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Congrats on the new thread dear...and waiting for the next update...
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Thanks to -Piya for awsome poster for my FF and Thanks to Rachna(water) for the beautiful poem she wrote for our Geet in this FF.
Thanks to all my readers. it all your comments in this FF that makes this FF special for me and this I am saying from all my heart.
240 likes... I am so so so happy. Please keep showering your support with likes and comments as you have been doing.
I read each comments at least twice and get in feel with your comments dears.
Luv U All
--Anu
Part 13
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A Poem for Geet:
Innocent Heart
Innocent
Her Innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Ever since she had known him
Ever since she had felt his presence
Ever since she had felt his pain
Ever since she had felt his restlessness
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
He was the only one for her
His ego, his anger, his rejection
It was all hers and only hers
She accepted it all with an open heart
She accepted it all with her outstretched arms
She accepted it all because that is all she got from him
She accepted it all because it was all unknown to her
She accepted it all because her heart had given him all the rights
Just to him, because
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Days became months and months became years
She grew up into a beautiful woman
And he into a handsome man
She loved him day after day
He hated her night after night
One day destiny played a game and married them together
She knew that she loved him
Loved him with the last breath of her selfless soul
She knew that he hated her
Hated her with the last breath of his heartless soul
Yet, her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Every minute, every hour, every day
He kept on tormenting and torturing her
With his silence and with his cruel words
She died a little breath by breath
She died a little day by day
She died a little night after night
Her eyes became soulless and hollow
Her heart became as numb as a hard stone
Her tears got stuck in her throat
Her breath got suffocated in her soul
With immense pain pricking her mind, body and soul
She lost it, lost it all
Her love, her patience and her strength
She lost it, lost it all
Her selfless soul that only used to beat for him
Today, she is no longer innocent
Her innocent heart that only used to beat for him
Has drowned, drowned in the reality of his cruelness
In reality of his hatred and resentment
In reality of his anger and ego
Her innocent heart and her innocent soul
Are far away, far away from him.
-Rachana-


Not knowing how to stand there she runs to the balcony' she feels like she will faint '. she tries to hold the chair and stabilizes herself. At that very moment her heart goes completely in remorse from Maan. Her heart becomes hard as stone at that very moment with no feeling or the love for him or it goes so deep in darkness that she is not at all able to recognize.

"Didn't even listen to my words and she ran away'. How dare she do this to Maan Singh Khurana"

After finishing his work, he doses off while Geet just don't want to come to the room' the suffocation in it will kill her.

She doses off in the balcony itself' doesn't know when. The wind is a little chilly but Geet can take anything now other than going near him, sharing room with him.

Maan wakes up at his regular early hour time and finds no Geet'. His heart skip the beat' he is used to see Geet sleeping beside him in his bed when he wakes up'. He goes all around and find Geet sleeping in Balcony, a relief runs thru him.

"Crazy" and he leaves for his Gym work.

Geet wakes up with her alarm and she sits there for few minutes just to register everything that happened last night' she suddenly feel she is strong enough to handle his torture as she feels she is not able to feel for him now'. The emotion has drifted far away.

Geet gets ready for her office'.. She comes back at night and brings her office work to home too'. Maan comes in the room and Geet doesn't even move or lift up her face to see him' she just keeps herself busy with her work'. She cannot hate the person whom she had loved so madly but her heart is not affected by him now'.. he had completely broken it to feel love for him even if there is any'. Maan feels it little awkward but ignores.

Geet is feeling relaxed these days as she has completely made herself not to get affected by Maan. She has made a separate world for herself' She starts enjoying her life in office and at home with Annie and Dadima'. She doesn't tell about their difference to anyone. She decides she needs to be happy'. Happy for her family who does anything to keep her happy' How Brij Veerji wanted to marry her just to give her a better life. She will not be sad as that would dishearten her family. If they know Maan humiliated her this way they will be briken as Papaji has lots of trust on Maan. She had handled it but they will not be able to handle it. So after lot of thought She decides she needs to be happy.

Maan on the other hand is getting little restless with Geet's complete ignorance'.. his ego will not let him approach her but he is not able to digest. His obsessivness is also increasing'. Urge to make her his is making him restless'.

