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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Jahara3k
omgggggg. datz is sooooooooo nice..plz continue.. 😊

thanx a lot

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

Episode #3

Guys this one is last post for today I'll post tomorrow
Angad is still shocked about the words that had come out of his mouth.do I realy love her ????? then someone inside his mind said if u don't love her then why is it that all the time u see her u feel like talking to her for hours? Why is it that u tell her everything before anyone else knows ?
Then Angad gets up yes I luv her and I will tell her today night

Angad is very nervous about telling her a war worse than 2nd world war is raging in his head "if I tell her what will she think of me? I would go down in her eyes she will stop giving me the respect she gives me but what if some other guys asks her and I will be gone for a year I think I should tell her what ever her answer may be I love her and now I feel I loved her all these years" he sits down happily thinking about Kripa's reaction.

Kripa's House
Kripa is sitting and crying ,suddenly a knock is heard and her mum ,Rekha,says
R: beta taiyar ho jao dilip uncle ke yahan jaan hai woh humen kuch surprise dena chahte hain
K(wiping her tears ) mummy mai abhi taiyaar hoti hoon.
K(thinking) why did Angad call me and tell me about the so-called surprise
She is quiet angry with him
But then she thinks its not his fault. Her anger goes down

AT THE PARTY
It was not at all a big party. Only Sharma family and Khanna family and some more close friends were there
Dilip went in the middle and announced the "good news". Another tear fell from Kripa's eyes but she quickly wiped it. She waz happy for Angad. then suddenly Kartik came in the middle and said
"aaj main yahaan ek khas person ko kuch kehna chahta hoon aur who khaas shakhs(person) hai 'kamya'" kamya is amazed and everyone becomes silent "kamya aaj main yeh kehna chahta hoon ki 'I love you'" kamya blushes and kartik continues "kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?""
Kamya(now comes to him) and says (which is almost a whisper) I luv u too"
Everyone starts clapping. After that everyone decides to do the engagement then only. Engagement is done
Kripa is really happy for her sis but then she sees Angad and she returns to her real life.
Everyone starts dancing except Angad and Kripa like always it took time for them to come to each other and start a conversation this time also it took them little time but not so much
A(came near Kripa) : tumne phone kyun kaat diya tha?
K: who ….. woh…. Galti se cut gaya tha
In Background a song starts
Ajeeb dastan hai yeh
Kahan shuru kahan khatam
Ye manzile hai kaun si
na woh samajh sake na hum………………
Kripa is listening to the song and Angad is staring at her
Thinking how beautiful she is and curses himself that why didn't he analyze his feelings before
Suddenly he gets an idea on how to propose her?
He asks Kripa:kripa bahar beach ke paas chalen? yahan boring ho raha hai (Angad's house is near a beach )
Kripa sees everyone very busy so she decides to go with him

Guys this one waz boring but I assure you all next will be romantic
Coming up next :What will be kripa's reaction hearing Angad's feelings 'cuz though she loves him but she also knows that it is not time for all this
Plzzzzz leave comments

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago

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Taniya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

loved it...
it was amazin...
plz cont. soon... 👏 👏 👏

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: taniya_22
loved it...
it was amazin...
plz cont. soon... 👏 👏 👏

THANX A LOT

I WILL CONTINUE TOMORROW😃

DON'T WORRY I WILL UPDATE FAST😉

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Loki

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

wow its amamzin cant wait till nest episode

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Isita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

wow man so coooooooooool 👏
do continue 😛

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

thanx a lot for yr comments 😊
i am going to post the next episode in 25 mins 😉
so plz wait 😳

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Vandana

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

awesome!!!
too good!!!! 👏 👏 👏
love it
plz continue soooooooon

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#19

Episode #4
Recap: Angad asks Kripa to have a walk on the beach.

