SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: 6thElement
All those who stalked the thread asking me to update...where are your comments?

Good or bad, two words is always better than none. It seems to me you guys are forcing me to act on my thoughts to start PMing the updates only to those who comment. Perhaps I should just act on it. 😃
Let me try something today first...I'm going to make it a members only post.

Hasini

It seems our timings differ 😊 But I am glad i got to read this in the morning, it definitely gave me my dose of happiness and food for thought for the day ...

Commenting on comments till now, will follow soon with comment on the update 😊

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

I am wondering if this is a step forward or backward for their relationship..

Loving all the emotions suppressed within them - their restlessness, anger, anticipation and attraction.

That her actions had changed overnight was noticeable. Everything speaks about them beautifully - the cancellation of the trip, the making of breakfast, the visit to the doctor, the silent realisation of sharing the milk,cookie and secrets and wish of doing it again, the knife-cut and the reaction - just that they need to speak to each other which is the hardest of all.I found Nakul's new found strngth of voice hilarious.

I wonder what made Gurvinder change his mind. Insecurity?

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Why do I feel my words always fall short of doing justice to the appreciation for your writing?

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago

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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Awesome update...loved it...

Nice Stotyline... when are you planning to start yr new SS..

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

very nice update hasini..good going..i just wish Maan Geet opened up to each other a wee bit more..only if they did that, every misunderstanding between the of them, coming because of miscommunication & lack of judgment on each others part, would not happen..the love is there between the two of them, all they need is one push, to get them talking... kyunke sochne waali baat yeh hai kii Maan Geet though know each other only for a little while have so much of understanding then think if they start talking verbally, when the communication between the two of them starts, i'am sure all the misunderstandings will fly out of the wind the window & the ball, the game of love, the feelings will pour themselves out...very well written dear..beautifully expressed...keep up the good work going...nice...very good...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly...😊

P.S: & i think in the next update Maan will surely join Geet for her daily routine bourbon biscuit with milk in the moon light...just my guess...😍

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

uh oh oh
so channi is in trouble and is here for help.
I suppose Maaneet are bent upon misunderstanding each other.
Geet misunderstood Maan's concern and thought he was avoiding the topic of conversation.
Maan thought all Geet's attempts to open up were intended for something else
Though geet's mission help Channi is kind of accomplished her mission get wramer with Maan has not.
It has turned bad i suppose
Wonder whats going to happen next
Continue soon.

Paheli sounds very interesting.
Hope we get to read the story soon
eagerly waiting for the story

Sorry for the late comments

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Shalini

@shalini01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

wow very, very interesting new SS you have coming up there, im so excited and part 8 was great, do continue soon.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: ninand
That complexity that you brought out in them, after the unexpected night ritual they shared , is brilliant..

oh loved how much more guarded they are, yet so much more vulnerable.. the way he cancelled his trip at once but did not tell her, and the way she felt soo hurt when she thought he didn't acquiesce immediately.. feels like raging tears are on the verge of falling.. aww

both want closure ;).. and new beginnings where they can let their desires , feelings show at will.. **sigh**

the new idea , is very interesting.. do continue with it.

PS: that song 😆.. its a trick you know.. the tune, the wordings beckon , while the accented singer makes you think if you re taking it too seriously.. kinda like what I would feel if I were reeling from a bit serious breakup, drank a bit too many and ended up with red sunglasses in psychedelic retro bar.. 😆

Ah! Glad you liked it. I was a little skeptical about writing it, because somehow I couldn't bring myself to paint a rosy picture between the two right away.

You are so right in the way you have described their current state. It's more like they carry this 'I don't have to tell you anything that you should already know' attitude.

New beginnings...the word draws me to write up more soon, so that I can see the same for these two.

For the song...Oh! lord I'm so drunk on it by now. It's still running in the background as I comment.
Thanks Ninand.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: ivre
Read the whole thing in one go
Pretty descriptive writing... good language and choice of words especially, something that is rare on this forum :)
Good work

Good to see you here. Thanks :) you have succinctly given me what I wanted to hear 'for now'. Would love to hear more from you.

Thanks gurl!

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: ananya95
awesome updt
just luvd it
omg dat gurvinder is such a cheap guy
awww maan so protective of geet & her injuries
luving d lil realizations abt maan of geet
cont soon!

Thank Ananya :)

Well, I really hope the realizations are bigger and that much sooner.