Her complete submission-Maaneet FF#2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Due to all your support, likes and comments I am starting a new Thread for this FF. So my BIG BIG thanks to all of you.
Story so Far
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Maan comes to stay in Geet's house to build up his career and get a family love at the age of 16 as he is completely broken due to losing his parents.
He was Geet's good friend but due to the situation he has completely changed. His complete concentration his on his career and he don't let anything other effect him. While he is Geet's house Geet starts falling in love with him, she can feel his pain and admires him for his dedication and hard work. She wants to sooth him.
But Maan starts getting effected by Geet's presence, she effects him badly and thus he tries to keep her away from himself. And in that process he use harsh ways and words towards her. Maan's ego also doesn't like him getting effected by Geet and he starts getting angry on her whenever she approaches him and uses hurting words. Geet is so much in love with him that she takes them all.
Maan leaves home for his career and re-establish his family bussiness while Geet goes to college to pursue higher studies. They meet after along time in Geet;s sisters marraige and some ccircumstances happens then and family start looking for Geet's Match which Geet doesn't like at all. She knows Maan doesn't love her but she has given herself to Maan.
Maan gets restless that Geet will be married to someone else and he comes and proposes to Geet and they immediatly get married.But Maan ego is not liking the fact that he have to bend in front of Geet to make her marry him. And this ego of his starts giving a silent torture to Geet. his behaviour towards her keep breaking her from within slowly but his humiliation doesn't stop and Geet starts going away from Maan while he starts falling for her charm but wont accept. One day Maan says something so harsh that the already broken Geet breaks down completely and her love for Maan goes in Remorse.
Thanks
--Anu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for new thread
pls continue soon
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Congo on the new thread ,,,, looking forward to the next update!!
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congo for new thread dear
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Congratulations Anu...waiitng for the next update
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congo 4r new thread
Waiting 4r updats
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Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Congrats for opening new thread
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Congrats for the new thread
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Congrats for the new thread.

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