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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

That was nice!!!! 👏
When will u continue??

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

Episode#5
Hi guys well I am posting this and maybe this will be the last post for today I have to study
It's a bit short
Recap: Kripa and Angad both tell their feelings to each other

After the party is over Kripa makes an excuse that she left her purse inside in real she had left it but she planned to meet Angad
She comes running back and sees Angad in the hall
Everyone has gone to sleep she goes straight and hugs him
A: Kripa kal bahar ghoomne chalen
K: nahin Angad kal mera ek important test hai waise tum kal mere ghar aa rahe ho for dinner
A: really wow!!! Theek hai main tumhe phir call kerta hoon she hears her mother's voice "beta purse mila? jaldi karo late ho raha hai"
Angad gives her the purse and kisses her cheeks and Kripa blushes and gives him a kiss on the cheek
Angad feels hot in that area where she had kissed
She then goes
All this is watched by someone who is it? Well that's a secret
In the next week Angad and Kripa have a lot of fun
And soon the day of their departing cames Angad had already bid goodbye to Kripa in her home 'cuz he couldn't hug her in front of everyone Kripa is crying in her heart but she is not showing it

Soon angad leaves India and reaches London he can't think about anyone else but Kripa
Soon his college starts he mails Kripa daily and calls her twice a week

6 MONTHS pass
Kripa is very happy that her life is full of happiness but will this happiness last?

BACK IN LONDON AT ANGAD'S COLLEGE
Everyone is talking about some new gal taking admission in the college He is not interested his mind is on Kripa suddenly a girl in short minis and sleeveless top passes by
Angad is mesmerized by her beauty
She comes up to him and asks……………….
Well that's it for now guys I know its short but last one waz long

There is entry of a new gal in Angad's life Will that make them apart see in the next episode and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz leave comments

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#23

PLZZZZZZZ GUYS LEAVE COMMENTS 'CUZ THOSE COMMENTS ARE REALLY IMPORTANT IF U GUYS ARE NOT LIKING IT I WILL STOP IT WHEATHER IT BE BAD COMMNTS BUT PLZ LEAVE COMMENTS 😭 😭 😭

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#24

Episode#6
Recap: Angad is in London for 6 months he still loves Kripa
At his college he sees a girl and is mesmerized by her beauty that girl approaches Angad and asks…………

She comes up to Angad and asks "u r also in first year of BCA ad u r the topper of the mid term exams right?"
Angad is totally lost then the girl shakes him
Girls: hello r u there??
A: oh yeah!!! yeah I am the topper
Angad is still looking at that girl
G: hi I am Simone
They both shake hands. Angad is again lost and has a strange feeling he is getting attracted to that girl
A: I am Angad
S: of course I know that
A: how come? (looking puzzled)
S: I am new here so the professor told me to go to u and ask for the notes and stuff
A: oh sure why not!
S: can u give me a tour of this college?
A: why not!!!!!
Angad can't understand whats happening to him he gives Simone a tour of the whole college and waz laughing at his jokes
Suddenly his mobile started ringing
Without seeing the name he answered the call
And guess who it waz????
Well it waz Kripa
K: hi Angad kaise ho who tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi thi to maine call kiya
Angad is going to say something but Simone shouts from back "who is it?!"
K: oh Angad tum abhi bhi college main ho? I am sorry I will call u later and she hangs the phone
Angad comes back to his real life how could he forget Kripa all this time and she didn't even ask who waz that gal who shouted she trusts me so much and I am hanging with this stupid girl who has no self respect
Angad turns to leave saying he had work but suddenly Simone turned him and hugged him and said " thanx a lot for giving me time"
Angad is shocked he just leaves he is feeling guilty
Angad goes and sits down in his room he calls Kripa she says
K: why the hell did u bunk today???????????............................................ ......................
And she goes on with the lecture
Angad is like he won't do it again and stuff they talk for along time Angad comes back to his life (HAS HE?)
where there is only Kripa and there is no place for any 3rd person (IS It?)

that's it for now guys I'll post soon
coming up in next episode: there is a prom night in Angad's college he is the hottest guy there but he is not going to the ball 'cuz Kripa is not there OR WILL HE GO?????????????????

