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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear...
loved it...😊

eagerly waiting 4 the next update😍
Edited by disha_Maan.GC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okz dear. No problem. Waiting for 2nite's update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ME WAITING WITH MY MEDICAL TEXT BOOK IN MY HANDS...WILL WAIT..FOR U NW TANKX TO U WILL WAIT FOR UR POST WITOUT SLEEPING...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thans for such a good story and all the effort you took
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz jst post it .. hw much time r gng to tk????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
Sorry for making you all wait for so long. I just got stuck with something as usual.
I have tried to reply to many of you but missed some as I had to give two updates today. So please bear with me for that.
But if you can browse to reply I have given to all you will definitly get answer to all your question.
Last but not the least, Thanks to all of you so so much for all your encouragement.
--Anu
Part 20
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This was a sudden news….. unexpected happiness for Maan…. He didn't mind her not calling him… he knew by now she will not but he knew he will make her happy by all means once she is back…. She was just upset and he was sure she loved him so much…. She will never be able to say him no if they are together….

Maans happiness knew no bounds… now he will fix everything… once Geet is with him, things will be easier…. Ohhh so much easier…. He will pour his heart out to her, accept all his mistakes, will keep her happy in any ways and then they will be together and he will make her forget all the previous pain he had given her….

(sab kuch aapke hisab se nahi hota Maan babu)

He went to talk to Annie and Dadima

"I will go and receive Geet but please don't pass this to her… it will be a surprise for her"

Dadima and Annnie had for the first time heard Maan expressive about what he was doing for Geet so they felt very happy …. It's not that they had any doubt about the couples realtion but hearing none talk about each other anytime there was some unknown worry within them… they felt relieved.

He sat in his room as to what he can do to make Geet feel this is where she belong…. After thinking a lot he caled Annie

"Ji Bhai" Annie said

"Annie you are Geet's friend, so you know her very well.. why don't you do something for her"

Annie felt a little different… never heard her brother talk these things… he only talked of bussiness, or her career or keeping check on what's going on in her life…. Never expressed anything about his personal feeling and especially about Geet…. But she felt happy… she always wanted to have friend in her brother but she always got a guardian…. But she never complained as she was sure he loved and cared for her utmost.

"Jaise"

"you know her taste and she has 10 more days to come…. Why don't you change the decor of this room, like something that suits her choice and style….."

Off course he knew only little about her choices…. He will now know everything, he promised himself…..

Maan had to take his time off when Geet comes … so he had to finish office work in these days…..

Maan went busy with his office work, though the excitement of meeting Geet in just few days was always with him….

8 days has passed and Maan and geet's room were completely redone…. It looked completely lively now with white and lavender curtains all around… flowers being changed in room everyday… Paintings in the room changed to make it look more like a home than some dry place….

Annie needed Their marriage picture but their marriage was in temple and Annie was not present their and as Maan never cared about their marriage picture before he have to make some excuse… but he wanted it now… he remembered Brij took the pictures so he got it from Brij….

They got their nice couple picture enlarged and framed it and it was placed in the center of the room…..

Other marriage pictures were together placed on different frame in design… In all room looked entirely different….

Next day passed slowly for Maan and fast for Geet as she wanted to drag the time to meet him…. What were his new intentions……. she wondered….

Then the day arrived… the flight will arrive tonight at 11 pm…. Maan was racing in his room from 6 in the evening… his heart beating so fast… never had he thought that meeting Geet, his own wife wouch make him so nervous, but he tried to keep his calm.

