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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story
is Nt ki to main😡
plz continue soon
Edited by prerna1 - 13 years ago
Dilsay thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me waiting🤗😍
it is taking so long to open up pages of India forum...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Yayy..u r updating..
yaar..is NT ka kuch karna..kabab mei haddi banke aa jaati hai har baar..huhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya do sumthing so tht NT doesn't speak ill of maan
braking geet's heart
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

too good!!!!!!!!

waiting for next

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Posted: 13 years ago
i really am loving this ff.hate this naintar to the core.
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Posted: 13 years ago

MAHSOOS...... Part 39
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PLEASE LISTEN TO THE SONG BEFORE READING THIS... specially the meaning...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjABi97oG2U[/YOUTUBE]

He slowly drops his finger on the long White big grand piano key. The polish reflected every cell of his long hard nails, creating a beautiful image. His mind wondered around geets question... How does he mahsoos her? How does he know where she is...
"mahsoos..." he whispered, inhaling geets aroma as she came and sat next to him.
"I am sorry" geet whispered back.
He could feel her soft hand, curling around his strong chest.
"I have missed you" maan took her hand, hiding between his and gently kissed, while his dark eyes looked somewhere.
"where were we?"
"somewhere" she rests her head on maans shoulder, "how do you mahsoos me maan?"

Maan gently pressed on one of the key, then another then another until a beautiful melody that touched her heart.

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho
Tum yun

Now what could he say, it's mahsoos... It's there mahsoos that couldn't be explained.
Geets eyes twinkled while she listens with concentration. Her heart aced to here further, fascinated the way he express his feeling.

Jitna mehsoos karoon
Utna hi paa bhi loon

He stood up, looking straight pass her dark brown eyes, taking her soft hand in-between his, pulling her in the middle of the hollo wooden room. Feeling every escaping heat from her sweet body. His hand burned with power that he couldn't imagine. Her new smell covered his body, a pheromones that he could never forget. Its secured In to the most scariest part in the brain.

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, tukmko main jeeta hoon




Geet slowly twists around while he engulfs her from the back. The warmth, how can he explain? The way she move her hand, gliding like a snake, teasing him. Her innocent, the sweet voice, his heart is nothing, it could never be anything. Her lips, the feeling of his hard finger, running along her fragile skin.

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
hmmm...
Aaah haa aa...




Kahin se kahin ko bhi
Aao bewajah chale
Poochhe bina kisi se
Hum mile

Bandishe naa rahi koi baaqi
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere, saath mere ho
Tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karooon tumko, utna hi paa bhi loon
Oooh hoo hoo...





Kis tarah chheenega aa mujh se ye jahaan tumhe
Tum bhi ho main
Kya fiqar ab humein

His face looked at her, a pain, a fear that he may loose her. But what can this world do if she is with him...

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon
Oooh hoo ho...

Maan rests his palm against her cheek. Feeling her. The feeling of her absence in his body, in his mind, in his every cell, it's indigestible. He suppress him self further, engulfing her warmness. "you are beautiful to me..." he whispered on her lips.
"did you wright that song for me?" geets eyes twinkled with tears. It's painful, it's hunting, it's a love that she couldn't possibly describe. A mahsoos of there self.

"yes"
Geets mind went dead, whole while she was so lost in every rhythm, every line of her husbands sweet lips, a sweet mahsoos, a feeling she did not want to feel. Her life...

<<<<<>>>>>>


NT stood there gazing upon the couple. A tear escaped, his song for geet, the hidden love in those words, the hidden mahsoos, she could possibly not think about taking geet way. She looked at them from the edge of the door, stating at maans eyes,thinking the unthinkable... Slowly slipping way...

"dev?" he stood behind her, the song he did not miss either... It was maans heart, a song that would bring tears in anyone eyes. A mahsoos that he could not put it in any other way.
"why are you here?" dev came to straight to the point.
"to see my sister!"
"that's a surprise!"
NT held her stomach and was slowly cutting off when dev holds her arm angrily. "leave. Seeing you only kills me each and every second." a red eye looked at her with pain which surly NT couldn't take. His pain was reflecting out of her eyes...
"I am leaving soon!"
NT walked of when dev stops her again. "happy anniversary!" he whispered and hurried off.
He locks the door, opening the big wardrobe, taking a picture out. He still couldn't believe how easily she broke there 5 years old relationship... Without any words, without any reason... And what a coincident... The day of there anniversary is the day of bebo and shorias anniversary... Then what she is doing here?

<<<<>>>>

A tear drop from geets eyes brought back maan to the reality. He looked at his darkness. His hand came up, flowing a trail of her skin to the face. "what happen? Why are you crying?" his head was straight, looking somewhere, but not geets face which made her giggle... "and you are laughing?"
"it's nothing!"
"but it's something..."
"why don't you help me to wright something for armaan to kripa.."
"hmm..."
"the mahsoos you feel for me..." she smiled, pulling his hand and then to there bedroom. Maan locks the door while geet took a notepad and a pen, hopping on to the bed. She sat between maans leg, resting her self completely in his embrace while he leaned on the bed. Geet covered there body with a fluffy duvet, then rested the pad on her thigh, over a pillow...
"what shall I wright?" she questions again. Looking up, smiling. Maan bends forward, slowly feeling her dimple and then gently pecked.
"I never wrote anything like that!" geet started to chew the other end of the pen and made a thoughtful face.
"but you wrote a song for me..."
"yes, that's for you. It's from my heart..." geet blushed instantly.
Maan could feel how the heat of her body rapidly increased and decreased along with the pounding heart. She twists, gently giving him a peck... "then tell me something from your heart now..."



Through out the night geet couldn't stop thinking about maans each word, his each touch while they made love. Her mind wondered again to the song he wrote, a song which surprised her again. How much surprise this man will give it to her now.

Next morning, geets heart refuged to leave maans warmness. Hiding her self in him was the first priority. She felt like a fairy tail, yet there was so much to discover... And most importantly .. Can she tell this to her friends, that her husband is blind... How will they react?
"you have to go." he gently told her yet refuge to let go.
"no! Can I skip collage today!" maan smiles and nodes a no. Geet observed his face, while he looked somewhere. " why I can't take my self out of that song. out of you" she questioned.
Maan parts his lips to answer, and smiles "it's time for you to go.." geet makes a baby gave and before she disappeared she came quickly giving a passionate kiss.

"let's go home..," maan instructed the driver. It's have been long since his life turned upside down. A beautiful feeling that he him self was lacking in words. He did quick work before mr John called for a meeting to have a conference in a collage, surprisingly it's geets collage.

Geet happily brought out the not on the lunch table. She was proud of his words, proudly saying "it's done by my husband!"
"well.. Let's here it!"
"well I changed it to kripa!"
"go on"
geet looked at the paper.. it just sounded perfect from hr husband lips then her... she was simply lacking emotion..."I never knew the feeling of mahsoos until when my heart felt the burning gaze of your staring deep in my heart. I never thought I could smell you in nothing..., finding you in a crowd of people with my eyes close. I Never knew your voice, your sweet voice would be this special to my heart that with your each word my pounding heart skips several beats. I don't need eyes to love you, to feel you because I can always mahsoos you..." geet whispered while she spoke... falling for her husband further.
"armaan I need to tell you something..."
Armaan who was lost in the words. His half mouth open...

<<<>>>
"conference?"


"yes. It's been planned. Haven't you study?" maan rubbed his forehead. Trying his best to think. His concentration was so low yesterday, which mean he forgot! Now that's rare, that's not like him. Maan was still lost in geet.
John smiled "maybe honeymoon" he laughed & walked out.

Maan stood there little confused. He never have been like this! Never!


i am so scared of this part..
like bitting my nail.. i couldn't explain the song
thats why i added the link... please do listen..
and please say how you feel.. me really scared
& thank you so much for the lovely comments & like... i willl update more :)
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

fantastic update😊 n the song is too good 👏 finally NT understood that she is for no reason taking geet but nw pls maan don't create any space btw maaneet because of this meeting forget part nw i m waiting when geet get angery on maan that he has not told that he is coming to her college i want this time maan manofy geet 😉

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
superb
no owrds to say at all
adorable dear
oh now NT understood there love
and what is between dev and nt dear
now honeymoon
pls dear giive SR for us
sson dear
plsss
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Posted: 13 years ago
just came online & saw your update

wonderful part

each n every lyrics were very much connecting to the mahssos maan has for geet 👏

good that NT will back off from maneet now ⭐️

poor dev feel bad for him but glad you didn't drag dev-Nt scene too much

hope this conference will not create some MU between maneet 😵
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago

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