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Posted: 13 years ago
now he will learn to neve take anything for granted
and i understand geet she is not zeak or helpless or anything
she is a girl deeply in love with someone that she zill give her life if he asked with the hope that her love so,eday zill break the ice aroud his heart and zar, it to make a place in it for her it is not desgracing to wo,en or anything like so,eone said a zhile back it represent the deepness of a womens heart because when we love we love deep
now for maan he zill suffer to death when he sees what he has done to so,eone zho loved hi, deep and uncondencialy he sufecated a love that he ziil yearn for long to get it back
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsu update
nw maan will realise wa geet went thru
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good
maan's situation is well writtened
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waitinggg for next part.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm part...nw maan will undrstnd d pain of geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
post the next part plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey plz add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
Will u update today 😳 ???
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Friends...
On all your request for early update on this FF I am posting next part.
Hope you like it.
--Anu
Part 15

Maan just held to Geet dress for a while trying to feel her'..

"kuch bhi nahi bataya mujhe Geet '. Kyun'. "

He sat there in his room'. Looking at the empty room'. He then thinks Annies word, Annie was expecting him to know everything' did Geet give them that impression'. Maybe she left for just few days and as he himself was on tour she could not convey him

But then seeing the room' where none of Geet stuff was there except her worn cloth which he kept stuck to his heart he knew somewhere it was for longer period or did she leave him

"No" he shouted "Geet can never leave me, I know that'. Who meri hai, bas meri "

But a fear surrounded him'.. a sudden realization made him feel his life was nothing without Geet'.. he will get her back what ever it takes'.

"But 1st I need to know' why has Geet left for London and for how long" it felt impossible to saty away from her'. Only the thought that she has left him shattered all his ego'. Fear of loosing her was much much big'. He had never known this'.

But he have to wait till morning but till then'.

He went on the Geet's side of Bed and sat there'. Spreading his hands on the bed'. Trying to feel Geet

He just sat there thinking about Geet' how she gets ready for office'. How she gets ready for bed'. Geet is just everywhere in his mind'.

"Geet aoona'." Came out from his mouth even surprising him of the way he said'.

His mind is just wandering here and there with her thought'. He remembers how he had proposed her for marriage and she did say "Yes".

He then realized how he had been restless at that time and only marrying her have brought peace to him'.

He tries to sleep but is not able to'. "Geet London mein hai aur main yahan akela' Geet this is not possible'. I can't stay in this room without you''" he is restless and then again takes her dress and lays his head on it'.

His thought then wanders to their dfferent encounter'. His mind goes o their childhood, then tou when they were little grown up''

All he could realize was how she had always come to him and how he had been affected by her and how he had pushed her away'.

"What was her fault'. Main apne jazbatoo pe kabo nahi ker pata tha to usse sataya maine'.. she never uttered a word'. Hamesha mera satth he diya' never complained"

His heart has completely taken over his Mind and Ego now'.. only the thought that Geet was gone' he knew somewhere she will never leave him but the smallest fear that if she will made his heart overtake the situation completely'..

He then doses off in almost morning'..lots left to analyse yet

It was only at noon that he woke up'. He saw his room and realized Geet has left for London'.. he have to find out everything' he wanted to call her but' but he did not have her number either'.

"What?? I don't even have my wife's number" he needed that'.

He will talk directly to Geet or else everyone will have doubt about their relation

After lunch'

"Annie, can I get your mobile for few minutes' I need to make important cal and my phone is not charged"

"Sure bahi" said annie

Maan rushed to his room amd 1st noted down her number in his cell'.

He then tried to call Geet but the number is not working'..

Maan goes to Annie

"Annie you don't even have corrects number of Geet'. its not working"

Annie:"Bhai you are so much missing Geet that you even forgot' her international roaming is not working'.. she has disabled it"

"What?? " Maan goes blank'.. why did she do it, a sudden fear again encircles him

"Why you don't know' you should have not let her do this'. I am just surprised"

"No I know'. Actually it just slipped my mind'." Maan tried not to let Annnie with any clue.

"Bhai take care' so many things slipping from you mind regarding Geet'. Hope she doesn't slips away" Annie said jokingly but it was not at all the joke for Maan

"Annie mind your words"

He cannot ask Annie more questions as she will definitely doubt now

Maan is all more restless now'. Geet has disabled her number, but why

He comes to his room completely restless and helpless'.

"Kyun Geet kyun'. Aise achanak kyun' " he looks at his room completely helpless'. Wanting to somehow bring Geet back' he will settle everything then'

He restlessly sits down on the ground closed his eyes tight to take the pain'. A small drop of tears was about to come but he controls'.

"No I will have her back' she is mine' she has always belonged to me'.." he thought sternly'..

He have yet to find out for how long geet was gone' maybe a week' Ohh no that seemed too long' he felt suffocated in his own room without Geet'

In London

Geet knows if she is all alone she will think of Maan so she always tries to keep herself surrounded with Meera and Yash'.

She tries to have as much fun time with them so as to keep herself completely diverted'. She will now not let him trouble her'. Love can never go away' it's so deep but she can try to keep the situation under control' will not give him any power on her now'. She needed to be happy' happy for her family

They joined their office there and at night all three had dinner together' Yash Making all kind of fun talks' teasing girls and also taking proper care of them'.

Next to be continued

Next Part 16

Precap: Maan restless, trying to find Geet's detail

will PM later
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😃Yay me first😳
Amazing
Finally Maan realising Geets importance in his life.. Hopefully some maneet scenes soon.. X
Edited by Saj110 - 13 years ago

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