In his eagerness he reached his the airport at 10:00 pm, in black shirt… sleeves folded to 3 quarter and jeans at bottom …. He just waited in VIP waiting area only unaware that he was a great eye food for the young Delhi girls…

Geet knew that Dadima and Annie will come to receive her as that's what she was told…

After all check ups and custom and making Maan wait for 2 hrs she was out at 12:00 am…. Maan anyways didn't mind that wait… he had waited too long patiently…. The momnet he saw her from far a relief ran thru him… but oblivious of his watch Geet hugged Meera and then Yash…. Yash!!!! Maan closed his fist tightly to control himself at the view….. no he will not mention this to Geet… Yash and Meera left from there…

Geet didn't realise why heart heart started beating as she approached the receiving area and then she felt someone tapped her shoulder from behind…Geet who was already nervous after Yash and Meera left jumped when some one tapped her… She turned around to only find Maan something she had been fearing all along…. Meeting him…

Maan smiled at her…. Geet was completely shocked…. She has seldom seen him smile and his smile to her was beyond her imagination…. She did not know how to respond… She somehow uttered

"aa--- aapp" Maan had waited too long for this time…. He just hugged her… confusing Geet more… she was actually scared now… something really serious going inside his mind…

"Why… I just came to receive my wife…." Some strange sensation… an akward sensation ran thru her veins…. He was openly refering her as his wife… everything was so weird…. She was so confused that she forgot to give him a smile back even just as formality….

She somehow separated herself from him… she immediately decided she has to not give into his trap this time as this looked like amore dangerous trap… if she goes in this flow of his he will be able to break her completely badly…

She sterned her voice "I thought anni and Dadima would come…" Maan took her luggage cart from her hand….

"I wanted to give you a surprise…. " "I will carry… it's OK…" "No its not OK…. I will carry….. well how did you like this surprise"

Geet's head was now spinning with this new Maan and she felt even more suffocated….

She decided to keep quiet for her piece of mind…. Ufff… just landed to Delhi and the suffocation started surrounding me …..

"well… tumne jawab nahi diya" she was feeling irritated now… "how can he fake so much"

"Unexpected" she answered stiffly…. "I will carry my luggage…. Please give it to me"

But Maan did not give it to her… she was quiet and he knew he have to take all the initiative…. He now knew at how much fault he was …. it was now his responsibility to re build their relation….

Both were quiet in the car… Maan knew Geet was hurt by his behaviour but he had never expected such cold behavior from Geet…. It was beyond his imagination that Geet can behave so cold to him.. she had always bowed down to his wishes… not bowing down in front of him but he had expected a soft Geet as always…. But she surprised him completely…. But he have to keep his calm… what has changed Geet so much… she was never like this… what has London done to his ever submissive Geet…. He was completely unaware of Geet's resolution to keep herself away and safe from his new emotional trap … he only knew he has hurt her but to what extent only Geet knew

Maan was not going to give up and let this silence dominate between them again…. He also had deep urge to feel her… he crassed her hair on her face only to make Geet jump…

"How was you journey Geet… kuch to bataoo…. Aur London trip, how was it"

Geet had decided, she maintained her cool "London trip was great…. Busy but great"

He wanted to know more of her view "Aur meri yaad to aiyee hee hogee wahan… busy thee I undertand and that's why we had so little of talk"

"aapp mujhe kabse samajhne lage Maan…. I know you want to head up this talk to something but aabb aur nahi…" she thought

"Nahi who actually I was so busy aur phir mere friends, kisis ko bhi yaad kerne ka fursat hee kahan mila…. Too hectic you know"

Maan was completely taken aback…. "what has happened to Geet…." The Geet he knew and whom he was expecting… this was completely different….

He tried to speak something but now his voice was not coming out… he was completely shocked….

After a while he managed "I missed you" he paused "every moment " he somehow managed again. Geet did not reply.

Next to be continued

Precap: "Stop it… please" she some how managed to say

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan needs to try harder..love Geets resolution to keep her self safe.. He needs to build her trust again...
Edited by Saj110 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Now you realy have to update this first please please you are just great
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm luving how geet is cold with him but not rude :)
Hope maan doesn't misunderstand geet's cold behaviour.
Since yash is in the picture, I wudn't want maan to think otherwise.
Hopefully maan will only take her attitude as a reaction of what he has done to her.

Story is awesome but I think it's getting complicated.
Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago

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