Angad and Kripa are walking on the beach. It looks very romantic (no no they are not holding hands the view is very romantic) Kripa is on the verge of crying and Angad waz trying to figure out how to tell her?
Suddenly Kripa breaks the silence by her sob yeah she was crying Angad heard this and turned to her
A:KripaK.Kripa tum ro kyun rahi ho?
Main ek saal ke bad aa jaunga plzzzzz Kripa plzzz Kripa mat ro(he didnt know why he said that cuz the relations between them were not like that that Kripa would cry on his going)
Suddenly something happened to Kripa She turned and gave a hug to him a very tight hug Angad is shocked and words started coming out of Kripas mouth
Kripa (shaking a bit and still hugging him she is not in her mind she is very depressed)Angad tum mere saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho ?tum mujhe kyun chod ker jaa rahe ho ? tumhe nahi pata main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon I love u Angad!!!!!!
At these words Kripa comes to her senses and realizes what she had said she leaves Angad there and starts running
Angad is also baffled what Kripa had said but when he sees Kripa running he runs behind with full excitement on his face
A(running) : Kripa ruko plz ruko tumne koi gunaah nahin kiya hai
But Kripa doesnt listens tears are flowing from her eyes she curses herself that she had ruined their friendship
A(still running behind her and he is catching up with her):
Kripa mujhe tumse zarooori baat karni hai plzz Kripa ruko
At that time only Angad gets hold of her hand
Kripa falls down and so does Angad on top of Kripa
They quickly get up
K: maine tumse jo kuch kaha use bhool jao
A: main agar bhol jaaoonga to main zinda nahin reh paunga
Kripa(puzzled) :Angad tum kya keh rahe ho?
Angad moves forward holds her had and says : Kripa tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?(it waz not a Question but a confirmation)
tears are flowing from his eyes ,tears of happiness.
Kripa: Angad tum kyun ro rahe ho?
Angad : pehle tum mere sawal ka jawab do
Kripa(now feeing guilty of making Angad cry but she couldnt tell a lie she saw deep into Angads eyes and automatically she says) Angad haan mai tumse pyaar karti hoon
Angad(very happy): sach main Kripa aur main bhi tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon
Kripa(starts crying):kyyyaa
Angad sees this he says :kripa plz mat ro tumne koi gunah nahin kiya kripa I wanna say u that I LUV U TOO
Kripa just cant believe her ears she is shocked but then the look on his face assured her that those words were the truth
Angad holds Kripas hand and kisses there I really luv u
Kripa looks into his eyes I luv u too and they hug for a long time
A: kripa plzzzz mujhe maaf ker do main soch raha hoon ki main London na jaoon
K: no no u r going Angad u will have to understood?
A: but Kripa I cant leave u
K :u dont have trust on me that I will fall for another guy?
A:no my sweety(both are smiling and their faces are shining)
they both look into each others eyes they again hug and Angad kisses on her cheeks then he moves forward his lips Kripa also moves forward when they are about to kiss kripa moves away and hugs Angad
Angad then asks Kripa what had happened she doesnt answer
Angad let goes off her and sees that Kripa is crying
A: kya hua Kripa ?maine kuch kiya?
K: nahin tumne kuch nahi kia KKK.(after a pause)
Angad yeh sub galat to nahi hai? main abhi bahut young hoon arent we betraying our parents ?
Angad smiles and understands her problems he gives her a very tight hug
A: its not yr lips I want I want yr love and I have already got that
K(now smiling😊) : I luv u Angad
A(also smiling😊): I luv u kripa
They both return to the party after some more time

Kripa remembers what Angad had said to her a few minutes before coming
"hum tumse door hain to kya?
Humara dil to aapke paas hai
Aur aapka humare paas hai
To phir hum juda kahan hue ?
Bus do lashe(bodies) juda huo hain
Kripa remembers and starts smiling but a tear of happiness falls
Immediately she gets a call on her cell
V: I luv u Kripa and I don't want u to cry
She recognizes its Angad's voice and looks up he was calling from far end she nods her head and both are lost in their world
They can't talk to each other cuz Angads friends had come and Angad got to talk to them

Thats it for now guys I hope it waz romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plz leave comments and maybe I'll post the next part soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
Coming up: angad goes to London and what he see there he is very mesmerized(secret)

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago