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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
nice update...
cant wait for maan's reaction on knwing abt he being adda's father..
karan is really sweet...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update
got me in tears😭
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Wonderful update yaar...maan ne 3 bottles diya OMG!!! nd thank god all r safe...:) plz continue soon...its getting interesting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Luvd it yaar...i ws vry touched by dis part plzz cont soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
thnx 4 pm


maan's think geet's married...no pls make mu clear


do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Hey buddies here is next one hop u ll lov this

Part 15


Adda: Mamma Adda promise u..I ll not break it again.Mumma don't b angry .

Geet: Beta I said u I m not angry any more…( she kissed her hand)

Adda: No Mumma not for that….

Geet: for what ? ( she was surprised)

Adda: Pappa was here Maa..He was in my room ..He was crying lookin at me…when I was sleepin…But after that he left ( she gav real reason coz Geet not like Adda to discuss Maan)

Geet: Adda no beta..I told u..u don't hav Papa..Mumma is ur whole world…lik u r mine ?

Adda: No Mumma …He was here ( she was on her words)

Karan was ready for this n he was there for that.So its his turn now.

Karan: Adda …plz beta..I told u not to take stress…Aap theek hongi ..tabhi to hospital se chuti hogi…Aur beta..woh to Uncle thy mere sath kaam karte hai ( he had to make excuse )

Adda: Nahi he was my Papa

Karan : okey Adda I ll bring uncle here….to khud he dekh lena…aap puri tarah hosh main nahi thi isliye apko kush aur lagga.aur woh uncle mujhe yahan milne aaye that..aab maine unko bahar bheja hai…kaam se..n he ll return after some days…Jab woh aaye to apko milwa dengay .okey ( he stroked her face )

Adda: Promise

Karan: Promise

Geet: Dr what she is saying ..U was here to koi milne aaya tha isko

Karan asked her to mov outside…..n gav injection to Adda so that She could sleep..n in this state only this thing was okey .


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Outside.

Geet:Dr who was he ?

Karan: Get ji I know her father is not with u..sorry but Rekha ji told me…per bacchi k samne baat karna theek nahi..He was my assistant….I was here..so he also came here…shayad Adda ko woh apne Papa jaisay lagay…issi liye she said that..aur she was semi conscious to kya patta lagta hai….Bache ki apni duniya hoti hai..jo dekhta hai maan leta hai…( he was much upset making excuses but he had to for Maan )

Geet: okey doctor…..But Rekha told me about bills thanx for that.

Karan: oh no..yeh hamara profession hai…per kissi ki zindgi k aagay kush nahi …U know when I was lik Adda…main apne ek jaan pehchan walle uncle k sath ghumne gaya..unki beti bhi sath thi. Unfortunately we met wth an accident..n His daughter died at same place..But without caring anybody even he was injured he took me to hospital..n doctor said….lil more time was enough to kill me…Due to that incident what he did for me...I overcome ..jst due to uncle now I m doctor ( he was too emotional )

Geet: Koi koi hota hai aap jaisa..jo yaad rakhta hai..

Karan: yaad rakhna chahea…yahan to paise ki baat hai…meri to zindgi ki baat thi….so don't worry about money …if u need any thing ask me…Even I hav a daughter lik Adda…I can understand

N he left afer that Geet was thinking about what doctor said…She was surprised person lik him exist on earth.He was such always help outers.Even if he hided jst for Maan.But if he had to do this o help any one ….He also had done same…without any money .

In Dr's cabin Maan was waitin for Karan.Even he was not in position to sit properly.Coz he wanted some answers from Karan

Maan: I was waitin for u Karan ….

Karan: I know u was waitin ..n u r upset too….But Maan itna beithna tumhare liye theek nahi .

Maan: No Karan I m fine .But why she said me Papa.I m surprised…

Karan: (It means Maan ne nahi sunna jo Adda ne aagay kaha ) ( he thought ) : Maan woh hosh main nahi thi..aur shayad issi liye. Per Geet k aane k baad woh normal ho gayi..hosh main aa gayi.

Maan: Patta nahi Karan..usko pehli baar dekh k kyo lagga main usko pehle se janta hu….

Karan: She is so innocent….now she is recovering…but want observation too..lik u

Maan: Adda to theek..per mujhe kya hua ..I m fine.

Karan: No Maan u r not fine..theek se uth bhi nahi sakte..so plz don't worry about Adda..she is fine..I ll giv u all updates….Promise u ll do what I ll tell

Maan: okey as u wish


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 16


Karan performed Maan's tests.But that were not up to mark His veins had severe swelling ..n much tension was lik a atom bomb for him .

Karan: Kash tum yahan aate he na( he thought ) per tum na aate to Adda ka kya hota ..kya kismet hai tum tenno ki...ek dusare k binna adhure ho...ek dusre k liye ho...fir bhi kitne dur hp ( he placed hand on Maan's head…who was lik unconscious under medicinal effect )

Sister Linda n Dr Sharma had left early morning as road was clear now. It was 1 pm when Geet asked Rekha that she should tell Sister Linda ….about Adda's helath as she was recovering...But she had left phone in hurry n Rekha's battery was down.So Geet asked Rekha to stay with Adda n she left toward reception to made call back to school.

