FF -MAHSOOS- MAAN & GEET- THREAD 4

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

lovely update stupid NT😡

POOR MAAN😭

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lovelycutietedy

@lovelycutietedy

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

awsome...

i hate nt very much

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

i hate NT DEAR

PLS MAKE SR SON

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

hey chooo cute maaneet scene as usual...
NT 😡 ullu,dog😆...she take geet with her...
looking fwd...

wanna more update😉...

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

"People should fall in love with their eyes closed. Just close your eyes. Don't look and it's magic"
? Andy Warhol

i came across this quote and i was like omg " MAHSOOS ". it was instant affinity for me for this quote with your FF.

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its been a while since i have read an FF by you ( i read animosity and siski ) . Mahsoos is showing how much you have grown as a writer. you always had the emotions and sensitivity with your characters but with " Mahsoos " you are writing much more thoughtfully, your each and every character is well rounded and as a reader i can empathize with them all . eg. Rano and her reasonings for not telling Geet about Maan's blindness. also the way Geet has embraced Maan and his special way of looking at life.

thank you for a superb FF.

gitz.