SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

😆 My song bug, for this update.

Its so haunting, retro and all in all utterly irrelevant to the scene I'm writing. Not sure how its going to turn out 😆.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R1oQYnwoJq0[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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Sphinx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Hi . Please do continue. Indian folk lore with maan and geet in it is going to be awesome.

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

wow this is a new ground altogether...where do you get all these novel ideas ?

pls do continue this...would love to read your take on this😊

so no woman is to touch Maan, eh?

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
wow this is a new ground altogether...where do you get all these novel ideas ?

pls do continue this...would love to read your take on this😊

so no woman is to touch Maan, eh?

Ah! Thanks...

No. That is the initial understanding that no woman is to touch him. But Maan figures out the flaw in it later.

Well if its really a curse or not, that's what the Paheli is...isn't it? 😆

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

maan is caring in his own way

i like the way you wrote their emotions...he is accepting the change in breakfast, but does not want it to be for some thing in return

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Escapist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

There are moments when even the silliest things bring tears to your eyes and you're left to wonder why when I was so hurt that tears didn't sting my eyes...

And sometimes the pain is so excruciatingly painful that it leaves you numb...emotional pain is far more painful and distraught that physical pain seems nothing in front of it! She cried out of emotions today and not due to the sharp knife that caused the bleeding...well it could have been the other way round too that she just couldn't cry even though its paining...emotions seriously create a havoc in an individuals life!

Dunno why the only word somehow ringing in my mind after reading this update is emotion and pain!

Cheers,
Fatima

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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Great update...

i liked the new idea too.. I am so excited about the new one.. 😛

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Awww... if only they talked more. But then what would the diary do 😛

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

That complexity that you brought out in them, after the unexpected night ritual they shared , is brilliant..

oh loved how much more guarded they are, yet so much more vulnerable.. the way he cancelled his trip at once but did not tell her, and the way she felt soo hurt when she thought he didn't acquiesce immediately.. feels like raging tears are on the verge of falling.. aww

both want closure ;).. and new beginnings where they can let their desires , feelings show at will.. **sigh**

the new idea , is very interesting.. do continue with it.

PS: that song 😆.. its a trick you know.. the tune, the wordings beckon , while the accented singer makes you think if you re taking it too seriously.. kinda like what I would feel if I were reeling from a bit serious breakup, drank a bit too many and ended up with red sunglasses in psychedelic retro bar.. 😆