She was at reception when she overheard .Two nurses were in conversation.Nurse Rina n Neha

Rina : Neha how is that patient in room no 12 ….Tumhari duty thi na unke uper

Neha: He is not well…Doctor unko unconscious he rakh rahhe hai…

Rina: Per kaal tak to theek thay…per khoon bhi jaroorat se jayada de diya …

Neha: Ha woh bachi to theek ho gayi..per woh khud bimaar ho gaye.

Rina: aise insaan kahan miltay hai…or woh bachi bahut kismet wali hai

Neha : yeh to hai…kitni pyari hai…aur utna he pyara naam..Adda.

Rina: sach main time se agar kuch na hota to uski jaan khatre main pad jatti...

Geet's face was on other side of them.Other nurse called Neha…so she left n Rina to...Geet was thinking who gav Adda his blood..n put his life in danger.Even doctor not asked him any thing.Without waisting a moment he left toward room no 12 .where Maan was .

She was about to open door when a junior doctor Amit stopped her.

Dr Amit : Madam where r u going ?

Geet: doc mujhe yahan jo admit hai unse milna hai (she was upset)

Dr Amit : per aap nahi mil sakti..injection k karan wo so rahhe hai…aur Dr Gupta not permitted any one to go inside..even any Dr or nurse with out his permission can't go inside.

Geet: per kyo ?

Dr Amit : I don't know..but ha….mental attack ki wajah se he is serious .U can ask Dr Gupta. About that.

In between their talk Dr Gupta came to check Maan

Geet: Doctor kon hai jisne meri bacchi ko bachane k liye apni zindgi daav per laga di..n now I wanna met him..but not getting permission.

Dr Karan: Dr Amit ..I m here so don't worry u can go.

N he left.n now he could talk to Geet.

Dr Karan : Geet Ji .kush chee-say waqt per chod deni theek hoti hai…filhal u should b with Adda….She is fine now but even than she needs her mother.( he diverted her )

Geet: Per dr…why can't I meet him…what's reason …after all.

Dr Karan: My profession I told u…when it comes to any one's lif I never care about cost of that treatment…but this is rule of profession to keep secrecy of patient if he/she wants.

Geet: But why ..iska matlab hai koi khas wajah hai..iske piche..jis kaaran apne koi charge nahi kiya …treatment main..aur uper se koi aisa bhi hai jisne mere uper itna ehsaan kia…now doctor u can't stop me..( she busted in anger)
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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same part sixteen


She pushed Dr Karan n opened door.Before she could see Maan .Dr Karan held her from wrist.

Dr Karan : plz Geet Ji don't do this …( he begged taking plzzz too long )

Geet: No doctor ..I hav to ….don't stop me…I hav all rites to know ( she was about to cry )

Door was half open.But they had forgotten.There conversation had turned into shouting on one another Which disturbed Maan But still in semi consciousness.Bur Dr Karan was not letting her go inside

Maan: Geet .( again ) Geet.

Geet heard n now Dr Karan couldn't do any thing his grip on Geet's wrist loosened

Geet went inside near to his bed.She was stunned..shocked …speechless.Lookin at him without a blink…lik a statue.

Dr Karan: Geet …..plz …come with me …( he wishperd in her ear )

Geet: Dr …( she said only this ….her whole body had started to shiver )

Dr Karan held her from shoulders n brought her outside.She was still speechless.her eyes were continuously lookin at Dr Karan.

Dr Karan : That's why I was stopping u …coz this is not rite time …ek taraf Adda hai ek taraf Maan.

Geet: Maan …aap jante hai Maan ko…( she said lookin in same manner without a blink lik she gonna get answers from Dr Karan's face only )

Dr Karan: Ya ..from his birth…Geet..hamari family aur Maan ki family kai generations se dosti ke rishton mai bandhi hai..n above all I m Maan's doctor (he had to admit)

Geet: U said u were stopping me intentionally It means u know about us…n what he is doing here n kya hua hai usko ...( her voice was shivering )

Dr Karan : relaxe Geet..Com wth me to my cabin..yahan baat nahi ho sakti…

He asked nurse to examine Maan n left with Geet.

Geet: Per Maan...wht happened (she said only this )

Dr Karan : It means u still loves him….u care for him.

Geet: u know about us

Dr Karan: Yes …I know…Even about Adda

Geet: Adda ?

Dr Karan: Adda k Pita Maan hai na..

Geet: Kisne kaha…Maan se Mera aur meri beti ka koi rishta nahi ( she shouted) koi rishta nahi ( n fell on floor )

Dr Karan : Sach main Geet ( he helped her to get up )..lo pani piyo (n he gave her water)

Geet: kyo kyon janna chahte hai aap…aur mujhe yeh samjh nahi aati woh yahan kya kar rahhe hai…aur Adda ko khon kyo diya Maan ne….Maan naam ka garahan ( eclipse) main apni zindgi main fir se nahi chahti Doctor ( she put her head on Karan's shoulder..

Dr Karan : Geet u r lik my sister...but u hav to wait things r not lik that .jaise dikh rahi hai once trust me.. at least lik that u trusted me in Adda's treatment .

Geet: Per doctor ..main apni zindgi mai fir se grahan nahi chahti,.shayad uski ki wajah se meri bachi per aaj yeh mushibat aayi hai

Dr Karan : Geet yeh to waqt he baayega Maan garahan hai…ja tumhari jindgi ki Puranmasi ( full moon ) ( he thought )

Before he could say any thing nurse came running Maan's condition was serious.He had two fits within minutes.


So I hop u gonna lik both parts .. Dearies I m doing my best..plz respond comment n hit lik


J

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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