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Posted: 13 years ago
only 10days passed?? superb updates. geet is superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow, bindu,
thank u dear,
but what do i do, love this one...so please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 18
nice part...
poor Maan but what can he do now...
he has created this and made this to go to this level all by himself when Geet was caring and loving to him...
but good that hes realizing everything...
his possessive nature for her has been from the beginning but has taken her for granted...
still she would have forgiven him only if he hadnt hurt her so much after marriage...
Geet is still unable to believe him and is hoping it to be true that hes missing her or changing...
when she comes back shes gonna see him so much changed...
he has always believed her but its his insecurity then and now too when it came to her guy friends...
duffer dher se hi sahi at least now hes getting it all and is gonna sort them...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg both hurting themselves😭😭😭
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..
superb.
Awesome update...
liked it...
fabulous...
happy that maan is changing.

keep writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
maan is so restless n in pain
but now also geet is suffering
waiting to see what is he planning??
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just read ur note about the pace of the update.
True it's slow but then the calm winds r always slow paced and
Devastating storms have immense speed. ... In the nut shell it's all good news then :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
I may not be able to give any update on weekend s here is the bonus update today.
I have read all your comments and requests and so I will show all kind of woeing but they will all come slowly as the story will proceed.
Thanks,
Anu
Part 19
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Then one day Maan decides its geeting hard this way and after a long thought he decides that only if he can keep himself busy for Geet he can have some kind of mental rest.

He gave a lot of thought as what he could eally do for Geet that too Big…. It has to be something really worth her…. It can never be compared to what pain he had given her and how he had destroyed her love filled heart but he can at least do something….

So after a two day of long thought…..he decided what only Maan could decide…. No… not flowers or gifts…. Those were the things not in his dictionary till now as whole his life he has just spent either working or dedicating his life for his company or being restless about Geet…..

So now he was going to do something for Geet …. So his conclusion was only one….. He will start a completely new venture and unit in name of Geet… for Geet…he will start it and geet can carry on as she wishes…. He will make it among one of his big unit…. He will invest whatever way she will want in it but he has to start it before she comes so that it comes up in some shape before she comes….

But something has to be of her interest…. And what was her interest…Daam all he knew about her that she was interested in her career so that he will give her but what was her other interest….

It had been 4 more days and he thought he could call Geet now… while talking he can figure out her interest…..

"Hello… can I talk to Geet please" meera had picked the phone as Geet was still in office…

"Geet is not available now… I will ask her to call you back…."

Geet came back but she never called Maan….

"itne der ho gayee… Geet did not call me back…." Maan wondered…

He again called…..this time Meera didn't pick so Geet has to pick the phone…

"Hello"

"Geet main Maan…. How are you" Geet wanted to cut short…. She really was confused and scared with his new tone…

"who Maan.. I am OK…. Actually hell busy… how are you…." She felt odd asking him as he has never given her that right of asking him how he was…

"Theek hoon…. Tumse baat kerne ka dil kiya… tumhara nahi kerta na…." he felt as if his throat will choke…. Geet felt pain with his word but all she believed was this was a trap… she cannot imagine any other reason of his softening….

"Actually it's so busy over here… I get too tired by the time I come home…. Abhi bhi main bilkul…." Maan felt the distance in her voice…. How can his Geet, who always just thought of him does not want to talk to him coz she is tiered.

"you don't feel like talking now…. Bhoot thakee ho na…."

"haan who.. actually"

"it's Ok we will talk later" He disconnected the phone…. His heart was crying like anything

"yeh maine kya ker diya…. Geet mujhse dur mat jaoo aise…. Main sab karoonga tumharee khushi ke liye…. I will do everything for your happiness but don't distance yourself…. I will die"

Geet on the other hand felt pain for whatever she did… she knew this was needed but it pained deeply…..

"why does he call and make me do this….. it hurts so much… "

Dadima came to Maan's room and saw him lost…

Dadima:"Maan are you Ok beta…. Kya ho gaya hai appko"

"nothing Dadima… I am fine.. was just thinking something"

Dadima smailed "Geet kee yaad aa rahee hai… why did you let her go for so long"

"Only if I had known she was leaving for so long" Maan thinks

He then diverts the topic….

Now it has been more 10 days and in between…. Maan plans for the investment, location of office…. And factoy location but he had no idea of what unit he is going to start…..

He had tried 2-3 times to talk to Geet in this between but Geet was sometime busy, sometimes not available and sometime too tired…. And one day she said

"Actually I will call you back when I am not that loaded…. You please don't take trouble" Geet had to say this as everytime saying him no gave her pain and she thought she was getting weak and can not do this anymore…. She wanted to be strong and he was just making her more weak

Maan got the hint of what Geet said….. may be after what he has done she was not comfortable talking to him from far…. After that Maan decided to not trouble her….

"I will wait for when you come Geet"

He then one day went to Geet's home and after meeting everyone he sat with Nandini

"Achcha tell me what are the things of Geet's interest other than work"

"you don't know… she is your wife" "offcourse I know… but there are few things that girls share among them…. Main Geet ke bare me sab janna chata hoon"

"Interest…. Hmmm.. actually she loves designing clothes…. Herself she will wear same kind of dresses must she always puts her experiment on me and Rajji didi…. I really miss that so much… her designs were awesome…. Apart from world"

"She is apart from world" Maan Thinks (bohut jaldi pata chal gaya Maan babu).

Maan then leaves and now he exactly knew what he have to do… he was going to open a complete unit of Garments… from raw materials to designer clothes… ethnics westerns…. He will give the foundation and Geet will take over… it will be a BIG unit…

He started working on it madly….. day and night… contacting experts in the field… hiring best….Geeting idea of location… space needed and everything…..he even took over some small industries in that sector…. Day and night work of two months and some sensible base was visible…… now it was almost 2 and half months for Geet to be gone….

On the dinner time

Annie:"ohhh I had a special talk with someone special today….."

Maan was lost in his work….

Annie:"Bhai news to appko bhi mili hogee na…. then why are you pretending to be unknown"

Maan:"kaisee news"

Annie:"No wonder you don't know coz only thing that matters for you is your business and it's expansion"

"Kya news hai.. that you are so excited"

Annie:"Geet called me today" now Maan was super alert….

Annie:"her work there is ending and she will be back in 10days…. She has booked her tickets and date are…XYZ"

This was a sudden news….. unexpected happiness for Maan…. He didn't mind her not calling him… he knew by now she will not but he knew he will make her happy by all means once she is back…. She was just upset and he was sure she loved him so much…. She will never be able to say him no if they are together….

Next to be continued

Precap:Maan goes to receive Geet

Keep liking and commenting😊😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey...Awsome update...really good part...continue soon :)
Edited by Miss-Riz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aesome lovely mind blowing update

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