New MG SS... Ye Dooriyaan...Discontinued

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys,im hiraa, some of you may know me from my other FF Lambi Judaai which i write with my friend saba 😉
Well i thought of writing an SS of my own
This story is based on a true story but will not end that way
So here it goes..
Please do comment and hit the like button and ofcourse let me know if you want me to carry on 😳
Character sketch

Geet- A bubbly and sweet girl. Loves her friends and family to bits. Very nave and innocent, never tries to hurt anybody intentionally. She is quite religious and always looks up to her father who is also very religious. Her only bad thing is her laziness, she loves to sleep.

Meera- Geets best friend. A very intelligent girl, she is quite serious however laughs a lot at times. She and Geet are very close and share each secret of theirs with each other.

Neha- She is Geets neighbour and also very good friend. They also share all their secrets. Though they live right next door, they actually become friends in school. She is very popular so in later life she and Geet do not hang around with each other, but that doesn't mean they are not friends.

Pinky- Another friend of Geet. She is not a very girly girl, she and Geet know each other from start of school however they do not become friends until later in school.

Sasha- Though she acts to be very nice and friendly she is actually quite a trouble maker. She is one of Neha's friends, and one time was Geets friend too.

Maan- A very cheerful and sweet guy, he is very flirtatious however he knows his limits. He is very popular and can easily make new friends because of his charming and charismatic nature. He is a gentle man with the girls, opens doors etc. etc.

Adi- Maans best friend. He know everything about Maan, He is always by Maans side.

Prologue

Why did life have to be so hard? I fell so badly in love that I could see no way out' it felt like I was getting more sucked in each day' but did he feel the same? That was question I always asked myself every day of my life' was it worth going through all this pain' would there be anything at the end of it. Though I knew the answer to all these questions, I never wanted to believe it' or rather I feared to face the truth.

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Character sketch- Above
Prologue- Above Part 1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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God my fingers are hurting after refreshing the page continously for the past 15 minutes lol hehehe
But it was worth it lol hehehe... I made it first!!!!!!! 😆
Awesome start Hiraa... the prologue is just superb 👏
Am sooo eager for the next part!!!!
Can't wait... update soon my sweety 😳
Love you loads
Saba xxx
Edited by Maaneet4everXxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME BABY...

Great start...

continue soon...

Love u sweety...


Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet4everXxX

God my fingers are hurting after refreshing the page continously for the past 15 minutes lol hehehe

But it was worth it lol hehehe... I made it first!!!!!!! 😆
Awesome start Hiraa... the prologue is just superb 👏
Am sooo eager for the next part!!!!
Can't wait... update soon my sweety 😳
Love you loads
Saba xxx

Awww you are sooo sweet Babes😉
love you sooo much
i will try to update as soon as possible
you know how hard it is to find free time
love ya lots xxx
muaah x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey hiru sweet
Mind blowing outstanding loved it very very much
Hmm yeh dooriya...ahem ahem!!... Hehehe *baby naughty smile* lol
Awsome prologue and character sketch
Hey cm continue soon
Love u sooo muchhh xxx
Muahhh xxx
Sehru xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234

Hey hiru sweet
Mind blowing outstanding loved it very very much
Hmm yeh dooriya...ahem ahem!!... Hehehe *baby naughty smile* lol
Awsome prologue and character sketch
Hey cm continue soon
Love u sooo muchhh xxx
Muahhh xxx
Sehru xx

aww im glad you liked it shona
oii naughty baby... CHUP 😆
will definetly continue as soon as possible
love you muuaaah xxx😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetluver


</div>aww im glad you liked it shona
<div>oii naughty baby... CHUP 😆

will definetly continue as soon as possible

love you muuaaah xxx😳



Awww baby ko sharam aagayi 😉 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the character sketch n prologue
plz continue soon n thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice prologue...
looks gr8...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for ur new SS

add me in
Book And Rose Congratulations

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