Plzzzzzzzzzzzz leave comments!!!!!! 😭

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#25

guys i think u r not liking my story i think i'll stop it
if no then plzzzzz leave comments and tell me how to improve it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Glamorous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#26

I THOUGHT U WERE GONNA LEAVE BUT U ARE SO CONFUSING :$

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: angads-lover#1
I THOUGHT U WERE GONNA LEAVE BUT U ARE SO CONFUSING :$

well i am not and i know u r joking

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Nosheen

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: angads-lover#1
I THOUGHT U WERE GONNA LEAVE BUT U ARE SO CONFUSING :$

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dun say dat

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#29

Episode #7
This part is going to be really long
RECAP: angad realizes that he is made for Kripa and only Kripa

The next day when he went to college there waz a lot of excitement in the air he came to know that there waz prom night in their college everyone was supposed to bring a partner Angad instantly decided not to go 'cuz Kripa waz her partner who waz not there he started thinking about Kripa
someone shouted his name from the back "ANGAD"
Angad turned and saw Simone she was wearing light blue top and minis
Angad remembered Kripa and turned away Simone caught his hand and said ' what happened ? are u angry with me?"
Angad did not answer and started moving but Simone held him
S: what happened? Why are u looking upset ok lets go for some coffee
A: no I have to go I have to attend class
All this time Angad did not look up
S: oh Angad chalo yaar
A: (Angad looked up) u know how to speak hindi?
S: of course mujhe hindi bolni aati hai
A: u didn't utter a word of hindi yesterday
S: I don't talk much in hindi but I know how to speak hindi
And then a conversation begins with them
Angad forgets about the promise he had made to himself and they have a nice chat
They sit in classes together
After the college is over Simone asks Angad if they could have lunch together Angad readily agrees(he is falling for Simone again)
He doesn't wants to go to a restaurant so they go to Angad's house
Angad starts to cook and Simone makes herself comfortable in the room she sees Kripa's pic then only Angad comes and Simone asks "who is this girls"
A: that's kripa
S: aur ye tumhari kya lagti hai ki iski yahaan phot hai
(she says this raising her eyebrows)
A: oh she is just a friend
Angad is totally under "SIMONES MAGIC"
He forgets everything and is falling for her every sec he takes kripa's photo and keeps it in his bag
(I wanna kill him for that)
When he turns he sees Simone standing behind him he looks into her eyes they get nearer and they kiss for a long time after that Simone tells him that she liked him the moment she saw him in the college both of them go out and have a lot of fun at night Angad returns after dropping her home
Angad has forgotten everything about Kripa and Simone is buzzing on her head
They start going out and on the prom night they go together and kiss in front of everyone they become the hottest couple
Like this 4weeks pass Kripa mailed Angad many times but Angad had forgotten about Kripa all the time he would be either be smooching Simone or partying with her they even studied together all the time well that waz less study more romance
Kripa then stops mailing him thinking he is very busy and doesn't want to bother him she wants him to come back soon
Like this another 2 months pass
Angad has his exams and is planning to go to India suddenly his mobile rings he picks it up "oh Angad its so long I heard from I didn't wanna disturb u but I really mssed u………….." angad is baffled to hear from Kripa but this time he is fully under Simone's magic and just feels guilty that he didn't tell Kripa that he wanna have breakup with her
K(shouting on the phone) : r u there????????
A(coming back to his senses): Kripa I'll call u later I have work
K(impatiently):I just wanna tell topped in boards!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A: congrats and bye I gotta go lecture shuru hone wala hai
K: ok I am sorry Angad I luv u bye
Angad feels a bit uneasy after the talk but when he sees Simone he forgets about Kripa and gives her a kiss
Then he tells that he gotta go India for summer hols
S( with excitement) : cool I am also going to India to visit my parents and grandparents
A: wow u can meet my parents also
S(puzzled ) :for what?
Then only Angad gets a call from his mum
N: beta tum kab aa rahe ho
A: do din main aa raha hoon
And then he comes to know that his elder brother is going to get married

Kripa's room
Kripa is really happy that Angad is coming at last after so many months she will meet her true love

2 days later
Angad's plane lands
Kripa is waiting for him at the airport no one could come as they are busy with the preparations of the wedding
Kripa is waiting for Angad then he sees him coming with a girl
She thinks it must be some friend of Angad she has complete trust on Angad
Angad sees Kripa and looks at Simone
He thinks "What will happen now?"
Kripa goes running to him and hugs him but someone calls out
"angad yeh wahi Kripa hai na?"
A: haan yeh wahi hai
They apart from each other
for a sec as if something really warm had touched him the same feeling he used to get when Kripa used to touch him
But he removes those thoughts from his mind
K: Angad yeh kaun hai
Before Angad could say anything simone said "oh I am his girlfriend for the past 3 months"
Kripa is shocked she looks at Angad all the reality dawns to her she understands why Angad was not in contact with her?
Why was he so uncomfortable while hugging him
a tear falls from Kripa's eyes
Angad's begins to talk but Kripa helds her hand gesturing to stop
She gives him the car keys and says to go himself
K: I have some important work
She leaves
Angad can't speak
Then Simone shakes him
S: Angad use kya hua aur tumhe kyaa hua?
A: nothing lets go I'll drop u home
Angad is feeling very guilty

I hope it waz long enough I will continue tomorrow
Plzzzzzzz leave comments

Coming up in next episode : no on can find Kripa she has not come home from the morning where is she? Is she in danger?

