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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awsome update waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
awesome update dr,
loved it,
is Karan going to do DNA test...hope yas.
waiting for next dr
continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awesome update
plz next soon
cant w8 jab Geet ko Maan ka pata chalai ga
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
g😃nna update another m😃ve twist n turn 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
When are u going to update
Update soon
Will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
desperately waiting for your update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
don't stop to pm me...

i will read the whole update soon...

yet i need some time to read the entire one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
part 13
nice part...
Maan is weak now...
hope Geet comes to know about this...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update 14


Next Morning

As operation was performed late nite…Adda was still unconscious….n even on other hand Maan was also in deep sleep under medicinal effect of injection…It was about 10 when Lab technician at Kapoor Hospital gav test report to Dr Gupta..Karan not let any one knew reason of samples..even he took it from nurse …n without letting Lab staff about that whose samples these were Karan asked for immediate paternity test..It was Dr Karan's case so done at priority basis.

That person left givin report to Dr Gupta..who was waitin for Adda n Maan's consciousness..n paternity reports

Dr Karan Gupta: Yes I knew this ..I knew this…Maan is father of Geet's daughter…But I hav to take every step with care…..( he murmured lik he had won a great fight )

Outside Adda's room..

Rekha was dozing…n Geet was inside with Adda..no sleep in her eyes.Junior Accountant of hospital came to Rekha.n called her many times.But got no response…She gav jerk to her shoulder.

Rekha woke up…(lik got shoke): Adda to theek hai

Accountant: Ha apki bacchi theek hai abhi nurse ne bataya…main ander nahi ja sakti ..no more persons r allowed …per medicines ka bill hai ..aab tak ka…aap ek lakh submit karva dejiye..other bills ll b cleared on discharge ( she gav slip )

Rekha: Per itne paise….kahan se laye gay( she was tensed)

Accountant: Dekhiye ..aap kasie laye gi..we don't know..jst submit it till afternoon..I means 3 -4 hours…humko bhi data tayar karna…hai…otherwise Doc ll kill us..apka kush nahi jayega

N she handed it to Rekha.She was much upset what to do How she gonna tell all to Geet.From where Geet could get help ? She only had 5000 Rs salary n about same from teutions.There was no other source for her.Rekha suddenly decided to meet Doctor.But Doctor Kapoor was not there so he went to Dr Gupta.

Rekha: Dr may I come in ( she knocked at door)

Dr Gupta who was still thinking what to do having reports in his hands ..gav her permission.

Rekha : Doctor main Rekha hu

Dr Gupta: Ji ?( he not recognized her)

Rekha : Dr I m Adda's Aunty jiski surgery apne kal raat ki thi

Dr Gupta: Oh plz hav a seat( Dr Gupta got a way to find any solution )

Rekha: Dr sahib…main manti hu k Adda k operation main jitna bhi karcha aayega humko he denna hoga…per ek dum hum ek lakh kaise arrange karegay..( she put problem in front of him without twisting )

Dr Gupta: I m not getting..kisne kaha apse bill pay karne ko (he knew Adda's treatment was Maan's irresponsibility as he said ..n Dr Kapoor was aware of this )

Rekha : Accountant ne .

Dr Gupta: what ? …okey plz don't worry I ll deal ( he was frustrated how staff gav bills even asked not for that..But chief account was not there n this she was not aware )

Rekha : Per doctor humko bill to pay karna he hoga…per agar kush kam ho sakke to..Geet bechari itna kahan se layegi…aur hum sabh bhi karre to bakki bill bhi puray nahi ho sakay-gay ….Geet to mushkil se gujara karti hai ..sarra din kaam karke bhi ( she was too much upset n sad for her)

Dr Gupta: But Rekha Ji ..Where is her husband ...Woh kush nahi karte..Even he was not here…?

Rekha :Kehte hai doctor to bhagwan hota hai..or unse kya shipana…Koi nahi hai Geet ka ( she had sadness on face n voice )

Dr Gupta: Main samjha nahi

Rekha : Dr Geet k Pati ne Shadi to kar li …per usko chod kar challa gaya ..uske dusre din..ya kahe shadi ki raat ko he.

Dr Gupta: But why ...koi aisa kaise kar sakta hai ? (he knew she was talking bout Maan)

Rekha: Dr ..Kiya gaya aisa...issi liye to Geet samne hai..12 saal ho gaye..maine usko ghut ghut k jite dekha hai…11 saal ki to Adda he ho gayi hai…usi ek din ki Shadi ki nishani …Apni Bachi ko bachane k liye usne sabh chod diya apne log apni Maa…Papa ..sabh

Dr Gupta: it means she has no one ?( he was surprised n shocked to hear )

Rekha: kehne ko to hum hai..per kon hai hum ? uske dost…uske jaanne walle..per uska rishta koi nahi…yahan takk ki Shahr bhi jo apna tha chod diya apni bacchi k liye ..kahi uske ghar waale uski bachi ko Maar na de…Adda he uski zindgi hai..har rishta..jiske liye woh g rahi hai.Per shayad usko aaj bhi yakeen hai..uska pyar galat nahi ...jhota nahi…jike naam ka Mangal Sutar…aur Sindoor usne nahi chodda (she shouted n busted in tears )

Dr Gupta: Per Rekha Ji ..ho sakta hai us ki koi mazboori ho ?