One day in the mornig'. Geet is making her hair infront of mirror, while Maan comes out from bath with towel on only'. He has a his typical fragrance ON. In earlier times Geet would not be able to resist and would steel glance at him he knows that but it is not the case now with Geet' he intentionally comes near her in front of mirror, brushes his shoulder to her in order to take his comb. He tries to see her reaction but Geet only moved to the other side to pick her file.

Maan is not able to digest her indifference towards him. Geet on the other hand don't want to give him any chance to humiliate her, she is completely able to handle herself against him and his charm as her heart has gone completely remorse from his feeling'

In office Geet as usual always have a great time, with praises, acknowledgment and friends love and care.

Days passes by' Maan in tries many indirect ways to seduce her'. Ways which will make any girl fall on her knees to have him but Geet shows no interest. Her indifference towards him makes him more inviting towards her, only that his ego will not allow him to approach her directly. In other words he has completely fallen for her but his ego stops him to talk or take initiative or to accept it. He is Maan singh Khurana and he has the power to control himself '.. his ego says and that's what is stopping him.

One day in Geet's office, Geet , Yash and Meera are called by her boss.

Boss:"See guys, your this project is almost coming to an end' Like it will end in a month and I have a new very challenging project coming up and I want to put you all three in that"

Yash:"sure sir I will love to take the new challenge"

Geet is also happy along with Meera.

Boss:"But before we start you three wil have to go to London for the knowledge Transfer process for 3 months as we are taking this project from different company who were already working on this project. So think over it and whatever is your descision let me know by tomorrow. We will need to starts Visa processing ASAP"

Geet goes to her seat and thinks for a while and the decides that this is the best way to take her away from the daily suffocation. She is not affected by his presence but still staying together with him daily is suffocation. She really need these three months of fresh air to breath in and and get some fresh energy to face this daily suffocation thru her life. She has decided she will Go.

Geet doesn't feel a need to inform Maan and doesn't want to let him know as he may creat a hindrance. He can do anything to make her feel low, she thinks as he hates her.

But then she decides to let him know as Dadima and family will question her if they knows she did not inform him.

So that night

"I have something to tell you"

Maan's happiness knows no bound, he is very sure Geet is talking about their relationship and this time he is not going to talk any foolish.

"Go ahead" he says sternly but still softer than earlier times.

"It's regarding my office assignment" Maan's all hope goes in shatter' after so many days and this is what she has to talk to me'. He gets irritated

"Listen, I have told you earlier I am not at all interested in your office or job or career' neither do I object you regarding that, do what ever you are doing'. and please don't waste my and your time with that talk"

"so you don't want to listen" "No, don't you understand" he is really irritated.

No one is happier then Geet'. It was her duty to tell him, he didn't listen and now she is free of her duty. She decides she will make sure he doesn't know about her trip before she leaves as she was scared he won't free her.

In irritation Maan gets more busy with his work which she thinks is in her favor.

Geet informs Dadima and her family. When they asked her about Maan's view

"Unhe koi aitraaz nahi hai' he said it's my career and I should take my descision regarding it'. Aura bb applog unhe isbat me jyada pareshan na hee Karen' khud itne bust hain who aajkal"

It was neither lie nor true. She convinces everyone and her Visa goes for processing. She makes all her plan with Yash and Meera of their stay there.

Yash:"Your husband is not objecting right'. very supportive of hnn."

Geet gave a smile: "He doesn't interfere in my career' I am lucky in that way"

She doesn't want more questions or curiousity' she just want to be free'. It's only 3 months but that will give her energy to survive when she comes back.

Next to be continued

Precap: Maan comes back from week long trip, Geet gone to London
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey congo on d new thread nd awesume part. Will comment in detail later
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃😃superbb ! 😃😃 Now i really want maan to regret .. he should be very guilty and work very har in order to get back geet and i don't want geet to forgive him so easily 😉 .. precap is superb .. he comes back and she is gone .. once again he will regret not listening to her .. i wonder what will happen if her gets to know she is gone to london for 3 MONTHS AND THAT TOO WITH YASH hahahahahahahhaha 😆😆😆😆 loved it 👏👏👏👏

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