New MG SS... Ye Dooriyaan...Discontinued - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks im glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye hiraa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...u didnt update yesterday...i was waiting for u...tumne promise tori...chal am not talking to u...baby ko gussa aagaya...hihi...but then no worries...i mean it's ok since today's update is awesome...issiliye maaf kar rahi hoon...hehe...as it is...i cant stay angry with u for long...hehe...

update now...well geet is friend with neha and maybe meera is not really appreciating it...but then i hope ke they nothing will wrong with meera's n geet's friendship...i love both of them together...i mean as friends...ok...hihi...

thnkkk goodness we have maan today...not that we didnt have him...but still i really like how GEET tends to drool over him even thpough she isnt really wanting to...hehe...btw these brothers i tell u...they can be so annoying at times...i can relate to her...i myself i have got two brothers...but then u cant stop loving them...hihi...

bak to update...lolzzz...well meera and geet are no more as before...this is saddy saddy... :(((...i hope neha won't be bad to geet...i mean i hope she doesnt turn negative...else geet will have none for her...and then...GEET has finally realised she has fallen for maan...now this is great...i wonder what maan thinks about her...

aur haan...no need to say sorry...kyunki I JUST DONT LIKE IT...when ,y friends say sorry...ok...and love u for this awesome update...

continue SOON (u can ttake ur time if u wish 😆😛 ...hihi)...and thnxxx for the pm sweetie...love u too...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zahra15

oye hiraa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...u didnt update yesterday...i was waiting for u...tumne promise tori...chal am not talking to u...baby ko gussa aagaya...hihi...but then no worries...i mean it's ok since today's update is awesome...issiliye maaf kar rahi hoon...hehe...as it is...i cant stay angry with u for long...hehe...

update now...well geet is friend with neha and maybe meera is not really appreciating it...but then i hope ke they nothing will wrong with meera's n geet's friendship...i love both of them together...i mean as friends...ok...hihi...

thnkkk goodness we have maan today...not that we didnt have him...but still i really like how GEET tends to drool over him even thpough she isnt really wanting to...hehe...btw these brothers i tell u...they can be so annoying at times...i can relate to her...i myself i have got two brothers...but then u cant stop loving them...hihi...

bak to update...lolzzz...well meera and geet are no more as before...this is saddy saddy... :(((...i hope neha won't be bad to geet...i mean i hope she doesnt turn negative...else geet will have none for her...and then...GEET has finally realised she has fallen for maan...now this is great...i wonder what maan thinks about her...

aur haan...no need to say sorry...kyunki I JUST DONT LIKE IT...when ,y friends say sorry...ok...and love u for this awesome update...

continue SOON (u can ttake ur time if u wish 😆😛 ...hihi)...and thnxxx for the pm sweetie...love u too...

awww yaar i wanted to update yesterday but my brain had stopped working and i couldnt come up with a good part😕
i wasnt sure if this would be good either
but im glad you liked it sweety... now im relaxedTongue
i will try to updare as soon as possible sis 😳
love you lots
muaah x
Hiraa x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow... great update Hiraa!!!!! Loved it a lot 👏😳
Ohhh I hope nothing bad happens between Meera and Geet... these two are meant to be friends
Hehehe Geet can't stop drooling over Maan 😆😉
Continue soon.. waiting eagerly
xxx
Edited by Maaneet4everXxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lolzz awsome update loved it hiru
Ahem ahem geet is blushing hmmm lol
Superb update sweetu
Cont soon muahh xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one...
awww geet is totally gaga over maan..
luved it...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome updtae... ohh Geet has Fallen 4 maan... but Geet nd Meera r nt talking more...:(:( plzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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New MG SS'Ye Dooriyaan'Part 8

A Year later

Wednesday 10:35 PM

It was break time and we were walking around the field' Me, Neha, Sasha and Nandini (another friend of Neha)'. And that's when Maan went past us and all my friends started to tease me by nudging me and saying his name' it was quite embarrassing' I really do wonder if he heard that all that' I really didn't want him know that I liked him' I never expected anything back from him' It's been nearly a year since I fell for him but not once did I expect anything back from him'and even if he did like me back I didn't want to name our relation boyfriend-girlfriend because with that relation came break ups and I really never want my relation with Maan to ever be bitter' I was better off liking him without his knowledge' but how was I to explain that to the others' I know whatever they did was to make me happy' whenever they said 'don't worry, I'm sure he likes you back as well' I always thought in my mind no he doesn't' I could see in his eyes there was no reciprocation, and I didn't mind' it wasn't his fault that I fell for him' I didn't know who to blame' was there anyone to blame' I guess what was at fault was my fate' I and Maan perhaps weren't meant to be.

Wednesday 12:40 PM

Me, Neha and Nandini were sat in the canteen eating our lunch' I wonder where Sasha was' oh there she is.

Sasha: Geet guess what I went to Maan today and said to him that there a girl that likes you

What!! Please tell me she didn't just say what I think she said' how could she why? How? ... I mean what was the need.

Geet: what but why? ... What did he say?

Sasha: You won't believe it' he said he already knows who it is' I asked him who and he said Geet.

Geet: WHAT!! But why did you have to go and tell him Sasha?

Sasha: He already knew anyway.

Geet: yeah and that's because you guys always make it obvious by teasing me every time he goes past.

Sasha: Yeah but listen he also said that he might have some feelings for you but he said he is too young to go out with you. Isn't that cute?

No its not' I didn't want to go out with him in the first place' I never wanted him to know' why she had to go up to him and tell him' why did he have to find out' I know he doesn't like me, he only said that so that I wasn't hurt and I just know It.

Wednesday 5:00 PM

I have to talk to Maan somehow or email him' yeah that's a good idea' I should email him

I'm so glad that we have a laptop now' I opened Hotmail and started to write my email.

Hi

I know you must be feeling quite awkward right now; I never wanted you to find out about this, trust me.

I really hope this will not affect our friendship and things will stay the same between us.

Please do reply as soon as you can

Geet

Wednesday 6:00 PM

Let me check if he has replied or not' hmm no reply'

Wednesday 7:30 PM

I can't take this anymore' why is he not replying' oh wait he just replied' finally.

Hi Geet

Hey I don't feel mad or awkward, I understand don't worry, I really don't want to make you upset but I'm sorry I can't go out with you' I think we're both still too young, I hope you understand

And we will still be friends, nothing will change between us.

Maan :)

I was so relieved to hear that he wasn't mad at me or anything' but I know what he said about us being friends and staying the same would not be true' I knew that things wouldn't be same anymore and that there would be this awkwardness between us.

I could feel tears trickle down my cheeks' I hadn't cried about this up until now' why did I have to like someone who could never be mine' why did I have to have such a strong feeling towards someone' Why was it so hard to forget him'WHY?!

Hope you guys liked it... please do comment... it really motivates me to write more... and of course do press the like button 😳😊

Love you all xx

Hiraa xx

Edited by maaneetluver - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super Duper Update Hiraa!!!!
Feel sooo sorry for Geet... can't believe Sasha actually went up to Maan... don't like her... spiteful... hehehe remember lol
Continue soon... waiting to see whats coming next
xxx

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