Rekha: Dr ...mazboori shaadi k theek baad hi aani thi…aur jab Geet uske ghar gayi to usko dhake maar kar ghar se nikaal diya uski Maa ne…kaha bacha gira do…yahi hogi uski problem..apne ghar walo ko bata nahi paya..isse acchi to Geet hai..jisne sab ka mukaabla kiya….kush thi woh apni duniya mai…per jo kal hua..uske ghaab fir se dard karne lage hai…

Dr Gupta: I m sorry Rekha Ji …. My intentions were not to hurt u…aur yahan tak bills ka swaal hai..I ll handle.apko worry karne ki jaroorat nahi..na he koi paisa dene ki ( he consoled)

Rekha : Per doctor kon degga yeh …

Dr Gupta: main hoo na…inssaniyat bhi koi cheese hai…paisa to bahut kamaa sakte hai…per kisi ki madad karke jo dua…aur tasli milti hai us jaise kamayi koi nahi..aur ha koi bhi jaroorat hue plz tell me…n take this for personal use..aur bhi kai jaroorat hoti hai…I know cloths etc kuch nahi layi Geet …aur Aap…brought it for urself. ( he hided coz Maan was behind it...so it was necessary )

Rekah:Dr u r really a God….thanx….

Dr: No Rekha ji let me a person….but don't let Geet know coz she has other problems too ..till Adda theek na ho jaye,

Rekha: Ji doctor


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Posted: 13 years ago
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After Rekha left .Karan collected all information in his mind at one place..n its clear….Maan n Geet were victims of circumstances..n suffering till now….But both were in lov.Dr Karan had DOB of Adda..as on her case reports.He estimated that was exect 9 months after Maan's accident…

Nurse informed Maan was regaining consciousnesses .So he left for him.

Dr Karan: So Mr Khuraana how r u..?

Maan: I m fine Dr Gupta ( he smiled lil bit )…but main Maan se Mr kab ban gaya.( he said in slow n shivering voice)

Dr Karan : jaise main doctor…..let it go…I m teasing u..how r u now?(he put his hand on Maan's cheek)

Maan: Karan ..how is She…?

Dr Karan: She is fine..Dr Kapoor had checked….n waitin for her to b conscious.

Maan: Aur Geet?..Uska husbnad aaya k abhi bhi who akeli hai….?

Dr Karan: Maan pehle tum theek ho jayo…uske baad baat karegay ( he treid to distract him )

Maan: Kyo what's matter Karan..u looked worried ? Geet aur Adda theek hai…

Dr Karan: Both r fine…but u should b aware about ur health now ur blood worked for her …also Maan…If Adda's lif was at risk… it was urs too….coz U had same type of problem…n I was worried about both of you whole nite ( he was really worried)

Maan: My lif my happiness..that was gone away …I was livin with a reason a dream to liv .with her…But now…I ll liv keeping myself away from her..but for her happiness ….I always want k woh kush rahhe ( he looked at Dr n then straight upward )

Dr Karan : Maan she ll hav every happiness if u r by her side ( he cheered )

Maan: But how u know she is same girl …I not told u

Dr Karan: U did that ..what u could do for ur lov…n Adda's declaration form…n other reports cleared She is Geet.To aur kon se Geet ho sakhti hai..jst Maan Ki Geet.

Maan: Meri Geet..woh Meri rahegi..mere andar ...but she is moved ahead…She has daughter lik Adda….She is livin great lif.

Dr Karan : How u can say she is livin a good lif ( he was angry on Maan's self assumptions )

Maan: kyo …kyonki uski ek duniya hai alag sab se judda…woh mujhko bhool gayi lagta hai...issliye to usko koi mere se bhi acha mil gaya hogga..aur woh Adda ki Maa hai…main wahi ka wahi hu..per usko dekh main kush hu….per ek baar usko yeh batana chata hu..I not cheated her.

Dr Karan: Ya u should but wait until Adda completely theek ho jaye….usko aur tension denna theek nahi aur u also not well

Maan: Kya main Adda ko dekh sakta hu…meri Geet ka roop ..usme hogga..

Dr Karan : Ha per woh Geet jaise nahi apne Papa jaise hai…I know…as beautiful as her father ( he gav a hint to Maan coz he wanna mov ahead bit by bit to put it in Maan's mind )

Maan: Tumne dekha hai usko …?

Dr Karan : Kyo u wanna met him…

Maan: Nahi woh…per Ek baar Adda ko dekhna chata hu (he begged with tears)

Dr Karan : wait I ll arrange..let her consciousness back

Dr Karan told him nothing.Coz he wanted not to giv that much jerk to him straight.He had accepted Geet's reality whether that was self created ..but when he gonna know all things ..he can be much exited…n his mental state was not to bear this sudden…But in normal way Karan gonna tell him in lil clues..bit by bit so he could collect it in mind ...Thats good ..He decided to bring Maan n Adda in front of each other.So that Maan can feel some thing ..that himself in her

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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