I loved to look at him' I knew now that slowly I was falling for him but it wasn't the same as it was when I liked Dev' this time I felt a stronger attraction' If I didn't look at him I would be restless... I wanted to talk to him but I don't know how' and whenever he was online my stupid brothers would turn up' to many boy problems in one year' this wasn't fair' why couldn't I just keep my mind straight and not keep falling for guys' I mean what is happening to me' before coming to this school I had never felt anything for a guy' but I knew what I felt for Dev was nothing compared to how much I was feeling for Maan.

Monday 12:00 PM

I love maths and English and Dance I think those are probably the only three subjects I enjoy' the rest I pretty much dread doing.

Here I was sat in English next to Meera' and Maan opposite us and then to his side were his friends. So basically we were all gathered on one table discussing some topic' I noticed how Meera was pretty quiet' she was hardly talking to me' and I knew what the reason was' what I didn't know was the solution.

Me: Meera why are you so quiet? Are you okay?

Meera: yeah I'm fine don't worry

Meera smiled but I could see she wasn't fine, I knew things weren't the same between us anymore.

FEW WEEKS LATER

Saturday 12: 10 PM

I had texted Neha asking her if she wanted to come over'. She said yes and hopefully she'll be here any minute.

School wasn't going so well' there was this girl rather a bully I would say who was annoying Neha and she even went to the limit of prank calling her' how stupid is she' I really felt bad for Neha' she hadn't even done anything and this stupid girl started to harass her.

And on the other hand meera and me had stopped hanging around together... the reason for that was that our big group had split up which meant i was on nehas side and meera on the other... though we had nothing to do with this fight we still had to go along with it.
(Doorbell rings)

Oh I think she's here'

Geet: hey!!

Neha: hi!!

Neha gives me a smile and I let her come in and she goes to say hi to my mum and then we run to my room where we usually stay and talk about stuff'

Neha: so how are you?

Geet: I'm good, what about you?

Neha: Yup I'm good too.

Geet: cool

Yup that's how our conversations started' then we would start talking about random things.

Neha: sooo Geet' how's your ahem ahem MAAN

Ohh god I swear Neha knows how to make me blush' I couldn't say anything for a while'. Oh I forgot to tell you' yup I have realized I have fallen for Maan and I know it and so do my friends' I'm not sure if you can call it love because I mean come on its only been a few months since I've known him' but I know it's much more than just a crush.

Geet: Shut up Neha'

I slap her arm and look away.

Neha: Awww you look so cute when you blush

Geet: I'm not blushing

Neha: oh really thats why your cheeks have gone red

OK sometimes she can be annoying' haha well yes of course I would blush' I mean any normal girl would right?

Geet: forget me' what about you' don't you have any crush??

I wink at her which makes her go all shy.

Guys apology for not updating yesterday... sorry zara i broke the daily dose of yours😆😛...my brain had stopped working i think 😕😆

Anyways Hope you guys liked it... please do comment and press the like button 😳😃

Love you all xx

Hiraa x

Edited by maaneetluver - 13 years ago

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