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#30

Episode#8
Recap: Kripa comes to know that Angad no longer loves her she disappears saying that she has some important work

Kripa goes to the beach where Angad had proposed her tears start flowing from her eyes she sits on the sand and remembers what she had written in her diary she takes it out she had stopped writing in it the day Angad had proposed her but carried it everywhere she went she had planned to gift it to Angad suddenly a strong wind blows and the last page opens and she reads those lines which she herself had written
"aaj aap ko khushi mili aur hum ko gum mila.
Aap hume chod kar jaa rahe hain , lekin ye sadma hum kaise bardasht karenge
Aap humara pehla aur aakhri pyaar ho . aap humara sachcha pyaar ho lekin phir kyun aap duur ja rahe hain.
Aap ke jaane se aapko khushi milti hai to aap ki khushi main humari khushi hai"
She reads the last lines again and wipes her tears off she knows she has to live and she will get strength from Angad's happiness she stays the whole day on beach not crying but she is deep in thought she is thinking how her life will be different again for her
She will again live the same life she lived before Angad proposed her but this time she will have good memories of Angad hugging him and kissing him on cheek
A smile is seen over Kripa's face

Angad's house
Ring!!!ring!!!!
The phone is ringing
Angad is the only one at home he is having strange feelings
He goes up and picks up the phone
Rekha (kripa's mum)
R: hello angad beta kya Kripa wahan hai use kaho ki ghar aa jaye mujhe kuch kaam hai
A(shocked):aunty Kripa to yaahan nahi hai
And explains that she had some important work and had left that on the airport only
Rekha is very worried
Kripa had left her cell phone at home
Kripa is still deep in thought
Angad assures Rekha that he will find her
Some how Angad knows where Kripa is he goes out of the house and automatically his steps take him to the beach where Kripa is sitting he spots Kripa
He runs towards her he sees a diary lying and then he whispers "KRIPA"
Kripa looks up and sees Angad she wants to run into his arms but holds her back and gets up and turns and starts walking leaving her diary Angad sees this he takes the diary and reads what written a tear falls from his eyes then he calls for Kripa again but Kripa doesn't listen she keeps on walking Angad runs after her and holds her by hand and then gives her the diary she takes it
A: Kripa plz don't be angry with me ---
K(cutting Angad in the middle of the sentence) : Angad main tumse gussa nahi hoon I just want to spend time alone it is completely on u which gal u like tumhara aur mera koi rishta nahi hai main tumse gussa nahi hoon lekin mujhe abhi kisi se baat nahi karni tum abhi bhi mere achche dost ho
She then again turns but Angad holds her back
A: Kripa tumhare mummy papa bahut worried hain plzzzzz ghar chalo I promised I will bring u home plz for yr parents sake
Kripa agrees on the way they don't talk tears are flowing from Kripa's eyes but she wipes them remebbering that Angad's happiness is her happiness Angad is feeling very unhappy and a question is hovering over his mind "do I really love Simone ?" he is in deep thoughts when Kripa breaks the silence
K: Angad tumne mere saath jo kiya plzz Simone ke saath mat karna tum Simone se sachcha pyaar karte ho na?
Angad is not able to speak but makes a resolution that he will love Simone forever (well will he)
After a pause Angad says yes I love her Kripa
Another tear falls down
A song is played in the background
Mubarake tumhe kit um kisi ke noor ho gayeeee
Kisi ke itne paas ho ki sabse door ho gaye
Ajeeb dasta hai ye kahan shuru kahan khatam
Ye manzilen hai kaun si na woh samajh sake na hum
Ajeeb dasta hai ye…………………………………..

I hope u like this one I was planning to write tomorrow but I thought I would post today
Plzzzzzzzzz leave comments
P.S Angad can't analyze his feelings about Kripa and Simone Is he in truly love with Simone KAISA YE PYAAR HAI

Coming up in next episode: kartik and Kamya's marriage
Simone creates a scene ……………………..
Check out for next episode

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago

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